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This is my first time using this function on Patreon. I have no idea what the, 'Notify patrons of this change' button will do. I hope that this message won't get lost to you guys who decide to re-read the chapter. If you haven't read the chapter yet, just skip to the bolded section that says Chapter Begin. This italicized section is for the edits of the re-write, which felt successful to me. 

One thing I have learned, however, is to never assume effort equates to success. So, I'll listen to generic feedback after this, but I'm not going to do another 2-3 rewrites. I'll stick with this new version or a slightly modified version of the old chapter's version, depending on which one you guys prefer.

The main changes in this new version are threefold: 1st, I improved Spear's argument. It wasn't by an enormous amount, but I gave his points more oomph. Let me know if it helped or hurt. 2nd, I implanted a descent that Spear fell into as he became more and more cornered in the arguement. For me, it made the argument feel much more 'real', though I didn't think it was terrible before. 3rd, I added in generic, completely good suggestions. 

What does that third point mean? Well, one commenter mentioned the point about no quests being given by Schema. Pretty good point, I must say. That's a general, great suggestion that's easy to add. In otherwords, a no brainer addition. Any other suggestions like that were mosied in. 

I'll also be adding the account of a soldier like I said in the comments. It didn't fit this chapter, but I know where it will. So, without even more rambling preamble, here's the chapter.

Chapter Begin

His dimensional slicer revved into action, cackling in the air like a tortured banshee. I lifted a hand, and his arm caught in a gravity well. A crack ebbed from underneath the armor, Spear's bones breaking before I eased the depth of the gravity's drag. A few of the soldiers from my legion stared on while I frowned at Spear,

"Look, that's a bad idea. Don't turn this talk into a conflict."

Spear turned to his arm, stunned at the magic's might. He nodded, his boiling outrage turning to a simmering anger. I waved a hand over to Kessiah, "Hey, can you help him out?"

Kessiah sighed before hobbling over a few trunks of gear. She reached the Sentinel and smiled at him, "Come on, we all know what happens when you fight the big guy. Don't be a dumbass."

Spear glared at our healer with seething anger bordering hatred, but I stared him down. He understood what would happen if he tried hurting Kessiah right now. Either way, our healer stayed unconcerned, pulling blood as usual. Kessiah's composure under the Sentinel's pressure impressed me, but Kessiah healed our wounded on battlefields littered with Hybrids. Given her position, courage was inevitable.

So as her blood shifted through a needle prick in Spear's arm, the Sentinel's anger faded. His bones snapped back in place, with Kessiah bracing it in the right direction. Once recuperated, Spear settled down. In the meantime, Torix cast his silencing magic along with the fogging aura, making sure the merchandise was covered as well.

Several of our normal guildsmen were included in that covering, but I didn't mind. It wasn't as if I would change what I was about to say, and most of my guildsmen would be happy to hear it either way. Thinking of all this, I turned a palm to Spear,

"Now, you think I betrayed Schema. Why?"

Spear sparked back into his anger, but it lacked its previous physical edge, "You've chosen to cease attacks on Schema's greatest enemy after all he's done for you. It's unmitigated treason. You've defied him and his will. You've abandoned his cause."

I raised a hand, "Now wait one minute, it isn't like I joined Elysium all of a sudden. I'm just choosing to focus elsewhere, for now."

Spear raised a fist, "And when you decide to stay your hand, you're leaving many of our enemies alive. Those enemies will kill Schema's soldiers. You are choosing to put those deaths on our hands."

I frowned, "What? No, I'm not. You can't just throw responsibilities on me. That's exactly what Elysium tried to do, and I shut them down just like I'm shutting this down right now."

I pointed at Spear, "I'm not Schema's personal bodyguard, and I sure as hell am not paid like it. Torix mentioned it before, but we're not getting compensated like others have for past conflicts. That's despite this being a much bigger war."

Spear raised a hand, "If we speak of appropriate compensation, then let us delve into it fully. I've researched your history, Harbinger. You were a monster when you left BloodHollow, yet Schema let you live. According to the documentation, you were reinstated into the system despite a direct culling order. Schema allowed you to continue on, using his system to amass power."

I winced at being called a monster, but I let Spear continue uninterrupted.

"And Schema spared you despite you showing symptoms of mana devolution. You'd have degenerated into an absolute aberration if you never fully controlled your energies. It was even worse after your armor manifested ascendant mana, the worst kind for your case. Schema let you overcome that by giving you time and opportunities you never deserved."

I crossed my arms, and I still let him speak his piece while keeping my mind measured.

"Time and time again, you have accepted Schema's benefits and perks. Without them, you'd have died against Yawm and many others. Schema kept you alive so that this day and at this time, you would return the favor. With his help, you evolved into this - a being worthy of fear and recognition."

He pointed his finger at me, "It is time you repay that debt in full. Cancel this truce. Use this technology against our enemy."

I raised a finger, ready to respond, but Kessiah spoke out before I could, "Pshh, you think Schema is why Daniel's alive? Why any of us are alive?"

Spear glared at her, "Yes. I know that is the truth."

Other Hod scoffed, "Oh, is that the case with Amara and I as well, or are you simply neglecting to consider us?"

Spear waved a hand, "You two are still volatile. Would either of you be so docile if not for Daniel's rewards and posturing? I'm doubtful. There's even footage of Amara devouring people on Gypsum. Such slip-ups are forgiven in times of war, but what about times of peace? What will the consequences be then?"

