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Goblinounours

If I had just one complaint, it's that the text you write on your pictures is REALLY hard to read. I'm not saying that you should use speech-bubbles, but you should add an outline setting on your texts to make them stand-out. I know it's done in about 4 clicks on Photoshop. Dunno what software you use. Either that or make the text bigger. Point is, small white text on a light background is a bad idea. It needs to be contrasted.

Solone

I see what you're saying and debated a bit with myself on that one. Are you viewing the images at full 1080 res? Patreon isn't great at showing the fullscreen usually. You have to right click and 'view' to get the full size. I usually use an outline, but figured it was readable enough. Thanks for the feedback on that though.

Goblinounours

Sure, it's readable, but I wouldn't say "optimal". Your text should pretty much always be written in a color that offers some level of contrast with what's behind (hence the existence of speech-bubbles and outlined texts). I personally hate basic white speech-bubbles, but I also think you can achieve some great results with them. Take Deadpool, in most comics, he has his voice and two inner voices. Each has its own font, shape and speech-bubble filling, with gradient colors effects, etc - <a href="https://www.inter-comics.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/Deadpool-Inner-Monologue.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.inter-comics.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/Deadpool-Inner-Monologue.jpg</a> ). Other super-heroes have their logo in a corner to indicate it's not a narrator but the character thinking. You gave Trisha a tattoo, you could use it as a logo in that same way, in later chapters of her story.

Anonymous

Nice sequence so far, your teasing us again Mr Solone :)