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I'm thinking a straight-hentai comic of college teens for coming Winter Comic Market.


I'll draw some idea sketches for the project, and will choose one idea.

Here is third sketch!


http://rebisdungeon.com/Patreon/idea03.jpg



Again, the English text is not written by the translator, but me.(So it may be bad! he-he)


In this time, the idea is themed on cute faced girls, with sweet and lovely atmosphere.



(1) Oil Massage


(2) Double Gyaru Cosplayers


(3) Double Titty Stepsisters



Which idea do you like? Please tell me your opinions!

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Superjustinbros

Aw sweet! I like that you'll be including a dark-skinned girl~

Smyling Beast

It's definately a tough choice. I like the idea of the curvy step-sisters a lot, they're both as adorable as they are bodacious. The gyaru cosplayers were excellent too, but I've decided my vote will have to go to the step-sisters, simply because they both have such unique personalities and charms :) You blew my mind with their cute character designs, it almost makes me feel guilty about thinking perverted thoughts about them n_n;; Also, I'm a sucker for the "light and dark" dynamic, it would be exciting to see each girl's increasingly raunchy attempts to outdo the other, in order to win the favour of their Onii-chan. And of course, as anyone will know after reading the likes of Anime Tamae, you write scenarios with dual heroines particularly well :)

Oxdarock

My vote goes to stepsisters because they're adorable at a glance. XD

Sousuke Drake

dang this is tough, the step sister one sounds really nice, have some 1 on 1 action with each girl and end it with a 3way. Although I still like the setting of the massage parlor, It has a lot of possibility, for the people that liked the cosplayers, lets say that the oil Massage guy opens a private massage booth at a big anime/game convention and offer free massages to female cosplayers.... I just like the Oil massage because it has some nice opportunity's for sequels. I'll have to think about which one to vote for

Anonymous

If the Double TItty Stepsisters involve catgirl cosplay then it's gonna have be that.

Anonymous

I vote step-sisters

ShockInfantry

Maybe we can mash it all together and form an Oil Massage for Double Gyaru Stepsisters Cosplayers?

Ada Bee

Double Gyaru Cosplayers! I would love to see more slutty gyaru versions of sexy videogame girls.

Malhavoc

Holy cow I love the Stepsister idea!

Anonymous

Overall I think the stepsisters has the most comedic but also erotic edge to it. Girls with total devotion to their Onii-chan with none of the complications! Oil Massage is a bit too straightforward, and NTR/Cuckolding is a pretty polarizing fetish in the USA and UK regardless of who's cheating who. Cosplayers is cute, but I don't want to make ya just do gyaru licensed characters over and over. What I would take from though, is replacing one of the other girls. I like both Mapo and Milisa, but having the same type of twintails is kinda boring. Maybe give Milisa the twintails as the massage girl, or give her wide ones like RJ-chan/Ryuujou.

Grew89

I'd like to see the stepsisters idea. Because I rather see how they spoil their brother (in case its one) after a (for example) long day at work or something. Also making them both individual looking. Like one is a bit older, one is kinda younger. To have some diversity.

Saehrimnir

Hm, again, I like this one, but I personally think the first potential candidate had the strongest impact. I'm personally not a big fan of NTR elements, but since you aren't either, I don't think that would be the main thrust of the story. That, and a bimbo-ish college girl being seduced with aphrodisiac lotions and oils... I might like that sort of story element ;)

Anonymous

Voting for step sisters.

Jake

Oil massage, because you draw the most amazing oiled bodies.

Anonymous

step sisters, but the cosplay gyaru is a close second. How about a quartet up all night party watching hentai? Or, perhaps a car wash fundraiser with the girls in wet white t-shirts and cut off jean shorts? :D