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The Chronicles of Nimo - Chapter 2 - p04 (Patreon)

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2022-05-09 18:58:03
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2024-02-01 11:34:03
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Page 03 < * ___* > Page 05 

Chapter 1 start / Chapter 2 start

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Thomas Polk

Just an appetizer???

Thomas Polk

Yes, the English needs a reworking. I can help but I would need to know the whole story concept. The words in the middle have to relate to the beginning and the end to keep the context, direction and tone.

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>>84076287

Thanks for the help, well I need to re-write it first, as I see improvement, it differs already from the original script & storyboard. I din't remember it was tricky to tell a tale in the past form + what should have been done. I get back to you when I focus on the dialogues, thanks Thomas!