BUP WOTN Page 3 - Step By Step (Patreon)

Here's progress of page 3.

Interesting point about this page is the first panel. Original script just has Marian handing out the phone to Whinter. And as I worked on the page layout, it was clear the second panel needed a lot of space for all the dialog Marian had. Thus, the first panel became really tall. I made it work with having a nice tree shot but it did feel empty still. This inspired me to add some extra dialog and thus  Whinter thinking Marian was also handing him gifts happened.

This is a nice example of me keeping the script always alive and how new ideas can happen while I draw the page.

Logan's smug face is also a higlight of this page. So have a close up of that.