Mamabito: Memories of Arcadia Pg.23 LINES+FINAL TEXT (Patreon)

Hey, Patreon! I lived through another Black Friday, miraculously!! As you can probably guess, I took a short break from drawing for a bit to recover from my trip through retail hell, but I managed to find the energy to finish the line art for Page Twenty-Three!!

In case you might have missed the announcement on Twitter, this page was simply too tall in its first iteration, and has been slimmed down quite a lot. The final panel (cropped out of this page and due to be completed in the background phase) will be the exterior shot of Mitzi's house, and Page Twenty-Four will pick up from the interior shot seen in the previous WIP update!

To make up for the cut, I've added an extra panel to this page that I think aids in the flow of the storytelling! Now we can see Mamabito looking up at the house ahead, and reacting to what she's seeing immediately after, rather than abruptly having an epiphany like she appeared to be in the first draft! It was a little more work, but I think it's paid off!

Thanks to all of you for the strong response to Papabito, and for continuing to support me here! I hope you'll all be looking forward to the next update! Until then, take care of yourselves, and stay safe out there!