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Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Holo-tent.

Thacea

A veritable sea of light.

As far as the eye could see.

A luminous horizon whose brilliance was obstructed only by crowded blades of grass; with jagged edges and sharpened tips as numerous, as dense, as varied, and as chaotic as the spread of wild wheat in the abandoned fields of Yorn.

Confusion quickly set in, followed closely by gross disorientation, as I struggled and failed and struggled again to make sense of it all.

Before finally, my conscious mind gradually caught up to the realities my eyes bore witness to, and a gut-wrenching realization began consuming my heart whole.

As the longer I stared out of this glass enclosure, the more I was able to focus on each individual ‘blade’ of ‘grass’.

Though I would be remiss if I maintained the pretense of humoring those frankly, naive misnomers; purposefully chosen by a mind that waged a futile battle between the world being presented to it and the reality it thought it knew.

A mind that only sought to protect itself from that which was otherwise impossible. A reality that should not exist.

A reality that advocated for a manaless city of fantastical wonders.

A city of towering monoliths.

For how was the reasonable mind supposed to come to terms with the existence of a city as dense in unfathomably towering constructs as a weedseed field at harvest?

Artificial constructs tall enough to be seen from a distance, large enough to obstruct the horizon, and most distressingly of all… numerous enough to be mistaken as but an element of the landscape itself.

Simply put, a mind could not.

At least, not without a gradual buildup of doubt and inferential evidence, courtesy of an entire week’s worth of the reality defying antics of a newrealmer.

This left my mind with little choice but to concede.

And for a regrettably familiar feeling to begin gnawing at the fibers of my very being.

For as we crossed expanse upon expanse of well-kept greenery, soaring just shy of the forest’s canopy within this glass and metal tube, I couldn’t help but to remember that same reality shattering week that all but broke my worldview.

A week of humiliation, of social browbeating, of being thrust into a similarly alien world; save for the lack of care and personability of this particular demonstration.

A week that left me with a feeling of complete and utter…

Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Holo-tent.

Thalmin

…Smallness.

That’s the best way I could describe the feelings of my place at present.

For the closer and closer we got, the easier it was for me to see what lay in front of us.

And it wasn’t a castle or fortress, nor was it a city or town.

It was a temple.

A church.

A monument constructed to light itself.

A construct larger in scale and caliber than anything I’d ever seen or even imagined of.

I’d never felt so small before.

At least, that’s what I wished to believe.

For there were but two instances in my life I remembered feeling anywhere close to this small, this insignificant, this… impotent in the face of overwhelming odds.

And both instances were born out of the Ritual of Fealty, and the brief glimpse we were provided of the heartlands of the Nexus itself.

Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Holo-tent.

Ilunor

No.

No. No. No. No. NO!

How could she have known?

She could not have known.

It is impossible for her to have known.

And yet, what was straight in front of us, no, in front of our sights via the aid of this manaless sight seer… was undeniably… almost undoubtedly…

A bastardized facsimile of the Crownlands.

A place so sanctified that even Nexian natives, and those races sanctified by His Eternal Majesty himself, must wait patiently for entry.

A place that the newrealmer could not have known about. And thus could not have drawn from for inspiration.

So how could I explain the sight that stood before me?

Logic now dictated that there remained one sole option.

That it was genuinely what it was purported to be… an accurate visual record of the world the newrealmer hails from.

Which should not have been possible. For what was being shown was far, far beyond the capabilities of any adjacent realm, or even those realms outside of the Nexian crownlands.

This would’ve placed this newrealm on a similar enough standing to the crownlands.

Which again, is impossible.

So perhaps there was a third option?

An option that was nominally questionable, far-fetched, and unlikely.

But when set against the backdrop of impossibility, the far-fetched and unlikely suddenly felt the most probable.

Rultalia’s rule truly did apply in this instance.

As I calmed my internal turmoil, and accepted the improbable justification - that all that I saw was the work of nothing more than a truly brilliant, truly gifted artist.

Everything, from the manaless carriage, to the ridiculous nature-bridges, were most certainly the creation of an unhinged mind. A mind unburdened by the limitations of reality.

Which would explain everything.

And lend credence to the Earthrealmer’s eccentric personality.

For perhaps they were a race of actors.

Living out fantasies, and at times, managing to turn fantasies into tangible reality from ramshackled, unorthodox methods born out of their mana-less forms.

For if a race were truly deficient in mana… I could only imagine just how far they would go to overcome it through denial, through fantasy, and through limited successes of bringing those fantasies to life in unwieldy ways.

That conclusion, and that train of thought, was promptly interrupted by the likes of the mercenary prince, whose wide eyes and bewildered expressions clued me into his gullible state of mind. “Emma, what is this?”

“Like I said…”

Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Holo-tent.

Emma

“... this is my second hometown.” I announced gleefully, gesturing towards the ever encroaching spires of composalite and paracrete.

“There are many names for it, something to be expected from a legacy stretching over a millennium. But accounting for the time period since incorporation the few names that have truly stuck around have been: The City of Dreams, The Sleepless City, The City So Big They Named it By Committee, and my favorite… The Empire City, or well, the Capital of the World is another one that has a nice ring to it. Ultimately though, there’s one name we all thankfully agreed upon. One that bothered no one for it appeased no one. No one, except for rail enthusiasts perhaps.”

The train quickly passed by a sign you’d be hard-pressed to read, but one that I’d slowed down the simulation explicitly to hammer home my point.

