Vaught - WIP - 13 & 14 (Patreon)

The night is getting late. Greg's drawn out all but the last details of Elizabeth's story.  With a final discussion, Elizabeth comes to realize how she played a part in bringing them to the point of no return.  With all the sordid hypocrisy laid out, Greg begins to assert the new order of things.

Hi all.  Another chunk of Vaught done as we speed headlong toward a conclusion.  These two chapters put the flourish on the timeline reveal of things with the caveat that in the existing draft there are massive continuity errors and a resulting lack of tension.  I've got that mapped out, but it still needs to be revised.  However, the main beats will essentially be the same.  

Otherwise, this has a good bit of teasing and build up in it before the grand finale starts.  As it wraps up all the plot stuff prior to the climax, I figured I'd put it up to get it out of the way.  Unfortunately that means it ends on a bit of a tease.

Happy Reading!