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After the restaurant story, I've caught the writing bug. It was a lot of fun working on that with quadratouring.
I started a new story, this time featuring Tori and Razor.

I didn't get a lot of critique on the last story, but one criticism was that it was written in 3rd person instead of 1st.     1st person has certain benefits. It feels more personal. On the other hand, you're limited to one narrator, and basically can't write any scene that narrator doesn't take part in.

I envisioned the story series as an anthology series with short stories about different girls known from the videos. Basically to flesh out the world, give a bit of backstory and when possible collaborate with other artists like quadratouring.

The stories would all take place in the same universe, but the writing style will adapt to the character. The Tori and Razor one will be written more fast paced, more sexual and more comedic.

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CJoe

First person style pulls me out of the story usually.