WELCOME TO ACELA

THE NORTHEAST MEGALOPOLIS

THE FIRST INCORPORATED MEGACITY IN THE WESTERN HEMISPHERE

HOME OF THE LARGEST SKYSCRAPER HERITAGE ZONE

BIRTHPLACE OF SUSTAINABLE URBAN LIVING

POPULATION: 500,203,127

GLIDE SAFE, THE ACELA WAY!

“Acela. Or more officially, the Megacity of Acela.” I spoke giddily through a barely contained grin, before gesturing at the rapidly approaching city. “The town you saw earlier was an anomaly. I intentionally started off with it for two major reasons. One, I wanted to be honest, and to try my best to match the vibe you guys were going for. And since you were showing off your home towns well… I decided that I might as well start off with my first. So, given I was born and raised in Valley Hill, I felt it would’ve been disingenuous to start off at Acela. Two, I wanted you to see all sides of Earth. And whilst not an exhaustive sample size, I think the difference in scale is necessary to give a more accurate impression. For Earth is neither an ecumenopolis nor is it a solar-movement’s paradise. It’s both. For there’s a little bit of everything for everyone on Earth. Whether it's small heritage towns, or solartown communities, or even entire heritage cities, or as you’re about to see, Megalopoli; there’s a lifestyle for everyone. Unity in Diversity, as my government likes to say. It just so happens that with the sheer population of these places…” I gestured at the city in front of us. “...most of Earth’s population trends towards hyper-urbanity, rather than urban or rural.”

The whole group stared at me in silence, Thacea with a look of complete and utter stoicism, Thalmin with a maw that couldn’t have hung lower if his jaw was unhinged, and Ilunor… with a decidedly unrecognizable look of complete and utter neutrality. As if he was lost somewhere in the annals of his own mind.

This silence continued for a few more seconds, as I assumed everyone was taking their time in digesting every last bit of information.

It was around the same time that I decided it was time to start decompressing everyone, prepping them for the actual boots-on-ground tourist-certified experience of inner Acela, starting them off in the heritage district, before going neck-deep into the Starscraper Districts the megacity was known for.

“EVI, dim the canopy and windows.”

“Acknowledged.”

The tourist traincar suddenly went dark, isolated now from the rapidly approaching city, forcing the three to focus inwards towards one another, and most notably, me.

“Right, I know this is a lot to take in.” I began earnestly. “But that’s why I’d like you to talk to me now before we get deep into the thick of things. Is there anything you’d like me to clarify before-”

“That sign.” Thalmin began, his voice filled with the slightest hint of nervousness. “There must have been some mistranslation into High Nexian. Your hometown read thirty-something thousand. Yet for this city… the sign read five hundred million.” Thalmin silently exclaimed under a husky breath. “Surely you must have prefaced it with far too many zeros. Surely this is perhaps a sign designating the population of an entire realm, perhaps a region.”

“Well…” I started by trailing off, raising a finger in my defense. “First off, the sign was right. There are indeed five hundred or so million people living in Acela proper. But secondly, you’re also kinda right with the whole region thing. This whole city was once just a distinct geographic region, a collection of towns and cities, hence one of the names for it being the North-Eastern Megalopolis. But that wouldn’t last for long. As infrastructure development and public works went full steam ahead, further tying the region’s already geographically-clustered cities into an ever-growing, ever-biggering, cohesive entity. In time, the whole region became so navigable, and new urban development grew so extensive, that city lines and town boundaries started mattering less; as a new unified identity started to take hold. And in a story as old as time, with insatiable thirst that was human expansion, a new type of city was established. One not just contained to a region, but was the region itself. With the world entering a new era of hyper-urban development, delineating the early-contemporary era of disparate cities, and that of the dawn of modern hyper-urban development.”

“A region… a city…” Ilunor mumbled out to himself, his eyes glued to the glass canopy.

“So what you’re saying Emma…” Thacea continued, taking off where Thalmin left off. “... is that this is a form of social organization, masquerading as a city, that contains all the settlements within an entire region of a continent?”

“Well, legally yes. But functionally, it’s one and the same.”

This prompted Thalmin to cock his head, his perky ears flopping as he did so.

“The region it encompasses is now a city. Whilst the density waxes and wanes as you go through the various districts and internal subdivisions, almost every square mile of fresh dirt barring public parks, has not seen the light of day in the past half a millennium. Covered instead under successive layers of paracrete and unisphalt, and more than likely replaced entirely by composalite penetrating into the bedrock itself. Indeed, some parts of the city are built more like an off-world hab, with every layer of soil dug out and replaced by safer and more reliable contemporary materials.”

“So you paved… an entire region in paving stone and formament?” Thalmin replied in disbelief.

“Is formament some viscous puddy-like liquidy stone that sets into shape when you let it dry?”

“Yes.” Ilunor, surprisingly, replied with a bewildered expression. “How did you-”

“We have it. A mana-less equivalent. But I digress.” I quickly moved on, focusing my attention squarely on the lupinor. “That is correct.”

“Formament isn’t magical in and of itself, Emma. It’s just that it requires extensive mana-based methods to produce.” The lupinor stood there stunned, taken aback, but only for a little while. As he was back to full curiosity-derived strength with yet another big question.

“But not just that… you claim to have replaced the dirt itself with these… composalites?”

“Well yes. Sometimes, dirt just isn’t strong enough. And you can only drive pylons deep into the bedrock so many times. It’s better that we started from scratch in some places with more advanced development.”

“How… how can the ground beneath your feet be insufficient to the needs of your construction?”