Amara hissed, "I have learned that to be treated as more than a beast, I must act as more than a beast. I would not eat and kill unless it was necessary."

Spear crossed his arms, "You lie. Other eldritch have said the same before peeling their listener's skin off and wearing it. Like all of them, it is only a matter of time before your self-control snaps."

Other Hod leaned forward, his umbral flames ushering forth, but I put a hand in front of him. Other Hod sighed, but he leaned up from his lunging position. Spear put two fingertips against the side of his helmet, "My point still stands. Schema is why you all were allowed to live, outside of these eldritch."

Kessiah's eyes turned sharp like daggers, "So when we were trapped on Earth with Yawm, was that Schema keeping us alive too? He was over ten thousand levels above us, with ancient runes all over his skin. We didn't stand a chance in hell of beating him." Kessiah pointed a thumb at Torix and me,

"You see those two? Without them, we'd all be dead. They pulled us through with sheer dumb luck and a lot of spilled blood. I sure as hell didn't help either. Now tell me, where does that fit into your whole, 'Schema saved us,' propaganda?"

Torix coughed into a hand behind us, "It is also worthy of mentioning that we weren't allowed to leave, even illegally. That's a rather unusual circumstance, even for a quarantine. I was caught quite off guard by it."

Kessiah nodded, "Exactly. We were all unknowns until Giess, too, so we weren't protected by Schema the whole time. We could've been killed at any moment, and Althea nearly was. She still has nightmares about being blown up by a plasma grenade."

I let out a sharp breath of anger as Althea murmured, "Kessiah, you don't have to bring that up."

I was angry for two reasons. One, I was mad at myself because Althea shouldn't feel the need to hide that. Second, I hated that dead assassin. Either way, I hoped our hot-headed healer would continue. I wasn't disappointed. A vein pressed up on Kessiah's neck while her voice rose,

"This asshole needs to hear all of this. I spent my entire life running until I came here. Now, I can finally live somewhere where I'm not hunted down like a dog with a gold collar wrapped around my neck. That's thanks to him."

She pointed at me, and a light smile traced my lips, "Thanks."

Kessiah stared at me, blushing a bit, "Look, this is more about me wanting to set the record straight, ok? I hate it when people talk bullshit."

Spear turned to all of us, "There were no misdeeds done on Schema's part. You were forced to grow and prosper."

Torix tilted his head, "Then think of this as an opportunity to allow Schema to grow and prosper. We wish to treat our allies well, and this is an opportunity for Schema to learn the same strategies from us."

Spear raised a hand, "The difference is that Schema gave you all the power and means to overcome your obstacles. This deal you've made only weakens Schema, which he never did to any of you."

Amara hissed, "Daniel was exiled while fighting Yawm. I granted him access back into the system until after Daniel defeated the big, annoying plant."

Spear took a step back, not knowing that fact. Oh yeah, Schema's extensive files seemed to have omitted a few key details. Regardless, Spear kept on talking,

"I'm certain Schema simply did what he had to do in those circumstances. And even then, you all succeeded. You've been granted an agency that few have ever received. This-" He gestured to the cargo with disgust, "Is how you repay him? By accepting a bribe from his enemy? Or worse, extorsion."

I kept calm, pointing at all of it, "This isn't a bribe. Elysium wanted us to stop attacking them, so we agreed as long as they gave us supplies in turn. It's a deal, and I still intend on helping Schema on the sidelines. I'll be killing Plazia-Ruhl and getting the ahcorous on the Empire's side. That's still plenty of helping; it's just not all-out bloodshed."

Spear seethed, "It's still accepting a bribe, and those tasks are well below your potential. You could do so much more if you so chose."

I scoffed, "And so could you."

Spear squeezed a fist, "No, I could not. That is what frustrates me when I look at you. You've been given a gift, a might that is monstrous. By choosing to serve yourself, you've become beholden to a selfish ideal. You devolve from a paragon of Schema to a creature of convenience. There is shame in that. You could do so much more."

I threw my hand up, "Almost everyone could, but we all have our own priorities. I want to be able to help out those close to me without being shoved into an endless war. A war, mind you, that I'm tired of. I don't want to battle for eternity. I'm ready to sit back for a while, build myself and my guild up."

Spear pointed at me, "It will be difficult to build your guild up without Schema's assistance. You and those that follow you could be exiled for this. You all should be, given this ensemble of eldritch, half breeds, and monsters you call your elite."

Krog growled, "Yes, and each of us could trounce you in combat without your petty little spears. Fight me with your own fangs and claws, and we shall see how strong you really are."

Spear put an outstretched hand on his chest, "Don't think I don't know where I stand. I know of my limits. I have lived out those limits for centuries, and they haunt me. Your kind is the opposite of mine. You live in lavish potential, coasting off talent. I fought for decades before being given my Sentinel class. Now I must watch a guild lower themselves to selfish desire despite their ability to do great good for this world and many others."

From that, I learned a lot about Spear. He wasn't a remnant from a pre-Schema era. He was a newer remnant that joined the Sentinel's ranks after a significant achievement. I noted that as Krog rumbled,

"So we must sacrifice ourselves to live for this AI? An AI who gave my kind nothing but air and death. Our entire species was culled because your Schema refused to handle its own dissenters. Now...now my kind flies through barren skies with their minds stripped."

