Finding out part 5 (Patreon)

So I drew the fifth part of the comic. 5 ... Just like in JoJo. 😎 Okay. I was just joking. In any case, there will be another, last part. And after that, I can then take a break. Focusing on the "weeks" that I have not completed. But in general, what do you think of this plot? I just want to know your opinion.