“Because we build big.” I stated in no uncertain terms. “And sometimes, our lofty ambitions and limitless aspirations surpass what the ground beneath our feet can sustain. Forcing us instead to augment or replace it entirely, to facilitate our visions to become a reality.” I paused, before turning to the EVI for a quote that fit this matter perfectly. “In the words of the great 23rd century philosopher, architect, and civil engineer, Professor Dr. Leonard Cohen: ‘We have always been creatures of creativity. It is thus inevitable that in the pursuit of limitless creativity, we defy that which is natural, test the limits of that which is possible, and eventually, bend reality itself to our will for the aims of human creation.’” I paused, realizing that I’d maybe overdone it a bit, so I backtracked with a nervous laugh. “But hey, I’m not a materials scientist or an engineer. That’s just what I heard in class.” I shrugged to the face of a vexxed lupinor, and the vacant stare of a huffy Vunerian, prompting Thacea to quickly slip into the conversation once more; redirecting it towards the pertinent points at hand.

“So what you’re describing here Emma, is a supposed urban core, that spans the area of an entire region?”

“Correct.”

Another wave of silence smacked the group with the force of a truck.

Yet just like the first wave, this didn’t last long, as Thalmin’s awestruck nervousness soon gave way to curiosity, albeit a restrained curiosity tempered with a layer of alarm.

“Will we get to see these endless urban cores? Or these supposed works of creativity that demand the removal of the earth itself?”

“Yes.” I announced a matter of factly. “In fact I can show you what we need to put underneath those works of creativity. Clearing out the dirt provides full flexibility for the implementation of sub-surface infrastructure that more or less acts as the arteries and veins that carries with it the city’s lifeblood.”

With those final few words, which only seemed to serve to pique the curiosity and concern within the likes of Thalmin and Thacea, I moved to face the traincar’s door.

Only to be interrupted by an unprompted ping from the EVI. A small glowing exclamation point bordered by cyan identifying its intent as mission-sensitive, objective-pertinent, and just like the case with the impromptu spy mission in the dean’s office, a point of advisory that I was urged to take.

“Suggestion, Cadet Booker.”

“Yes, EVI?” I acknowledged, knowing well that I was potentially opening up the floodgates to a hundred different points of conflict, error, or whatever the little electronic virtual intelligence had in store for the graphics-intensive and processor-challenging simulation that was the city.

“Disable entity spawn. Set human entity count to [zero] for the purposes of this demonstration. As mission commander, do you approve of this proposal?”

To say I was thrown off by this being brought up, let alone as a point of suggestion no less, would’ve been putting it lightly.

The fact it’d come completely out of left field pointed me down a diagnostics flowchart that I definitely did not want to get into.

But maybe I wouldn’t need to, as my reflexive response would take me down a completely different path altogether.

“Why?” I asked, before shifting directions as soon as that word left my mouth. “Identify, clarify, and expand on root causative values.”

“Acknowledged. In categorical order of significance: A. Paradigm shift in diplomatic dialogue, with calculable but as-of-yet indeterminable potential for the disruption of established, ongoing, and potential future diplomatic engagements. B. Information Dissemination Overflow Value projected to exceed maximal threshold, leading to an inverse proportional relationship between further information dissemination and [persuasion value]. C. Factors A and B will lead to the increased likelihood of failure of the current objective of this exercise - the dissemination of humanity’s objective capabilities, and the invalidation of [Thacea, Thalmin, Ilunor’s] false presumptions of humanity’s perceived inferiority.”

I had to take a moment to consider everything the EVI had just said.

“All of that… caused by a simple face reveal?”

“As per current calculations considering new datasets, correct.”

“Okay, why though-”

It suddenly hit me.

“The superficial likeness between the [Elven] species, and that of humans, Cadet Booker.”

It suddenly made sense.

“So what you’re saying is, this will be the straw that breaks the camel’s back? You're basically saying that revealing ourselves to be… and I hate to say this, discount elves, will be too much for the gang to handle?”

“... in a manner of speaking, yes, Cadet Booker. Moreover, unlike any structure in this demonstration that can be broken down into their fundamental components, humanity’s evolutionary trajectory is a fundamentally different matter entirely; potentially conflicting with fundamental axiomatic beliefs of the origin of the [Elven] species. In addition, there is a so-called knock on effect that may likewise follow.”

“Point A I’m assuming?”

“Correct.”

“But I’m of the firm opinion and belief that revealing what we look like underneath the suit will lead to an increase in trust values. Besides, being stuck as a faceless suit of armor is doing nothing for empathy points to beings that aren’t Sorecar.”

“Affirmative. Those are valid points as per SIOP instruction manual Section 2, Chapter 3, Pages 22-25. However, these points are only valid so long as Complicating Disruptive Variables are not encountered, as stated in SIOP Advanced Response Theory Section 2, Chapter 5.”

“And I’m assuming you’ve calculated the human-elf similarity curve to be significant enough to count as a CDV, messing up the math and baseline assumptions and rules.”

“Correct, Cadet Booker.”

“So you’re forcing me down the action flowchart right now.”

“Correction, I am merely providing my analysis of the situation as it stands. As mission commander, you are free to overrule my observations.”

“Can I see the math?”

“Affirmative.”

A massive document worthy of an academic dissertation suddenly landed in front of my eyes, prompting me to realize that asking a VI for its proof of work was probably not the best idea. Not if I wanted to get this decision made in less than a month.

“Alright. Fine. But I think we can reach a compromise here. Showing them an empty city will detract from it. It might even start sowing seeds of doubt into their minds that any of this is real. We need people to fill it, that’s literally what makes a city a city, and it’s what’ll provide them a sense of scale. So I suggest I meet you halfway here. Just plop down unrendered NPCs, give them a bit of a shadowy texture and bam, you have your IDOV-friendly human models.”

