"Lover in the Ice" for proofing help (Patreon)

Hi gang, I have put together a new edition of Caleb Stokes' Delta Green scenario "Lover in the Ice," complete with art by Dennis Detwiller that makes it even more distressing and disgusting. If you have time to read the text and send me a list of typos and other errors, I would love the help. The attached version includes pages 1–24. It does not include the covers or the handouts.

The final version will be available soon. An updated version of the PDF will go to prior purchasers of the PDF at no cost. It will also go in Black Sites when that goes to press.

EDIT, 7 AUG 2020: I have uploaded a revised proofing document that has a number of corrections already implemented.