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Daring Do comic cover sketch (Patreon)

Published:
2017-06-26 02:57:33
Edited:
2017-07-26 21:57:23
Imported:
2021-01

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I've been working on this story this week and got something solid to start with

BUT the title always turns out to be the hardest part, something related to escaping or being captured would work, like "Daring Do and the escape from...", "and the Perpetual Escape" or "and the Ceaseless Capture", but I'm not really sure. what do you think?

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Buttocher

I like the Ceaseless Capture one. Might go best with the way the story goes.

Jack Smith

the mystery of the forbidden cave

Anonymous

Daring do and the Crystal Dong. C:

Shino
>>5842848

if i ever do a sequel with crystal ponies in it, thats how it will be called

Thrashie

".. Perpetual Escape" sounds best in my opinion. Or maybe "... the Unforeseen Slip"? or something? xp Page looks awesome btw <3

Neoncel

The capture title sounds pretty fun :3

Anonymous

Daring Do and the overwhelming amount of horsecocks and tentacles

Polandball

Hmmm how about "and liquid treasure"?

Shino
>>5846543

thanku, the unforseen slip or something similar sounds nice

Shino
>>5849768

haha, that should help making things clear for those who wonder what it will be about

Shino
>>5854002

i like that, but it kinda suggests that she's looking for that treasure when it's more like she didn't expect to get filled with it

Anonymous

I am guessing from the titles, "Perpetual Escape" and "Ceaseless Capture" the she will be captured for a good while, which both excited and worries me XD. "Perpetual Escape" makes me think she will either, escape only to be captured over and over again, or be constantly "escaping'/struggling. While "Ceaseless Capture" makes me think that she will be unable to escape for a long time. Going with this theme "Unrelenting Trap" or "Unrelenting Escape/Capture" could be good ideas to consider. Another idea, that does not go with the others as much, would be "Unpleasant Surprise/Treasure". Hope this at least gets the ball rolling, feedback is welcome and would help create more ideas ^^. (Sorry if I posted two comments, my first one seems to have vanished for me and I can't seem to find it anywhere)

Shino
>>5856641

that's very helpful, perpetual escape sounds the most fitting for what the story is gonna be like ive never heard of the word unrelenting before but that could work too

Polandball
>>5854002

meaby she thought that its some gold in liquid form, and then discovering tribal truth that gold is in fact stallions virility