This solution, like with my suggestions that fixed the spy drone’s pathfinding dilemma, clearly took the EVI by surprise as it took a solid second to parse the idea.

“Affirmative, Cadet Booker. This is an acceptable solution.”

“Good.”

“Addenum, Cadet Booker.”

“What is it?”

“I have calculated that [Ilunor] will be the most prone to Information Dissemination Overflow, and is projected to begin expressing points of denial some time during the demonstration of Acela.”

“I’ll hold you to that. Let’s see how well your predictions stack up. Because I’m about to explode now with excitement. Open the doors, EVI. Let’s give them a show.”

“Affirmative.”

“I guess it’s easier for them to grapple with the face of humanity’s achievements, than it is for them to grapple with the face of humanity itself.” I spoke silently to myself, as the train car doors opened.

“We’re here.” I announced with a nervous giddiness to the nervously awaiting group, coinciding perfectly with those three distinct ‘beep beep beeps!’ that officially announced our arrival into the heart of the city proper.

“GRAND CENTRAL STATION. PLEASE MIND THE GAP BETWEEN THE TRAIN AND PLATFORM.”

“Welcome guys, to the heart of the NYC Old Quarter. The hub of mass transit for the past millennium. Grand Central Station.”

We left the train to the sight of a large and open terminal, the painstakingly maintained old tile and granite floors glistened underneath the lamps above. Lamps which were painstakingly refitted after a century of being lost with the Great Refurbishment Scandal of 2579.

Everything from this point onwards seemed to elicit only a few head tilts from the gang, as each of them stood nervously as the ground beneath us shifted at a comfortable walking pace, taking its time as the perspective shifted from the terminal to the large grand concourse proper. The likes of which had been meticulously maintained and shared a special and distinct dual-role as both a working terminal, and a heritage museum. “Grand Central is one of the oldest rail terminals here not just in Acela, or the NYC old quarter, but in the entirety of North America. It’s what we call a working heritage site, similar to the entire town of Hill Valley, this place is far too historic to develop or modify from its original spec, yet too vital and intrinsic as part of the local community to retire to a full museum-status. So it sits somewhere in between. Locked in time, yet preserved in function, as part of the Living Histories initiative started above a half millennium ago.”

We walked through the main concourse with little in the way of much talk between the gang, as they all seemed fixated not on the old clock, nor the meticulously crafted murals, or the carefully etched friezes, or even the art-deco revivalist elevators that led to the additional ten floors of elevated terminals above grand central itself added in the latter half of the 21st century, but on the seemingly typical volume of early morning pedestrian traffic.

Pedestrians which, at the behest of my back and forths with the EVI, were reduced to intentionally under-rendered shadowy silhouettes. Though adding to that, the EVI seemed to have given the silhouettes a little leeway. Dressing them up in clothes that matched the contemporary seasonal aesthetic of more layered winter faire.

Something that the gang seemed to be quite fixated on, as they all set their eyes on me in the middle of it all.

“Emma.” Thalmin started up first.

There it was. The question. The doubts. EVI”s little gambit falling apart at the seams.

“Is… is there some sort of a festival happening?”

Wait, what?

“What do you mean?”

“It’s just… the volume of people here. In what is effectively a concourse for the nobility I presume?” He gestured at the old clock, the murals, the friezes, and every other classical greeble present. “I cannot imagine that there would be this many in the ranks of nobility present without a need to be present.”

“So… you aren’t bothered by the silhouettes-?”

“No, I’m assuming that there are some limitations to your sight-seer. There has to be, and I’m assuming this is finally one of them.” Ilunor spoke with a hint of exasperation, as if trying to find anything at all to detract from.

“That is my presumption as well, Emma.” Thalmin added promptly.

“Er, yeah. That’s one of the limitations I’m facing right now. So I’m glad you’re okay with it.” I spoke sheepishly, before turning to face the lupinor’s initial question. “So erm, to answer your question - no, there isn’t a festival going on. This is the typical passenger foot traffic you can expect in the main concourse in the early hours of the morning.”

It was this fact instead that clearly didn’t sit well with Thalmin, as he began walking around our little designated circle, inspecting each walking silhouette as they walked right through him like ghosts. His eyes were fixated not on just their numbers, but their attire. As he looked at everyone, from the middle management office workers to the uniformed civil servants to even the police officers and the more eclectic crowd of period-specific outfitters.

“You have this many in your nobility? Is this the passageway to the grand hall of your Monarch or-”

“Wait, hold on, I think we’ve hit some miscommunication here.” I interrupted the lupinor before he could continue. “Everyone here are commoners.” I spoke plainly.

“So… this is a gathering spot for the wealthy amongst your commoner ranks?” Thalmin attempted to rationalize everything once more, his tone of voice indicating just how much he was struggling with just this slice of Acela alone. “Perhaps this is some sort of terminal nexus to a trading guild hall of some sort?

“Nope… I mean… sorta? This is a very central location, really close by to a lot of big offices. However, most of those I’ve chosen to show you are all your everyday commoners.” I reiterated, prompting Thalmin to let out a frustrated sigh as he placed a palm across his head. “I’m sorry Thalmin, I’m afraid I don’t get where you’re coming from with-”

“The clothes, Emma.”

“Yeah? What about our clothes?”

