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Noranora30~35 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-11-02 03:21:16
Imported:
2020-10

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thank you always. :)

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Anonymous

私は日本語を勉強しているから、日本語のページと英語のは私を手伝っているんです。ありがとうございます！

nomifuki
>>28533886

Redaunさん、ありがとうございます！日本語とても上手です！私も嬉しいです！ありがとうございます！

Torakuma

Shiro fidgeting is the best! 😅 とてもかわいい !

Nekoitoi

Another amazing set of pages! These are really good, been loving reading it. It's cute how there relationship is. It's really sweet how Shiro is trying to change aspects of himself for Kuro. Hoping there are more pages ahead! Though did notice a few minor grammatical errors in the pages. Page 30 It should be, "What's that.. smell? It's making me hungry Page 31 "Did I lose?" "Shit, I thought I was gonna win" "Your movement becomes really slow when you're insulted. It's super easy to beat you. (as beat off means to jerk him off) "Looks like some did the the dinner prep!" While not grammatically incorrect, the line "Then I shall go and prepare something for us to drink" sounds a bit stiff. I'd recommend altering it to, "Alright, I'll go get us something to drink"

Hr. Seehund

Aw, that was a cute moment. Nice work!

Myokuju

I think theres a bit of an error with the numbering. When I count all of these pages, theres only 33 pages unless Im missing something

nomifuki
>>28567020

That happens to me too! I’m so bad at counting pages... sorry! I will correct them!

nomifuki
>>28534337

Wow I`m so sorry for the late reply...! I just noticed this comment! thank you for the advice...!! helps me ALOT!!!!!!

Phantasmas35

Shiro is so sweet <3