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Chapters 3 and 4 for my Prey fanfic are done and are in the link. I've also linked chapters 1 and 2 for easy access (right here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NtWn_SD6GWsfY_dfZsMahykjagevRRUWZ8axzWktj0w/edit?usp=sharing )


spoilers for Prey (2017)

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Morgan Yu Too, C3 & C4

"Show me," he said. He walked over to the screens and typed in the commands, resetting the program of the Looking Glass V3.1. trying to load up the memories, or at least giving the-- the thing in the chair the ability to do so. "Show you what?" she asked.

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Anonymous

again, these characters are incredibly well-written and emote so much and so well =^.^= Morgan Prime's, like, ongoing breakdown at the fact of Morgan Too's being a woman, and her gently working them through this? Wonderful. And in C4, seeing Morgan Prime *emote through mimicry* was great, and then seeing just how good Mikhaila is at helping them along was fantastic too. Also, the closing line is fantastic =^o^= None of Morgan Prime's self-discovery feels forced by plot or forced by the other characters either and *I love it*; it's started by them confronting the reality of Morgan Too and what she being *her* means for *them* and continued by her knowing them as well as they know themself, and that feels really natural :3!

elamimax

Aaaa thank you so much!