Krog peered away, his breaths turning short and sharp. Kessiah walked over and put a hand on his wing. At her touch, Krog calmed down some. I turned to Spear, "Do they owe Schema anything? I don't think so. The perks will never make up for what the gialgathens lost. Asking more from them is absurd."

Spear took a moment, knowing what the gialgathens experienced. Despite the mounting evidence, he still pushing forward, "You're right. The gialgathens should be allowed to rebuild, but you are different, Harbinger. You were given many gifts, perks, and a class, but even more importantly, you were given a purpose."

He raised his hands, squeezing his fingertips together, "You can fight to improve our galaxy. You may do an absolute, moral good. There is immense pride that may be taken in that. I know many look down on the Sentinels and Overseers like we are Schema's dogs, but we know what we've done."

He banged his chest, "We had the decision to sacrifice our individual wants for something more, something greater. We were not unwilling tools. We decided to become a part of something grander than ourselves. You're taking the opposite path. By choosing to serve yourself instead of others, you do a great disservice to your guild and its potential."

At this point, it felt like I was talking to a wall. I talked anyway,

"But I have to choose between helping Schema or my guild. That includes the gialgathens. That's why I fought Elysium to begin with. It was to save those guys. And even then, you're not thinking of what we have to give up to continue serving Schema like this. I can't establish my guild. I'm stuck between constant raids and the looming threat of mass murder from Lehesion."

I waved a hand in frustration, "We haven't even been given a quest or the like to offset the losses we get from fighting like this."

Spear's hands lowered, "What? There's been no quest?"

"No, there hasn't."

Spear peered at Amara, "She tampers with the system. It's not beyond expectations that Elysium has done the same. According to the files I've read, Tohtella gave you a quest when she was a Speaker. She also planted spyware in your system data. She may have also done more than that."

I narrowed my brow, "Is there any way for me to get checked out by an Overseer or something?"

Spear shook his head, "No. We don't wish for the transference of viral programs from normal classers to Schema's elite. You'll need to remedy the situation yourself."

I scoffed, "Yeah, that's about what I expected out of Schema at this point."

Spear sighed, "Your grievances aren't entirely unwarranted, but listen to me. Schema is managing a galactic war where they've employed tactics he would never imagine using. Schema is learning to combat their methods as we speak, but he needs more time. We can't expect perfection from him. Like us, Schema is doing what it can for societal good. It's our duty to help him uphold the society he created."

I tilted my head, "I don't see that expectation being thrown at other guilds. The Empire and my legion are pretty much the only guilds I've seen fighting this war. In fact, the Empire only joined because they were attacked."

Spear took a step back at that, "I...That is correct, mostly. But other guilds shouldn't be expected to offer the same support, given how you joined Schema's system in the first place. You incurred more debt for yourself based on both your abilities and your induction. Your numerous illegal actions since then also garner disapproval that you must rectify."

I narrowed my eyes, "You know, I was thrust into a dungeon without a tutorial. I wasn't shuttled into Schema's system smoothly. Baldag-Ruhl summoned me there to use my soul as his armor. I robbed Baldag of that resource to survive, but it was Alfred Worm who saved me then, not Schema."

I stood over Spear like a mountain, "Since then, every time I'm allowed to live, it's called a gift. And all this time, Schema hasn't spoken a word to me. I've had two brief meetings with him, and outside of my happenstance meetings with the Overseer, I know nothing about the AI or how this war is going. The only way to talk to him is to use my Sovereign privileges."

Spear snapped, "Then use them. They were given to you for just this cause."

I frowned, "I have to burn through my yearly meeting just to get an inkling of knowledge from Schema?" I gestured at the remnants ship, "I just talked to them, and they mentioned not telling me where the Elysium planets are. You know, if I take a moment and think about it, why the hell don't I already know? Why hasn't Schema sent me a force of Sentinels and Overseers to inform me, let me fight where needed. You know, maybe talk to me?"

"Schema cannot speak to everyone at all times."

Torix's eyes flared, "I would beg to differ, based on those files you keep referencing. If they're that extensive, Schema's eyes and ears are everywhere. Logic dictates that if he's listening to us at all times, he may speak to us as well. If he so chose."

Spear neared exasperation as he tossed his hands aside, "Perhaps communications were split. Elysium could be tampering with your messaging systems."

I crossed my arms, "And if that's the case, I know it's up to me to fix everything on my own. If I'm such an important piece of his fighting force, then why the hell isn't Schema trying to utilize me better? Where's my support?"

Spear looked around, searching for an answer, "Schema, he is consumed in a galactic war against both Elysium and the eldritch...He is doing all that he can, and you're just one part of this complicated puzzle he deals with each day. He cannot manage every piece of that puzzle at once."

My left eye twitched, "But when I forgive him for forgetting us, I lose people. Every day members of my guild die because Schema won't put in time or effort for my guild. Why should we reciprocate what we aren't being given in turn?"

Spear stared down before staring back up, "He...That...It is because you're essential to his cause. You're the only member of Schema's system who can fight Lehesion who has chosen to do so. That-"

I snapped my fingers, "And there it is. I knew it. Others could fight Lehesion but haven't. Why? They wouldn't be given what they're due for fighting Elysium. That's where I'm at. I'm entrenched in a grueling conflict. In fact, ever since this system started, I've never had more than a few months of rest. Every other time, I've been consumed with war and death. The worst part is, it's just an expectation that I continue fighting...Forever."

Spear stared at me, his voice cracking as he fidgeted, "And you were gifted to have that potential for battle. Others would kill for it. I know that I would."

