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LTK002 (Patreon)

Published:
2016-03-25 08:56:01
Imported:
2021-03

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Next page! WHoo hoo!!

Attatching the page again to make sure it isn't too small in the..preview thingy. lol

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MAQUES

Love it

Jiren

Nice

Anonymous

hm...my previous comment in your character sheet post still stands. Be sure to eventually explain the world of 'Hero Tales' if you want to make it a story. Different factions in the world, places, who is part of which factions... maybe you can add 'factions' to character bios. Page two is very well done. just a few rough spots that here and there on the image, but have to look hard to find them. Just one grammar criticism... "Reigning Squat Champ" makes it sound like Lios is still in University and competing. Something along the lines of 'Record Holder' makes more sense to me as she has graduated from university for a professional career in reporting. Just my opinion. Again well done and giving you some criticism now so future pages will be terrific. Also, don't change anything on my account, good as is. Peace.

HeroTales
>>1554402

We're definitely on that. Give us a chance to rev up with the world of HT. We've spent quite a bit of time putting together the different groups, layout of the world and the 'why' of it all. We'll get there, don't worry. 'Record holder' might have worked better. We'll keep that bit in mind for the future. Thx for the feedback.