A Better Man No. 39 Lineart (Patreon)

So with the unanimous vote for adding a Cadance + Shining + Sombra story to the patreon I have been spending lots of time just.... dreaming and imagining and well that's sort of how I write. When I visualized the first page of the series I realized I was seeing (well... "hearing") a lot of narration to set the stage. This took me back to my very first comic under Klink which was heavy on the narration and there were those who really loved it.

Over the years I fell out of the practice for a lot of reasons but I decided to give it a try bringing it back, fitting a lot of storytelling in these pages in words to reinforce the imagery.

I hope you folks like the new focus. I know I've always included a fair bit of text on a page, but this is sort of me trying to approach some narration in the same way I'd write this as an erotic novel.