I shook my head, "But it's like I am a machine born to kill, and that's all I'll ever be. Schema's groomed me for it. I know it, but I want to do more than that. Look at my golems and my guild. Building those up helps Schema too."

Spear agonized, reaching out to me, "But battle is in your blood. You're a monster—a freak. You've seen your effect on people, even your surroundings. Accept it, and do more."

I glared at him, "Why do you think the only thing I can do is fight anyway?"

Spear took a deep breath before he seethed, "Why don't you wish to use what you've been given? You could serve Schema so well, and now you're setting it aside for a little city or two. It's pathetic."

The glares at Spear grew hostile from around me. The Sentinel continued, his confidence in Schema's protection absolute, "You are asked to battle because that is all you're good for. You're a backwater savage who's been given a gift that others may use better than you can."

Kessiah snarled, "What the hell is that supposed to mean?"

Spear dragged his hand down his helmet. He spoke with an acidic edge,

"I've been helping you all up till now because you served a higher purpose. Now you serve this oaf, and all he's ever done is destroy. At least allow someone with a sense of direction to guide that destruction. I say Schema should be that force, for he has built more than any other."

His words stung more than I expected them to. He could be right. As good as my guild was, I'd fought far better than I'd ever built anything. It's something I already understood about myself. I came from nothing. My entire family splintered all over the place, never staying in one place.

How my father acted was shameful, and it wasn't like his grandfather was any better. Those were pretty much the only real influences on my early life outside of my mom, and by now, I could hardly remember her face. Without her, my father went wild. He made sure I understood just how little of a difference I'd make to anyone in life.

He and his 'friends' tried to convince me I was nothing, but they were wrong. I ended up being pretty gifted as a fighter, even before the system came around. I wanted to become a pro boxer, and I held my self-worth in that. Now, I oozed that same fighting potential, magnified by many infinities. It gave me confidence.

Yet, sometimes, that destructive potential did leave me wondering if I could do anything else. My talent in runes and the golems helped, but in the end, I was a breathing cataclysm. Giess and Springfield splintered under my touch, and on Blegara, I tried with all my might to do something different. Staring around, the barren wastes stretched for miles in all directions. This carnage left me numb as I lifted a hand to speak to Spear, but I shrunk back.

What he said shouldn't be wounding me like this, yet it did. I took a sharp breath, not expecting his words to cut me deep. They threw me off, making me feel weak, something rare these days. Before I could get myself together, a ringing burst filled my ears, making me peer up. Althea shot a harpoon beside Spear's foot.

The sand and rock caved away from the spear, splitting with ease from the lance's frictionless descent. I found Althea furious. She glared at Spear like a beautiful reaper as she fumed, "Don't talk to him like that. Don't ever talk to him like that. He's done more for us than Schema ever has. More than he ever will."

Her words took the venom out of Spear's message in an instant. My eyes burned as Althea took a step forward. She kept glaring as she smoldered her words like they were hot coals,

"You don't know Daniel. You haven't seen him struggle. I have. I know what he's done and what he's had to do. He's fought till his body was more bone than flesh. He's taken on all of us and never left anyone behind, at the very least no more than he had to. I wouldn't be anything more than a pawn for Yawm without him or worse. Much worse."

Althea tilted her head at Kessiah, "Ask Kessiah, and she'll say the same. She never would've become a healer without Daniel's influence. Even Torix needed his help. Daniel brought our professor out of his shell and made Torix dream of making a university. None of us could've ever imagined doing any of this without him. He's been like a rock to each of us, something we can all rely on."

Althea scorned, "So don't you talk to him like that. Ever. If you do, I'll kill you, exiling or not."

I blinked, my eyes watering a bit from her outburst. It was sudden and startling, like a firework of warmth exploding in my hand - at first frightening, but by the end, a welcome surprise. Amara joined in, hissing,

"I'm more than willing to pull you back into the system, she-wolf. I wish to learn what Sentinel meat tastes like."

I appreciated them both, but I wasn't about to forget everything Spear did for us. I gave them a smile, "Hey."

Althea turned to me, "You want me to take him out? I've had bounties before. It's whatever."

I shook my head, "I don't want you to do that. Please, stop pointing that at him." I frowned at Amara, "And quit drooling."

Althea frowned but did as I asked, and Amara wiped her mouth. Spear gave our whole party a slow nod, "Then this is it. I can no longer support this guild which acts in service of only itself."

I shrugged, "That's just not true. You're too demanding. So is Schema."

Spear waved a dimensional slicer before cleaving through space. On the other side, a metal background showed along with other Sentinels, each of them meditating. Spear chided, "Keep your reasonings to yourself. I don't need to hear them anymore."

Before he stepped out, I reached out a hand, "Before you leave, I want you to tell Schema or the Overseer something."

"What could you possibly need to tell them now?"

"I want them both to know I still want to help. I just need a few things."

"Ah, so you'd like some treasure that exceeds this so that you may switch sides and reap benefits from both? Very classy of you."

"No. I don't need anything like that. I need Schema to open some communication line with me. That or his personalized AI's, maybe the Overseer. We were fighting a war together, yet I was given no information from him."

Spear spit back, "Why would you deserve it?"

I furrowed my brow at him, disappointed in how he acted when cornered,

"Come on, I sent him hundreds of terminals before this revolution started. I gave every log of information my assassins and spies gained to the Overseer. I made every attempt possible to start a dialogue. None of that was ever returned in any way."

