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Idea Sketch for Next Comike (Patreon)

Published:
2015-09-25 23:56:18
Imported:
2020-09

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Now I'm thinking two comics for coming Winter Comic Market.

One will be Futanari comic, Prina series.

And one will be a straight-hentai comic of college teens!


I'll draw some idea sketches for the project, and will choose one idea.

Here is one of those sketches!


http://rebisdungeon.com/Patreon/idea01.jpg


Oh, the English text is not written by the translator, but me.

So please tell me about bad English you notice. I'll fix it... hehe.


(Why not "Hypno College Girls Project" for next Winter Comike? Because CG collection is not so good at Comic Market. Comic book will be better. I hope to finish "Hypno College Girls Project" at early 2016)

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Saehrimnir

English-ho! (also, others feel free to disagree with me ;) ) "Does... does that oil massage reduce my b...breasts?" This would probably work better in English with something more like "W... will this oil massage really reduce my b... breast's size?" or even "...my b... bust?" Idea Sketch "NTR Oil-massage for huge tits college girls", in English, I'd be tempted to say "huge titted college girl", not because it's completely proper, but it rolls off the English speaking tongue more naturally. "You are the owner of the small massage salon… you don’t do ordinary massages… you do nasty sex-massages for voluptuous teens secretly!" Salon could be correct, but in English we tend to call places that provide massages, parlors, so we'd probably say "You are the owner of a small massage parlor..." changing the second "the" to an "a" because unless the name of the place was "Small Massage Parlor", it sounds strange to us. "Today’s customer is an athlete type collage girl, who hopes to reduce her huge tits, because her boyfriend like small tits. Then, you’ll do special “NTR” massage for her…!!" Here, "athlete type" works, but in English, "an athletic college girl" would probably sound better. "who hopes to reduce her huge tits" is also a little awkward sounding, in English something like "who hopes to reduce the size of her tits" would probably work better. If I was editing this, this is what I'd probably change it to myself, Will… will this oil-massage really reduce my b… bust? Idea Sketch NTR Oil-massage for huge titted college girls You are the owner of a small massage parlor… you don’t do ordinary massages… you give nasty sexual-massages to voluptuous teens secretly! Today’s customer is an athletic collage girl, who hopes to reduce the size of her huge tits, because her boyfriend likes small tits. You’ll give her a special “NTR” massage…!! Of course I’ll solve your problem!

Rebis
>>831281

Wow, many thanks for your proof reading! Now I'm going to bed, but will read your text and fix the text in the pic after I wake up! XD

Sousuke Drake

More Prina would be welcome, but If I could only choose one, I'd like to see how the second one turns out, It could be an entertaining new series with sexy new girls every volume, I'm thinking far into the future here, but If you ever do a sequel to the Straight-hentai comic,"which hasn't been made yet" I'd like to see a Futanari girl getting a nice massage at that parlor, It would still be straight with the girl receiving a sexy massage, only this time the girl would have a dick!

simplemangafan

If you go with that oil massage idea, I would totally read it. I love all your work, but its always nice to try out new things from time to time.

Randomguy664

I have questions about this actually. A) The common belief in Japan (at least among high school students and hentai artists) is that massaging a girl's breasts would make them bigger. So why would this girl even consider getting a breast massage? B) Instead of a traditional sort of NTR story, how about the girl gains confidence in her breasts and sexual skill to impress her boyfriend, and continues to get massages to maintain that confidence? So kind of a happy ending for all involved instead of the girlfriend getting stolen. A lot of NTR stories make me feel bad. Feeling sad or bad makes it hard to masturbate. C) Your moniker and nickname both are references to something about hermaphrodites in Alchemy. The majority of your work is futanari, and the majority of your fan base are futanari fans. Why do normal girl stuff at all? So I want the college student to be a futanari girl. A side note: Massage parlors in the US are occasionally fronts for prostitution rings. A customer gets a massage and 'a happy ending', which is usually some sexual favor, blowjob, handob or such. Usually it's guys getting a massage by women, but it's interesting to see the opposite. Maybe the girl asks for a sexual favor in this one, since her boyfriend doesn't like her huge tits.

Smyling Beast

Interesting new idea for the Winter Comike, the massage parlour idea would certainly be entertaining. After reading your thoughts about your next project, I wonder, would you ever consider using characters from the Hypno College Girl Project in a future comic that perhaps told a different story/series of stories than the one in your current CGs? They are wonderful character designs, and I'm sure that many fans would enjoy seeing more of their individual personalities, as well as the ladies' encounters with different erotic scenarios in comic form. A multi-part series about them would be fantastic to see, in my opinion.

Rebis
>>831331

I'll try to draw both Prina and new straight hentai comic for next comike. (Though it is hard!) Male / Futa comics may be also great. Few years ago, I don't like such taste... but recently I can enjoy it. It is possible in the future :)

Rebis
>>831754

Thank you! For my art interests are very whimsy, I carefully starts new projects!

Rebis
>>831866

Because I draw some ideas for next comike, digging this idea too much is not my purpose, but Okay... a)Hmm, I'll draw some excuse in the comic If I choose this idea! b)Thank you for your opinion! But if I change the plot drastically every time a reader suggest something from his taste, I can't draw anything. This idea is NTR, and other ideas will be not NTR. c)Because recently I hope to draw both normal girls and Futa girls. Of course I know some futa-fans may be disappointed, so I keep consolidated works for Prina and Futanari fantasy.

Rebis
>>831895

Yes, I love girls from "Hypno Collge Girls" too , so of course thinking their further stories. But I have to finish the CG collection itself before proceeding. Perhaps their next stage is another CG collection (sequel?) or a new Game Project...?

Nabusco

How about a futa main character?

Saehrimnir
>>832851

Wouldn't that kind of defeat the purpose of doing one futa comic and one non-futa comic ;)

Bo Taffy

I like it. Maybe make the character sexy futa female. That would be awesome!

Rebis
>>836550

Ah, I expected futa requests! Main theme is straight one, but I'm thinking about futa variations...

ShockInfantry

Isn't this Netori since it is "you" who is doing the stealing?

Rebis
>>853781

Ah, yes! "Netori" is correct. Recently we use "NTR" for both "Netori(stealing)" and "Netrorare(stolen)". This comic , is, Netori. You protagonist steal.