“They’re too… clean for the typical commoner. Far too well-kept. With colors generally reserved for the wealthy or the nobility worn by almost everyone present with seemingly no consideration for their prohibitively costly and socially restrictive nature.” Thalmin finally explained, prompting me to finally get where he was coming from. “Furthermore.” He continued, gesturing at the concourse itself. “This… space… is built as if it was a reception hall for a major noble lord. Its size, grandeur, and well appointed status is just several leagues above what your typical tavern or transit hub would look for those commoners who even have the means to travel in the first place. I don’t understand how this could not be reserved for the nobility, or at least the wealthy amongst the common folk.”

“Alright. I can see where you’re coming from here, Thalmin.” I began. “But as I said before, we’re a nation of commoners. First off, the clothes. Those are just… typical for us. Commoners from every walk of life have both the means and the ability to purchase clothes of virtually any type. In fact, it’s a universal right. So what you see here are amongst the more typically worn amongst our people. Secondly, this place, and many other places like it that have been built since then, was meant to serve the needs of the people. The people who have a stake in the way we’re all treated and governed. It’s in the interests of those in charge from those appointed to those we elect to facilitate our way of life, a way of life with standards which continue to increase with each passing year as per our centennial and millennium development goals. Goals which not only include the practical and utilitarian aspects of life like those roads or the train we just arrived on. But also extends to the less obvious aspects of human development such as emotional and mental fulfillment. What you see around you now is perhaps one of the oldest testaments to that. As it’s a means of fulfilling not just the utilitarian need for transport, but the intangible fulfillment of the human need for the aesthetic and the artistic.”

Thacea’s expressions finally shifted at this, her eyes saying it all.

As the constant look of stoicism broke to something softer within.

Ilunor however, seemed to have taken the opposite direction to the avinor’s mental processing.

“Commoners… have no need nor place for the fulfillment of the aesthetic and the artistic.” Ilunor proclaimed through a dry, crackly breath.

“We all do though, Ilunor.” Thalmin interjected sharply. “It’s just that the means to achieve that is different depending on your social station.”

“I think… maybe stepping outside will grant you a better picture of what I mean.” I announced as I decided it was just about time to move the simulation forward, finally reaching those large doors that gave way to the outside world.

“Welcome to Acela, or more specifically, the cultural heart of it; the NYC old quarter.” I opened those doors to reveal a world of towering constructs. Most, if not all of them a millennium old, as towers of granite and stone facades stood side by side simplified modern towers of glass and steel. This twilight period between the dawn and the day lit up the ground just enough that everything was easily visible, yet was dark enough that the towers remained lit up, so much so that we could see the entire cityscape surrounding us lit up in a dizzying sparkling display of brilliance. As Thacea, Thalmin, and Ilunor, began turning around in circles, staring at the seemingly infinite sea of skyscrapers that all but consumed their sightlines in every possible direction.

A true concrete jungle.

And just like a jungle, ‘vines’ and ‘branches’ likewise erupted from every possible corner, all emerging from the terminal nexus that was Grand Central Station, criss crossing, ducking, and weaving between the towers that now surrounded us.

The three stared out at the city with wide open eyes, with expressions that ranged from shock, to disbelief, to shock again.

Silence once more descended on the three, interrupted only by the ambient sounds of city life as the hum of the rails, the thousands of muffled conversations happening all around us, and occasional honk of a disgruntled driver did nothing to pull the three from their respective trances.

It took a whole minute before any one of them responded, and it was Thalmin who broke the silence first. As he spoke slowly, methodically, with his eyes still glued to the cityscape around us.

“This is a city built for the nobility, filled with monuments befitting of royalty, yet all who live in this opulence... are commoners.”

Comments

Anonymous

Let's go baby, that's what I've been waiting for! A great start to Christmas Eve!

Ariel Huerta

Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Chaos147 ex

I don't think I could imagine a better gift if I tried to. Thank you, Jcb! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and everyone else!

JulesBeHere

Epic! This chapter is awesome, totally worth the wait! Now I can't wait for the next one xD

Anonymous

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Anonymous

Lol. EVI noted Ilunor's cognitive dissonance and made suggestions as to how to avoid breaking him to fast.

James Robbins

It's less that everyone is a commoner and more that all are on the level of nobles. "when everyone's S̶u̶p̶e̶r̶ noble no one will be"

Anonymous

So good!!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Spencer

Saw a redditer call this the "earth flex" chapter, certainly lived up to that name! Looking forward to earth flex 2

James Robbins

I was quoting Syndrome from the movie The Incredibles. But yeah I guess it is a fun term lol

Anonymous

I must say can't wait to see what will happen when "human face reveal" happens To be completely honest i must insist that you make humans to be more "beautiful" then elfs and run a joke that elfs are discount human's instead (Considering tech disparity)

HiMyNameIsFelipe

Love how they are reacting. And merry Christmas! I hope you have a good one. I will patiently wait for the next chapter

Fushi

While I enjoy their reactions this whole "commoner" dialogue is starting to bug me. It's obviously carrying a lot of baggage in the conversations and is at best a mistranslation and at worse a bad plot device. I think there's a strong argument to be made that these futuristic citizens are closer to their definition of nobility than of commoner.

JustOffKilter

This is actually something I've been thinking about since back when Emma met that Elf in the carriage before the communication device blew up. One of the things in the times of nobility that separated nobles from commoners was certain rights such as the ability to own land. Since everyday people can own land, I'm begging to feel that 'commoner' may not really be the best description for modern humanity in this story.

James Robbins

I totally agree but at least for the time being the others have no frame of reference for any other terms we could use.

Cosmic BGM

I know it's the future but not a single homeless person at grand central station. Emma is really putting it on thick for them.

Hoover Tesla

Incredible. Absolutely incredible.

