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Flipping Out, Part 1, Chapter 12 (Patreon)

Published:
2023-01-23 01:15:25
Imported:
2023-08

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End of the Penny Handful arc! I love these dweebs!

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Flipping Out

Prologue Chapter I: The Wedding A wedding, they say, is the happiest day of a woman's life. It's when her hopes and dreams come together in a perfect day, when she is at her most beautiful, when her heart is filled with love, her head is filled with visions of the future and the eyes of all of ...

Comments

Day Dreamer

Sure like your writing style, it's quirky, clever, deep, and fun. In this story, though, I admit I'm having trouble following who's-who in the characters, or for that matter how many are there exactly, 5 or 6? Even after scrolling back to the beginning, which takes place 5? years in the future, and rereading the place where they all adopt nicknames. It's because of all the name-changing and body-shifting. Which of course does challenge normal use of English, doesn't it? Maybe this is a don't-care, and I should just drift along as if I were watching a confusing but entertaining movie?