Rosie 2.0 (Patreon)

I had my artist redraw Rosie based on feedback I received. How do you think this version looks?

Description: Rosie is shown with vivid red, wavy hair that falls just above her shoulders. She has piercing blue eyes and a light dusting of freckles across her nose and cheeks. She has a fair complexion.

Rosie is wearing a sleeveless tank top that reads "PROPERTY OF MAPPLETHORN" in bold, slightly distressed lettering. The tank top is light grey and has a few holes, suggesting wear and tear. She has a thin, golden necklace around her neck. She also wears dark, ripped jeans that are tight-fitting and have a few tears.

She's holding a black submachine gun with both hands, the barrel of which points downwards at an angle.