JustOffKilter

Have a Merry Christmas. I'll admit, I was hoping that EVI might have chimed up when Thalmin was talking about their clothes to remind Emma that in the times of nobility, that certain colors were legally restricted to nobles only, hence why the phrase 'blueblood' became a thing. I'm also crossing my fingers for them to go to space and see Earth from orbit, and for Emma to talk about the Voyager Record. Maybe even play the raw audio from it.

Destinum

While I am enjoying these chapters, it's really starting to bother me how Emma refuses to explain it so the others understand: No, this isn't a city for commoners, because Earth doesn't have those kind of social classes to begin with. If anything, literally everyone on Earth would be a noble rather than a commoner, since they all have equal rights to take part in the political system.

I Dare Korval

I have to wonder if Emma actually realizes, or one of the others have picked up on, the fact that instead of the other's static movie type site-seer tour, Emma's is dynamic and interactive experience that can probably take them where ever they want to go at request. That fact alone will burst Illunor's "this is just a fake world" delusion. Also, as muchas I'd like to others to have a face to put to Emma's person I have to agree with EVI about hiding human appearance. Another good reason for this is that they get to "know" the real Emma without any preconcieved notions, for good or ill, due simply to appearance. Geat work and looking forward to the rest of the tour! Happy Holidays all!

James Robbins

I don't see it as a bad plot device. I think it's more to show how much the Nexus is controlling these people. Many of them may have tried getting rid of the classes but the Nexus wants to be able to control more effectively and to do that they put people in charge and keep them there. And the class system is a good way to do that. The best way to control people is to separate them and put them against each other to distract them from the real enemy.

DarkValorWolf

I'm surprised none of them had a "hold on" moment after "off-world hub"... What do they think Emma meant by off-world??

Destinum

I really don't get how Emma has such a hard time understanding their mindset, to the extent that she doesn't realise how important it is to get these people to understand that commoners/nobles aren't a thing on Earth. Not only does she have historical context of how those things used to work on Earth, but she's also supposedly a fantasy nerd that should be used to these tropes.

I Dare Korval

Of yeah, I have no doubt that Thacea picked up on the "...bend reality itself to our will for the aims of human creation." She's been exposed to more of Emma and the things she has said. I think that may come back to bite Emma a bit later.

Skrzynek

I second what James said. The utter INABILITY of imagining commoners having it nice that Thalmin struggles with is showing just how deep the indoctrination goes. Honestly, "Nation of commoners doing great" is probably just as dangerous for the Nexian elites as "we did this without mana". This point in the story is BIG, just as the manaless thing, and deserves the screentime.

astatine

tbf, if a society had extrasolar colonies and still had homelessness, it'd be a nightmare distopia

ShadePrime1

it could be argued the robots are the commoners in future earth and the humans are all nobles

Rust

Love all of it ♥️ I like how Ilunor focused on on any perceived 'weakness' in Emma's presentation, perhaps through denial or to distract himself from an ugly truth. I could definitely see Thacea addressing the elephant in the room, Emma's physical appearance, in private once the presentation is over. As a royal, such private things are best kept private - though it would also be a breath of fresh air and a sign of familial trust for her to break the mold of her station and ask such sensitive questions up front, publicly. I do not remember the existence of Elves being addressed previously, but I assume they were among the many races Emma saw when she was in front of the class before the Soul Binding session. Would 'we look a bit like Elves' suffice? I feel like I want a proper face reveal, where Emma projects her face and looks Thacea square in the eyes and smiles. That genuine connection I crave. Merry Christmas and thanks for another great chapter ♥️ can't wait for the next one!

YellowChief419

Mmmmm can’t wait for the next chapter wordsmith. Enjoy your Christmas

Cosmic BGM

I'd argue that nobles are still a thing on earth since the earth isn't unified. Emma even said she worked for the United nations and monarchs/nobles are now more cerimonal in nature

Anonymous

I thought the term blue blood originated from nobles having such pale skin that you could see their blue veins.

Andrew Lechner

Alright, Emma needs to stop with the whole "everyone is a commoner" and instead start explaining things as "everyone is a noble".

Steve

Merry Christmas Y’all!!!! Thank you for the chapter!

Fushi

It's not about what exists, it's about what the average citizen is closest to in terms of the various magic societies citizens. Do you think a hyper advanced human race's average person is closer to an unwashed uneducated laborer or a noble?

Anonymous

The elves are supposed to be the highest in the social order in the Nexus, my understanding is that most of the robed teachers are elves, including the white robed dean.

Rust

Thanks! That would definitely cause a stir. Happy Christmas

Cosmic Bananas

she might wanna hammer in that everyone can vote, can own land, have freedom of speech, can do literally any job if they are qualified, and that everyone is effected by the same laws, and that you can't legally buy your way out of or into a job

Jcb112

I apologize for that haha, I do plan on addressing this and a lot of the more sociological points in a later chapter when Emma sits the gang down to disclose more regarding the UN's political structure as well as humanity's current social structure! :D I had just planned on these first chapters having more of a focus towards addressing the realities of Earth and humanity's capabilities first, establishing the hard realities before going into more of the soft realities of sociology and politics! :D However I just wanted Thalmin to bring that up first since it's something I thought he'd bring up when he sees not just the sights but the people that inhabit them. But it'll definitely be addressed down the line! Emma's just trying her best to sort of focus on establishing the physical realities of Earth realm first before diving into that second topic haha. Thank you for your comments though! I do appreciate your feedback since this is a point that does have to be addressed! :D

Jcb112

Yup! I have plans for Emma to focus more on the sociological and political aspects of humanity following the whole tour of Acela! The way I structured this is such that Emma first needs to establish the reality of humanity's existence, that being an advanced and capable civilization that has advanced without the needs of mana, first and foremost. Before eventually transitioning into establishing the realities of humanity's current social and political climate! :D

Destinum

She keeps calling herself and other Earthlings "commoners", hence reinforcing that such a concept of class divide does indeed exist on Earth. Making sure the others understood that it in fact doesn't should have been a prerequisite for the tour. As it is now, what's supposed to be an "Earth flex" is instead being eaten up by a bunch of repetitive "But commoners! But nobles!".