Spear reached up a hand, but he didn't know what to say. I turned a hand to him, "I don't like Elysium, but I'm not about to kill my guild, the only family I've got, just to help Schema. If Schema helps me out, offers some security, and tells me what's going on, I'll jump right back to his side. That's all I'm asking for. I want to be an ally instead of some tool."

Spear took a pause, his mind dwelling on something. He gave me a nod, "Yes...I can tell the Overseer all of that. You are owed that much, given your previous service."

As he stepped out, I grabbed him in a gravity well. I walked over and held the dimensional tear open with my shoulder and foot. I leaned over Spear and placed a hand on his shoulder. I squeezed, his already cracked armor groaning under stress. As fresh splits formed in the graphene, his bones felt soft in my hand,

"You've done a lot for us, Spear, so I'm willing to turn a blind eye when you walk off or talk down to me...But remember who you're speaking with when you chat to me next time. Understood?"

Spear remained planted in place. He gasped, "Yes...Yes, Harbinger. Of course."

I released him, and Spear fumbled forward. I stared him down before letting the cleaved space-time snap back together. Once he was gone, I took a breath before turning to everybody,

"I might've gone too far there, but I couldn't help myself. That guy had some serious nerve. Anyways, thanks for saying all that, guys. It means a lot."

Althea ran up and gave me a hug, my armor bending around her grasp, so she didn't hurt herself. Torix stepped forward with his hands clutched under his cape,

"It is the least we may do when Spear presents such bleak propositions. They were rather ghastly requests, weren't they? To sacrifice ourselves for Schema simply because he gave you a chance to succeed...I believe the interest on that debt is rather steep in their eyes."

I shook my head, "Yeah, and I can't just throw this all away. I worked too hard for it."

Torix stared at me with his eyes flaring white, "If anyone knows how difficult this guild was to create, it would be all of us."

Kessiah raised a palm, "Heh, except me."

Torix glared at her, "Know that you're speaking only your opinion, not ours. You've toiled endlessly to redeem your concession against Yawm. The matter is settled for all of us."

Kessiah's face wrinkled from guilt, "I...Thanks. I wanted to say sorry for that. I never did, not really. At least it doesn't feel like I did. I can't remember, actually, but it doesn't matter. You all really needed me to step up, and I didn't. I threw everything on all of you."

I waved my hands, "Now that's just unfair to yourself. I was mad at the time, but an eldritch literally wore your skin. I can't imagine what that must've been like. Wanting to run and get away from all of that was a totally normal reaction. Any one of us might've done the same."

Kessiah peered off, "But that doesn't change the fact you guys really needed me then. I'm so sorry for letting you guys down."

Kessiah's eyes watered while she squeezed a hand into a fist. Torix paced up and put a hand on her shoulder, "Your drive to heal our injured members has done us a world of good. You've faced the Hybrids bravely as well, never running in terror against them, even if you wished to. That is more than enough of an apology. I'd wager we all agree there?"

The lich turned to us, and Althea and I nodded.

I added, "Hell yeah."

Althea followed, "Of course."

Torix pulled his hand down, "So take that guilt and perhaps grant it to someone who needs it, such as Lehesion."

Kessiah smiled, giving the old sorcerer a hug. Torix pulled back ever so slightly from surprise before returning the gesture. Torix murmured, "You know, you've grown so much. As a previous master, I'm proud."

Kessiah pulled back, "So have you. Literally."

Torix stood a solid two feet over her because I made his new body huge. Kessiah nudged him, "We used to fight like cats and dogs. It's amazing what war will do for you, huh?"

"Indeed, though there's plenty we still disagree on."

"Tell me about it."

I grinned, "Well, the war's over for a bit, so we have room to argue. The best time for that? A feast."

Everyone turned to me as I raised my hands, "I think that it's time we celebrate."

Krog rumbled in the back, "I can agree to that. I wonder if Blegara has any boneless fish we may feast on. I love the way cartilage snaps in my jaw."

I frowned, "Huh...Gross."

Amara hissed, "I agree. It grinds and pops in such a satisfying way."

Althea waved a hand, "Blegh, I'm gonna be sick."

I waved a hand, "Come on, let's head out. I don't think I can handle any more sentimentality at once...or cartilage talk."

We took a few steps before my shoulders relaxed. There was a warmth among our group as Torix receded his sound barrier from us and the packages. By the time we finished our talk, the remnants already stashed all the cargo away, so I lifted it all up by raising my finger. They condensed into organized bundles. Chrona murmured, "It must've been torture watching those beings move it all so slowly."

I grimaced, "Yeah, a little."

One of those remnants walked up, the talkative one who could speak before. I took a second to remember his name, and the shorthand of it stuck out to me. Phalanth gave me a bow, "We do apologize for any inconvenience while giving you this care package. There's nothing you've found missing?"

I stared at what looked like an ancient library of books, a large tech shop of rare gadgets, a lab's worth of biosamples and studies, and some stuff that I couldn't identify but our guild deemed safe,

"This should be enough for now. I'll send you guys a message if you're missing anything."

The remnant gave me a bow before staring up at me,

"Do forgive me, but may I ask which planet you came from? I'm quite curious about it."

I raised an eyebrow, "Does it matter?"

"It most certainly does. Many other diplomats, Elysians, and I have wondered for ages which ancient, space-faring species you've derived from. I believed it was from a race that exists outside of Schema-owned space. Others scoffed at the idea, but I think I'm right on the matter. I went so far as to make a bet on it."

