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This comic is fully translated by me. So I’m afraid that there will be mistakes.



Please feel free to comment and feel free to correct the translation


Sorry forgot page9! Fixed it💪


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Torakuma

Kuro’s fuzzy balls are ✨😍😛✨

Anonymous

Oh, this upload is missing page #9!

Torakuma

Oh yeah, I was so distracted by Kuro-kun’s Fluffy ☁️ balls I didn’t realize page 9 was missing. 😆 I’m sure Nomi-san will fix and upload.

Torakuma

Hey Nomi-san. If you’re still taking ideas for an English title for のらのら I was looking up Stray dogs and read about packs of strays. When stray dogs roam together it’s called “Free Ranging.” Thought maybe it could be “Free Ranging Dogs” or something along those lines in English? “Free Rangers” “Roaming Strays” Just throwing ideas around for you! 🤓

Hr. Seehund

オモロい! This is really funny, and everything is well translated. The only thing I'd really change is: when Shiro says "Kuro, turn back!" He should say "Kuro, turn around!" Or "Turn around, Kuro!" It reads better. Still, great job!!!

Ink

I love them.... You're so good with their expressions!!!!!

Anonymous

Que intenso 😋😝😘😘 great job 😍😍

Azaghal

Now we need Page 9 :)

Bubba Wolfuzz

Sexy Pose is lovely!!! 🤤💙💚💙💚

Anonymous

page 9 seems tiny sized and blurry to me.

nomifuki

Aaahhh thank you!! Fixed it!! Why am I so bad at counting pages!!!

nomifuki

Oooooohhh that’s sooooo cooool!,,!!,!!!! Definitely wrote it down on my title list!!

Zilch Woofs

Looks like fun!

Panfoxu

すごいい!! メッチャ大好き。

Nekoitoi

page 9 I think it would sound a bit better if Kuro was saying, "Quit being so cocky.." Maybe, drop shiro saying "Duh" As it implies, he obviously knows kuro is topping. Maybe it should say, "You already came this morning" instead of "cummed" page 11: I think it would sound more natural if Shiro said, "Kuro, Turn around" as turn back sounds odd.

Anonymous

I love those two! Drawings are sooo good and love the expressions n fur:3

nomifuki

Oh thank you nekoitoi-san...!! Lots of effort....!!!🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺thank you...!!!!

Valravn

I loved this lol, I laughed and loved how very sexy it was. And the translation isn't bad either! Most translations in comics are terrible but yours feels so fluid. Kinda like English was your first language so great job!

nomifuki

THANK YOU Valravn-san😭😭😭😭😭😭soooooo happy to hear that. I am so happy that you like them ..!!✨✨✨

Anonymous

Amazing work, NOMIFUKI. :) Apart from what others have corrected, I think punctuation could be fixed. (E.g. Avoid using two full stops "..!" and instead use three or none. "...!") I'm really loving the comic's story and its art, and your personal translations have gone way beyond being good readable English and are reaching a level where they are almost perfect English. You've progressed very well. :3