The Dungeon "WIP pages 1-4" (Patreon)

NOTE this isn't where i'm leavening this comic, there will be a full transformation and ending to this that introduces "Ari" dont panic

Ok with that said, yeh heres what i have so far with the dungeon comic. really want to make this good, just like the last comic, Im trying to keep it short and not drag things out too long.

if there are spelling misstakes corrections would be super helpfull! aswell, but feed back in gerneal is much appracited! really wanna know what you think of this so far, good? bad? too long? etc etc