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Ok, i managed to get away from most of my Flu  remnant to advance on the project, finished writting the Scenario, and here is the first Wip of it then... yeah nothing you can really read, but i ll translate it below =)


So, this ll contain spoiler over the "plot" and the way it ll be drawn, so if you don't want to spoil you the fun don't read more of it =)



Ok, so, for now i plan on 6 or 7 pages, i wrotte ther scenario in 4 differents scene. For each i'll say, how many page i expect it to be, what happen in, who, how. But before i'll wrotte a plot summarize:


Plot: Mavis is talking to a girl (shadman's goth girl) while having sex with her, we won't see them before the end of the comics, but she told her about the thirst for blood of the vampire. That blood is life, it never pulse as much as in a sex frenzy, and never does it taste as good as captured in  extasy, fear or pain.

This ll be the 3 part of the comics, each of the protagonist ll be seen in a scene capturing it.

Raven : Extasy

jinx: Fear

Goth : Pain


Scene 1 : One page : we see Raven at a party, she go to the balcony alone, visually bored. We capture the presence of Mavis around, and Raven seems to desapear


Scene 2: two to four pages : Raven was abducted by Mavis, the vampire use her hypnotising skill to kill all question and doubt. They start to make out. 

Raven barelly move, Mavis french kiss her, go down, lick the neck, go down, suck nipples, kiss belly button, while she start to caress Raven pussy after sliding the pants away, rub it (2 to 3 panel) push fingers in (opposition to see the finger digging in and raven mouth) Suck nipple.

 Then Raven cum (large plan, Mavis sucking nipple, while fingering her) then goes back to the neck, and bite her (see her kiss then bite, Raven eye panel in quite a shock, blood driping off corner of Mavis mouth still sucking)


Scene 3: 2 to 3 pages : Jinx is in the street (tagging a wall) hear a sound, look suspicious, then Mavis "attack". Press her on the wall, using sort of shadow power to keep her still (Classic Bram stocker dracula's style).

Tug her pant, start to lick her ass, rimming a moment, going to the sex, Jinx, unwilling, affraid, but dunno why turned on (vampire effect). After a moment of ass sucking and clit rub, on the way to cum, then Mavis bite her on the wrist.


Scene 4 : 1 to 2 pages: Goth girl is on Mavis lap, hypnotised, listening while the vampire finger her pussy, once last word, Mavis push her to her head and start to lick her pussy, we see a Vampirised Jinx and Raven appear around the Goth too, and then Mavis say that she personnally prefer Pain, (panel on the goth eye, hypnotise vanish) then the three bit her in different place, the goth visibly in pain scream, End of the comics


If you have remark, question, don't hesitate, i can still change the ending or the plot i'll start the rough this week end

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hamiltonburr

A suggestion: if Mavis is going to bite goth and cause pain, why not bite her directly on the clit ? :3