"What makes you think I'm from beyond Schema-owned space?"

"You also seem to be an illegal entity based on your method of battle and your bodily composition. Even the eldritch fear you, so you're obviously something dangerous and volatile. It only makes sense that you gained enough power outside Schema's system that once within, Schema tolerated you."

It always astonished me how people could connect the dots for something and end up with a totally different picture, one far from reality. That being said, this misunderstanding only helped me, so I gave him a broad smile,

"Wow. You guessed it. I'm impressed."

Phalanth swung a hand with a snap of his fingers, "Hah, I knew it. Thank you for letting me know. I'd love to share the profits with you, but you seem more than well off. Now, may our next meeting be this fruitful and peaceful, Harbinger."

With a curt nod, I agreed while he walked off. Behind me, Krog, Chrona, Hod, and Amara chatted about the feast's specifics while Kessiah, Althea, and Torix spoke about how we'd impress the albony. As Phalanth took a step onto his landing pad, he paused. I wouldn't have customarily cared, but the remnants spike in blood pressure omened something immense.

I walked over, Other Hod having heard the spike in heart rate with me. I stopped the remnant from collapsing with a gravity well before he gawked at me with empty eyes. I snapped my fingers in front of his face and yelled, "Hey, you ok?"

He stared at an invisible screen before his breathing turned rapid. He muttered, "This can't be happening."

Torix stepped up beside us, "Has he been driven mad?"

The remnant stared down, unable to accept whatever horror he'd seen. Placing a hand on his shoulder, I locked eyes with him, "What's going on?"

He struggled to lift his arm, his hands trembling as he interacted with his status. After a few seconds, his interface popped up in my own vision, the outline red like an Overseer's screen. Leaning over, I watched a video without audio on it.

An enormous, reddish blob molded over a sphere. Understanding more of what I saw, it was actually two massive objects, the detail of their collision exceeding something smaller. Plumes of light erupted from the orb's surface as vast, magical reactions took place. Teeth and jaws gurgled on the smaller sphere, its grotesque form ever-shifting.

My stomach dropped while my eyes widened at the sight. I lunged down, my knees weak beneath me. Torix stammered,

"W-what's going on? Are you well?"

I held down the urge to vomit before taking a deep breath. I sputtered

"One of Elysium's worlds...It's being swallowed by a Spatial Fortress."

Comments

Monsoon117

Lots and lots of variables moving in this chapter, so I took extra time to make sure everything was right. It's still a lot to handle as far as viewpoints, facts, and everything else is concerned, so let me know if I missed anything or messed up. I'm more than willing to correct any issues you guys mention. That being said, I have plans for the story's future that I don't want to waver from unless absolutely necessary. All that said, enjoy guys.

Gardor

"There were no misdeeds done on Schema's part. You were forced to grow and prosper. That is no crime." And now Daniel is giving Schema a chance to grow and prosper

Qrystof

Holy shit. Does schema have no idea about a PR victory? Is he just thinking that if he's the only system left that he'll be completely infallible again? Also, how could Speat forget that Daniel was pushing for Schema to step up and act from the very beginning, the moment he realized something was going on on Giess? He also gave all the data and evidence to them, making it clear that they weren't as prepared as they thought. Everyone just told him not to worry about it. While saying that, I'd like to get input from smaller characters in scenes like this. The only responses always seem to come from Daniel's "followers", even while surrounded by the legion. Seems like a disconnect there. Unless it's a fear thing? Level gap between them and spear? What is kessiah's level nowadays? Seems like it's over 5000 due to new armor, but I don't think we've seen it recently? What about earthlings levels? There's been alot of war recently, ought to be good fot average level right?

Monsoon117

Spear didn't forget as much as neglect to consider. He's a firm beleiver in Schema, even if that comes at the cost of neglecting some stuff. I actually did try and get more input from other characters, but I might've neglected them some here. Everyone's essentially present, after all. Hm, maybe something about how Krog and Chrona weren't even given anything besides from Daniel. Amara and Other Hod could have their own accounts as well on that. They would never have been given a chance outside of Daniel. Those would've been good perspectives to add.

Anonymous

Thank you for incorporating alot of the discussions we had from the last chapter. Btw did you ever revamp the first chapters? I think I remember you saying that you would try a few years ago. Thats honestly the only thing holding me back from starting all over again :D

Monsoon117

I did for a while, but the editing process just killed any desire I had to continue with the publishing aspects. My editors, who probably would be great for a traditional novel, had no idea what the hell was going on because of the lit-RPG elements. They were 'too old' to get it and the premise, so they ended up asking for dozens and dozens of unecessary explanations. I got so fed up with it all that I just put it on the backburner and kept moving forward.

EvilGodAsura

If this was a game of stellaris and I was schema. Daniel would be like a failed investment that has become a major problem. At this point I would have spared effort to wipe him out before he gets even worse. Honestly if I was schema I would have never let an unknown like him live without being mindcontrolled in the first place. That's all I'm saying.

Code Reed

Well that's an escalation if I ever heard one. I wonder if Schema just wrote off those planets because Daniel wasn't in the war anymore. Murder Math, so to speak. Since Daniel isn't fighting anymore, a large equalizing factor in fighting back was just lost. Meaning that unless Schema can take out some of Elysium's power base, he'll be overtaken eventually. It also surves the duel purpose of making Elysium take pause and consider countermeasures when there Trump card is otherwise occupied. Lehen.. (Forgot how to spell his name) gold boy is the linch-pin of everything. Anyone who's run a war can say with certainty, that having a single point of failer is bad, like REAL bad.