Jcb112

I do apologize for that haha, I am planning on addressing these points and a lot more points that fall under this umbrella in a later chapter when Emma further discloses and elaborates on the UN's political and social structure! :D I had just planned on these first few chapters being more focused towards the hard realities of humanity's capabilities first, before diving further into the softer realities of sociology and politics! I might make a few edits in the revised version of this chapter with regards to how these points regarding commoners are presented in order to better lead into those latter chapters though since I definitely see how it might read as a bit awkward at times within this chapter. Thank you so much for the comment and I do appreciate your feedback with regards to this point! :D

Skrzynek

I think they were too dumb-stricken by the impossible sights to pay very close attention. Especially that "hub" may not have been translated properly to High Nexian. Frankly, I'd be surprised if they did listen to everything 100% understanding it right away... Especially given how much Thalmin struggles with the concept of commoner-focused Earth

DarkValorWolf

I'd indeed expect that for Thalmin, but Thacea has shown previously she remembers everything and pays very close attention to wording and everything Emma is actually saying. I'd just expected something from her tbh

Valderan

"Hope you're thirsty because you're drinking from the fire hose today!" Yeah, they're already hitting overload. Maybe glass is cheap and easy to make with magic, but I doubt they've glazed entire buildings like humans love to do. Its good to spend time with this new Earth, probably because its a great reference for us as to who Emma is as well... Looking forward to their reaction towards Star ports and asteroid mining.

Anonymous

Great chapter as always! Merry Christmas! On a separate (more speculative) note, does anyone else have the feeling that the UN might also resort every now and then to pulling a "CIA" like the Nexus, it's just by enabling and providing high-living standards and democratic rights for everyone that the UN is one step ahead? Of course, the UN is still a better place to live in than the Nexus, so there's that.

JustOffKilter

Hmm, a quick Googling lends credence to that, I seem to have gotten it crossed with Royal Purple.

I Dare Korval

And yet the first human to go there was not in a suit so the people who met that person are aware of what a human looks like in the flesh, before..... liquifaction.

LumiOak

If you can change, and show everything, it might reinforce the idea it's, fake, but showing how things work, were changed could indicate the truth

LumiOak

In a way we still have nobles, i.e. wealthy business owners/share holders, popular musicians, and high up politicians.

Rust

*Only for a few moments, and only known to the three lecturers who opened the portal, presumably. And they didn't share that around. I think this because why create the null while trying to learn about humanity, if they already know they're mammalian etc? I also assume that with initial contact with the 'portal people', small goods such as photos may have been exchanged? Though that's an assumption too Interesting point, ty

Brandon N.

Eh it would probably start confusing them when they find out about the fact that titles of nobility where abolished by the constituent states of the UN bringing up the question of "how is everyone a noble when titles of nobility were abolished?". It's better to properly inform them of the nature of citizenship under the UN as not being to tied to nobility

Anonymous

I wonder if he will ever snap and give up the illusion. Maybe on the "similar to Elves" bit? Or will it just make him go into another denial-driven rabbit hole?

Anonymous

All those talk about commoners and nobles makes me wonder about one thing: How did Humanity resolve the problem of ultra-rich people and corporations? How did we deal with runaway underregulated Capitalism? Are we de-facto a post-scarcity society? I think it doesn't look like it's a UBI based system, so maybe the education is finally good enough to actually prepare people for life in the real world?

Kyle Hall

Not going to lie, their reactions are making me afraid of what would happen if Emma "pulled them up" for a global view. Like you see the entirety of Earth. Thacea seems to be handling it fairly well, all things considered, but the other two seem to be on the verge of breaking for surprisingly similar reasons; their worldviews are being rocked. Thalmin is struggling to comprehend it all while Illunor is trying to find any reason to deny it. "It's one thing to hear about it. It's another to see it," after all. I feel like for both of their sanities, they would need time to process. Thalmin wants to accept it so he just needs time to "digest" the info. As for Illunor, I feel like if he is given too much time, he will try to rationalize it away. I think Emma needs to walk a fine line.

Anonymous

The longer JCB delays the reveal, the more I think its gonna be HUGE. What if the Emperor is actually a human that somehow managed to steal all the mana from Earth?

Brendan

It might just be me, but this also point to a interest potential character 'flaw' (depending on interpretation) for Emma, in that she was one of the success stories of someone brought up poor(er) and now has big success, along with the nexus being so backwards compared to earth from her view, that she might not really see those suffering, and blinding her to real problems Earth has. I could see someone Thalmin who comes (seemingly) from a poorer realm catching on and beginning to question Emma and driving a question to her of how different Earth really is to the Nexus. You def don't have to go this way and I'm very excited to see how this continues but those were my thoughts.

Floplays

i think that doesnt need to be explained and would reach beyond what should be talked about in a series about magic and different dimensions and realms

TankHunter678

The first human was in a sealed environment suit, it may not have been like the armor that Emma wears but it would be a helmeted affair in the event that air on the other side of the portal was unsustainable for humans.

Brandon N.

