"Double Gyaru Cosplayers GO!" English edition test (Patreon)

Hello my Patrons and Readers! (This is an open post for everyone)

In this summer, Miki and LUNA, two Gyaru heroines from "Double Gyaru Cosplayers" were in action again, wearing monster catching trainer costume.

I'd already shown you some pics with Japanese text...

Then now, I can show you English version of it!

This is a first test pic of "Double Gyaru Cosplayers GO!" English edition.

How do you think about it?
I'm worry about... "Manga" text layout (Right-UP to Left-Down) suits CG artwork like this...or not.
I could put text Left to Right... but for original art made in Manga style, Miki (a gyaru in right) starts to talk first. So it is hard to start text from Left.

I feel current pic is not so bad... (at least you can read them Up to Bottom) but if it too confuses you to reading, I would like to hear your opinions.

Well,

Anyway, I'll make more Miki and Runa arts with English!

I hope to raise this project to a CG Collection with reasonable volume.

For it will be sub-project, proceeding may be slow... but I hope you enjoy them as Patreon exclusive work!

If you are not a Patron yet and love Miki and Luna, why not  join us?

Thank you!