Monsoon117

Some of the planets can be salvaged, but to Schema, some of Elysium's planets have universal support for the rebels. Schema has a method of fixing that universal support, and it isn't pretty. In fact, Schema's been trying to use Spatial Fortresses this entire time. They just haven't succeeded yet. It's scary to think of the implications should Schema win and what he'll do, however.

Code Reed

Hmm. So he would have done it regardless. In Daniel's eyes, eventually there probably won't be much of a difference between Schema and Elysium. My theory is that, when Daniel is strong enough, he'll make his own system, taking bits from both of them. But that's far of in the future.

Anonymous

One thought regarding the 'argument' with Spear. There was no quest. Not to fight Lehesion, not to fight Elysium. There was also no penalty (possibly due to his Sovereign class) for the ceasefire. He may yet need to justify his actions, but for now, he's not in trouble. I say, the biggest deal is.. no quest. If Schema really needed their guild to keep fighting just then, they'd have been given a quest.

Monsoon117

The sky is the limit with a character like Daniel. It's fun to think about what could happen, for sure.

Anonymous

So what happened to spatial fortresses glassing planets through firing a projectile? It would have been better than just trying to slowly approach planets and get stopped by Lehesion like they did the first two times we saw them. Also, while Daniel was holding Lehesion in place, shouldn't Schema have glassed Geiss? I remember that it was an important strategic target.

Monsoon117

I went back and had to take that part out. It ended up being such an absurd usage of power that it just wasn't viable for the story I wanted to tell. As for the specifics for the assault, you guys just don't know yet. Remember, they just figured out this happened. Those questions will be answered, however.

Shin

Pls tell me thats not earth...

Anonymous

Spear felt a bit more stupid than he should in those dialogs. I don’t have a good suggestion, but you can probably make he seem smarter and still make the same plot statements. It feels like it was hard to write but there was plot reasons. Sorry I’m not very good at explaining.

Anonymous

I agree. It should be an argument to use even with Spear. No quests, no announcements, no rules they’re breaking. It’s like schema went silent many chapters ago or they’re not part of schema anymore.

Monsoon117

I went into this chapter knowing a re-write would be required. Not scrapping what I've written, but adding many details I might've missed. It's just very difficult to simulate two different perspectives and follow through with each of them organically. I personally side with Daniel on this and beleive that Schema's demands and handling of the situation are ridiculous. That makes the reasoning for Spear very difficult for me to reason through because of cognitive dissonance. That's why he seems 'duller' than he should.

Monsoon117

That's a great one liner. I might have to add that one for the witty retort bonus, if you wouldn't mind of course.

Monsoon117

It's actually over Springfield! Jk. I'll spoil this part, but no. It's not on Earth.

Anonymous

Good chapter, from the quick skim through on comments Looks like a rewrite will be happening to add/fine tune it. So the fight with Daniel cost them at least one planet, I think someone suspects it to be Earth? I'm not sure that's feasible. The Elysium Base there was small enough a handful of those praying sentinels could have purged it. Also Schema doesn't seem to be programmed to be petty or vindictive so why hold earth responsible for Daniel and Co. ? In your rework one thing that might help you with spears argument would be to remember that he also has no idea what's going on, not how big or bad the war is who's fighting, nothing. Schema forgot about him too, he originally was helping Daniel out because he had not received orders and was going to do so until he was told otherwise. If schema had given him any kind of Order Daniel would have been informed. So just watch some Karen vids and you'll get Spears dialogue smoothed out. He's arguing on faith alone.

Monsoon117

Interesting points for sure. I definitely knew going into this chap that there'd be some serious issues, and not from a lack of effort on my part - I edited this chapter three times. It's just a chapter like this requires such a holistic understanding that mistakes are inevitable. That being said, you guys have all given me some great input. It's going to make the rewrite awesome, which I'll let you guys know about once it's been finished and updated.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Connor Alexander

I feel like another thing to be pointed out is that Daniel had to get a backdoor into Schema's system to even contend with Yawm later down the line. He only had a very very very dangerous method of growth elsewise, the cypher, that was given to him by a man that was practically insane due to its usage.

Titaniumtac

I miss regular Hod, I mean Other Hod is cool and all sure... but still

IAVL

I actually like all the changes, it feels less like Spear is talking out of his programing and more holding his beliefs out in the open. It reads a lot better. There is still some clunkyness, but it's more about the different transitions than the actual context of the discussion. I also hope that Spear appears again, and Daniel and him can keep trying to fit a square peg in a round hole. I also hope that the Overseer responds promptly, since Daniel is right in a lot of his points. Especially since he is the one that stall Elysium enough for Schema to say, "There, some progress.". I also think that Daniel is very agaisnt the destruction of the planets. I hope this pushes him to actually fight as a conquerer, to ensure no more planets are devour by those abominations, that his Guild will take back all that territory so that innocent lives aren't fed in the name of revenge. Hell, maybe he can try to negotiate a surrender from Elysium so that they are all absord into his Guild, with a lot of stipulations and penalties, of course. I also find a lot of fault in Spear's argument that Elysium interfearence is the reason why there aren't Quests or other things like that. First, I doubt their opposite system was up and running at the start, because I am pretty sure Daniel started on his Soverigth Quest after the rebellion began. Another thing is that someone mention that Schema is not petty. He sure as fuck is. What else can you call what he does to Renmant but pettiness? Their situation reads, "They tried to schackle him, but he out grow them. Them he taught their people why a lack of compassion is a terrible thing."

