"Hello, Stranger" (Patreon)

I'd wanted to make this a 3-4 part vampire/demoness TF with a bit of a story attached, but found myself struggling with..

 A) Narrative.  Been struggling with this one a lot lately to be honest.  Good writing is hard, and I feel like I'm better with the pictures.  I'd be really happy to put pictures to other peoples words, but tend to flounder and stress out a bit when left to write my own words.   

B) WIERD DAMN SHADOW.  I included a second (WIP) pic that I'd hoped to have finished by now, but for some reason the shading around the breasts is not playing well with others.
I know it's something to do with the opacity maps on the clothing and *maybe* the way the ceiling lights are set up.   I thought it might have been caused by the almost invisible fog, but disabling that didn't seem to fix it.

I may be able to isolate and solve this problem, or I may have to start again fresh.

What do you guys think? Should I bother?  Do you prefer it when I stick to werewolves and werecats? Do you have any stories you'd like me to provide images for?  What's a good healthy midday snack for humans to eat?

Also, I'm open to name suggestions for this particular stranger