The Chronicles of Nimo #02 - p10 (storyboard) (Patreon)

Here you see I framed a bit differently in the final mix, like for panel 1. I just realize I rather the 2 separated balloons for panel 5, as it comes in panel 4: it fills the empty space pretty well. That's way better than what I did. 

Lesson to learn: always look back at the storyboard when finalizing a page! XD