Anonymous

I love the story so far, but I do hope to see more guild development as well as planetary building. Clearly its a story that is no longer restricted to the earth, but I feel that as we have been focused so much on the wider galaxy a closer look at earth and guild development could flesh things out. Are there no other exceptional individuals on earth, in Daniel's guild outside his associates? What's happening on earth? Is Elysium spreading there reach to a fragile world which has yet to embrace the system fully. Know that we know schemas retaliatory tactics, does this make earth vulnerable to destruction etc etc? I get that it's the harbingers story and I love your work so far, I just can't help to feel the need for more depth of ancillary characters and world building. Due to the fact that the universe you created has so much life and potential.

Anonymous

Very well done. I prefer this take to the other one. I vote on keeping this one.

Dominic Pernicone

"...so I'm willing to turn a blind when you walk off..." -> "a blind eye"?

Monsoon117

Then Daniel would be much, much more powerful by comparison to everyone. His armor is outside the system, after all.

Connor Alexander

Man that came across way better! I do agree that there is some clunkiness, but I put that down more as a little of Daniel seeping into the others - he ain’t the best talker and only got better at it with a bit of time and the Sovereign class. Love the way the argument changed from Spear, it seems more like a overzealous patriot then a man who just knew what was up for no reason. Also thanks for incorporating the note about Daniel getting back-doored in, the way you put it in deflated Spear deliciously. Awesome writing as always Monsoon! On a side note, for Daniel’s later work I was just thinking that with his ability to mold his body, why does he not use multiple limbs to do tasks around Golem forging? Or is it more to do with the fact that he can create several complex gravity wells with a thought, and still relates to the human form?

Idan tal

The edit version is much better, great chapter!

Anonymous

I might have missed it in the comments but what's not in the chapter is specifically, Daniel being in blood hollow without going through a tutorial is schemas fault. A crack in the system, in schema. That being allowed to live until he could get rid of his unknown status does not make up for it after also killing that rul eldritch. He was used by schema because of his unknown status to deal with Yawm since it didn't matter to schema if one or both of them died. It was a calculated risk. If schema lost, an early systemized planet with two unknowns and a (I forgot Kessiahs race) would be dead. If schema won, Yawn would be dead and it would gain Daniel who has the potential to aide it with many future problems. At least that's how I believe it was shown.

Anonymous

A part that I think should have been brought up is the fact that much of Daniel's potential and realized power was not given to him by Schema, it was the eldritch in blood hollow. Without the armor and becoming a dimension itself, he couldn't use the cipher much or have nearly been as durable. The only reason schema could build him up was because of the eldritch and cypher changing him in the first place. Schema should not get credit for it, he only came in after to make it seem like letting him live was a gift to get daniel to be grateful to him. It wasn't a gift, it was a threat to manipulate him.

Anonymous

hey! thanks for the edits, it really made Spear a little more snappy and added weight to the entire 'argument' where it wasn't for me before. I say 'argument' because it's hard to really show viewpoints when passion is added where Spear is concerned. I look forward to the growth of everyone! and maybe prove a point with how much of an ass Schema is and how unreasonable a sentient AI can really be

Monsoon117

The clunkiness will require another edit, as this is what I call a 'frankenstien' chapter. I didn't write it all in a single session or two like normal. I've had days to think of alternate viewpoints, so its less cohessive, and a simple line by line edit for that should fix it. For the other stuff, Daniel doesn't want to be a monster, even though he is fully capable of doing something like what you mentioned with his armor. It's a mental block, not a physical one there.

Monsoon117

Good points, though I don't know if Daniel would see it the same way. Also, Baldag-Ruhl intercepted the initial repositioning warp for his dungeon. That's how he prevented Daniel from going to the tutorial. Schema wasn't at fault per say. It's more like Schema just wasn't perfect there. Daniel still suffered for it, but ended up pulling through and turning into what he is today.

Anonymous

And Spears comment of "You were being given the chance to grow" well.. as someone else on here pointed out.. now Schema is being given a chance to grow by the same lack of help.

Tomisgoofy

I love the edits myself, much better. Keep up the good work!

Anonymous

Excellent edits. :) Helps to show that in Spears mind Schema can do no wrong, and when something goes outside Schema's control, it isn't Schema's fault... fanatical devotion to be sure. Also, something else I noticed this read through... Spear left to a place filled with other Sentinels sitting and meditating. Sitting and meditating... what?! Is there a war on? Why aren't they out fighting on the front lines? Are things bad or not? All hands on deck? Seems not! The cops/military are on break while the civilians defend themselves. Right? :P

Melancholyforus

Lmao what that was such a overreaction he’s personally blasted cities into molten slag but watching a random planet he has never heard of would get that reaction? Lmao sorry if that comes off as snobby but it’s like a doctor seeing blood and fainting or the dirty jobs guy seeing poop and throwing up or something it’s just so unexpected it made me laugh which ruined the moment I think you were going for

Monsoon117

It's different seeing it in person, and the scale is well beyond anything Daniel's been capable of. It's billions of people dying, and it's directly from Daniel distracting Lehesion.

Jamie Trevino

‘:jerryConfusedGlare: The hell do you mean you don’t have a quest?’