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Next pages, and this is the conclusion of the first chapter of this story. I would greatly appreciate your constructive feedback on this chapter, as it will serve as a basis for me to continue working with writers or decide on a different path. Your comments and criticisms will be very valuable to me, so please don't hesitate to share your opinions on the story so far.
If you would like to provide feedback but prefer not to share it publicly, please feel free to send me a private message.

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Benjamin Smith

Are you going to PDF the chapter like you do with Super Nox? It will be easier to give it a 'front to back' in one go and give some feedback then.

Anonymous

Cute! I've enjoyed it a lot. I do like the smaller speech bubbles, because it lets us see the setting so much more.