Emma is gonna need to talk a bit about space mining to explain the extravagant wealth of Earth. Just mining Psyche 16 would unlock enough gold to gild the entire Earth in a couple of feet of solid gold and don't get me started on the sheer quantity of radionuclides and precious metals are on that rock. That's just a single asteroid in our solar system.

Remi

"So there are minor realms up in the heavens that you tore apart for their material wealth?" "Well they are more like micro-realms or perhaps nano-realms, but yes" *Wish.com Kolbold catonic on the floor*

Anonymous

Yet Emma did drop some hints that Acela is mearly one megacity amongst many ("NORTHEAST", "FIRST", "WESTERN", "Megalopoli" or "theese places"). Can't wait to see if Thacea did pick up on it?

Remi

"It’s in the interests of those in charge from those appointed to those we elect to facilitate our way of life, a way of life with standards which continue to increase with each passing year as per our centennial and millennium development goals." I think this quote, along with an earlier quote about how all people have a right to clothing implicates that even the poorest human would have wealth equal to well off Nexian Commoners. Its a thousand years in the future so I am willing to bet mass automation and outer space resource extraction has made everything very cheap

UC-79

I hope they get to see the Earth Ring next chapter, as far as I can tell Emma's only talked about space exploration in front of thacea at the library once, and thaumin's heard a bit of it 2nd hand.

Skrzynek

Personally I think Earth Ring and other orbital.infrastructure may be way too much at once, especially for Ilunor. However, imagine if after the presentation is over and the two girls are left alone in their bedroom, Thacea asks about how they travel "beyond the sky" and what for. And they have a more *private* session where Emma can speak more frankly.

Skrzynek

I feel like it would be beneficial for Thacea to keep her mouth shut and only ask about such things once the boys leave the room. That way everyone can get the info they are ready for!

Skrzynek

UN doesn't callow genetical manipulation for the creation of IRL furries and/or catgirls. Obviously, they are tyrants that need to be stopped in order to allow meaningful progress!

Thisisanick

But to be noble, to be of higher social status, you need "commoners" with less rights etc. to be better of. In this futuristic utopia our Wordsmith is building, everyone has the same rights and status, no one is lesser. Obviously there must be some kind of meritocracy and way of power/wealth distribution, yet still everyone is on the same "level". Also, just look how in current, real world, a few deceades or a few centuries (depending on place) was more than enough to blur the social hierarchy. Now add a 1000 years and stuff like nobility or monarchs is just some ancient trivia, everyone around is just common folk, there is no problem with common employee going for a beer with CEO ;)

Anonymous

I can see the Face Reveal now: Thacea, suspicious, "Emma... you're actually capable of showing faces with that sight seer, aren't you." Emma, "... yes." Thacea, "Oh." turns toward her room. Emma, sighing, "Do you want to see?" Thacea, trying to be polite, "I wouldn't want to impose. You must have kept it secret for a VERY good reason." Emma, "from them, yes. From YOU? Not so much." "EVI, show me in my Class As."

I Dare Korval

Isn't Psyche 16 thought to be a potential planetary core but the planet itself didn't survive the early solar system formation?

I Dare Korval

One of them accidently looks up in the sky and notices a big metal-like ring, "Hey Emma, what is that thing up there??". Emma"Ummm,.. lets discuss that later."

Brandon N.

Yep that's exactly what it's theorized to be. Since it was a planetary core it's extraordinarily rich in valuable and heavy metals that sank over the course of eons towards the center of a planet before its untimely demise.

I Dare Korval

Emma might be better off saying something like "My species has a similar appearance to another race you have here in the school, but we are not at all related. I'd like for you to get to know me as I am now without any preconceived biases, good or bad, based simply on random chance of appearance. But I will show you eventually one day, I promise."

UC-79

"Don't worry about it lol, we'll get to that eventually"

Floplays

exactly the same way i thought, im sure there can be a good transition into explaining that there is no need for nobility as everyone can have the pros of a being a noble and none of the cons due to all the material available

Milklineep

In defense of "everyone is a commoner": you know how when you translate something from a different language, you try to pick something that best fits the available context. Then you try to keep the same translation so that the target language speakers aren't confused by the new term. This is what happened here: Emma first thought that the label of Noble did not match the status of the average Earth citizen and keeps using "Commoner". Eventually, she will realize that the other translation is better.

Anonymous

I just imagined her taking them to her place where they find out what she looks like by a picture on her dresser or something...I love this story btw. First heard it on a net narrator video and then found out there was way more, so I had to subscribe.9

Anonymous

We don't know that Nexus species can survibe without mana anymore than humans can survive with it though.

LumiOak

So no chapter this week, couch cough?

UC-79

We've known there wouldn't be a chapter today since December 17th, check announcements and don't be a dick?

13L00D13ANE

4 not so much. That one was the military reveal. Heavily redacted, obviously.

Spencer

God damn that's one hell of a fun headcannon. Explains the legends of magic earth side too!

Spencer

It would also be a good reason the nexus has double mana, he just moved human mana to an uninhabited adjacent realm, called himself God, and subjugated everyone else!

Househut21

It is possible that the Nexus denizens are provided with the same standard of living as the UN. The exception being that the standard of the Nexus is fueled by tithing by all the other realms they have "subjugated".

MaritimeTech2

the feeble nexian mind cannot comprehend human engineering

MaybeASquid

I would love for Emma to get through to illunor, by calling back to the humanity is insane comment made before the trial

James Robbins

Don't attribute malice what you can attribute to ignorance. LumiOak may have simply missed reading the announcement or forgot and had been excited about an update of a story they love. There's nothing wrong with asking questions. If they were harassing the author then that would be a problem but they weren't.