cotton candy first dildo (Patreon)

can any of my dear patrons please try to correct this text for me?  i'm used to write in portuguese. i do a few fanfics and erotic tales and stuff like that but sadly i'm not good enough with english.

cotton candy first dildo

she had the courage to enter a sex shop and buy her first dildo. She was so nervous, but when she saw those dicks in they’r packages she felt immediately horny. She was afraid that the lady in the balcony could see her pants slightly wet where the tip of her dick was pressing tight against her cock.

  Her hearth was beating so fast in the subway, the whole trajectory to her home was a despair, not only one second she forgot that a huge ruber dick was hiding in her backpack.

she closed the doors of her room when she came home, and as she was dressing as a cute little slut she could really see how wet her boy pussy was. sperm was dripping from her cock.

 For one moment, when she felt the dick getting inside her, inch by inch she tough that maybe it was too much for a first time. 7 inches slowly filling her anus. The sensation was wonderful every time a resistance was beaten by the dildo and she could not help but to moan. She have cum easily in  just a few minutes, she felt very ashamed when she look at herself in the mirror, but in less than half an hour she was doing it again, this time staring at the mirror, looking at the toy, disapearing and reapearing insider her ass, faster and faster. looking ate the slut she become, and she was lovint it.

 By the end of the week, her anus was destroyed, every day she used her new toy. She was always afraid that her mom could find it so she hide it in an opening under her bed. Sometimes the terror of someone discovering and shame  was so big that she almost trow it away.