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[Poll] [Spirit of Lust 2] 300 chapters & Character Popularity Poll.

  • Oliver Brooks 5
  • Grace Valentine 10
  • Milana Aliev 13
  • Sarah West 3
  • Isabelle Brooks 7
  • Holly Brooks 3
  • Alice Knight 3
  • Noelle Summers 12
  • Thomas Pierce 2
  • 2023-11-17
  • —2023-12-01
  • 58 votes
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Hello everyone.

It’s been a year and a half since I started the Oliver branch of Spirit of Lust. We’re at 300 chapters and a bit over 300K words. I wouldn’t be able to do this without your support, and I mean that in more than one way. Do you mind if I ramble for a bit?

The Oliver branch started as a side project that, like many others I have, I thought would never see the light of day. It began with the intention of following the theme of “From sex to love” and with an extremely weak protagonist. The idea was that the relationship between Oliver and the girls would start and carry on for a while entirely based on lust. Oliver would not be the kind of guy who these girls would want to date due to his awkwardness, strange vibe and his silence. Frey, the spirit, was there to make him get laid, nothing else. Doing it this way, the potential for the story was high because there is so much room for Oliver to grow as a person, and I feel like those are the types of stories I like to write and am best suited for.

However, this was, and I know it still is, a very controversial concept. Oliver was too weak, to the point it grated on many people. I’ve been told he’s infuriating to read about, and I’ve been told that many times. It’s hard not to take it a little personal, both because I’ve poured so much thought and effort into this and because at least some of it comes from personal experience, like most of what I write. I guess I understand why it would feel like that, even if I don’t agree with a lot of what’s said. Of course, I keep my own opinions to myself. I’m not going to try to convince people that my story is worth reading if they already gave it a chance and didn’t like it.

That said, we’re still at 300 chapters and I still want to continue. I believe in this story. I chose to pick it up from my folder of possible projects because I read it after months of having first written it and genuinely thought to myself “I like this. This is good.” But more importantly, I continue because of all the support the story has received. I’m not going to pretend like the monetary support isn’t part of it. I’ve been able to pay bills, medical bills and medicine thanks to you guys, and I’ve even been able to treat my parents out to dinner on a few occasions. But knowing that there are people who truly enjoy this story, that like and root for the characters, is such a powerful and overwhelming feeling that I know I can continue writing because, even if there are people who hate it, there are also people who are invested, and that’s who I write for.

And so, from the bottom of my heart, I thank you. Thank you for supporting me, for enjoying the story, for sending me a message of praise, leaving a comment or even clicking the like button. It’s stuff like that that helps me keep going.

There’s still a lot I want to do with Oliver’s story. I like it and I feel happy writing it. I’d like to move them to university, introduce new characters, and help them figure out their lives. I’ve grown attached to these characters and I want to continue their story.

My hope is that you guys are still invested enough to come along with me on this ride.

I apologize if all that sounded cringy, but I wanted to vent a little.

And since we’re at 300 chapters now, I think it might be time for another Character Popularity Poll. I think everyone has had a good enough time in the page to make it fairer than the last ones.

Comments

Qwerty1234

As long as you continue to write it I am going to read it - and love it. Thanks for doing this :)

midnight_texts

Been absolutely loving this story and didn’t even realize it’s now up to chapter 300. I’ve been really enjoying the characters in this story, however I think (and this could just be me) that this group of girls lack the some kind of bond or chemistry as the girls from the David Walker story. That’s not necessarily a critique of you writing because I’ve enjoyed this story just as much of it more. I might revisit that story just to take a look at why I feel this way. I really like Alice and whilst Noelle isn’t my type I also enjoy her inclusion, they just haven’t excited me or got me as invested as say when Sophia, Katherine or Olivia joined. I also wanted to add that whilst I understood what you wanted to do with Oliver from the start I did grow a tad weary of it. That said I’m super glad you stuck to your guns with his character and he’s incredibly grounded and probably the most likable protagonist of yours. Lastly this might just be in my head, but I have fears that since Mila is consistently the most popular girl in the polls she’s started to lag behind in development. I understand if this is done so people can see more of and start to like the other girls but I really hope Mila’s popularity isn’t inadvertently hindering her development. Anyways love this story and I hope you don’t take my comment as anything other than constructive criticism.

written_fantasy

Hmm... I think I see your point about the chemistry between the girls. By this point in The Affection Multiplier, I had written plenty of chapters focused on the group talking about random topics or playing truth or dare, and that helped flesh out the group dynamics. I haven't done that enough here, I think. Problem is that I also don't want it to feel like I'm stalling the story. Like I said, I'd like to reach their university days, too, but if I write too much of them in high school, it'll take way too long to get there. Though that might not be the worst, either... Ugh, I don't know. The thing about Oliver is that I knew it was gonna be controversial, but I didn't expect the outright disgust and backlash from some people and. It's the kind of criticism that's almost impossible to accept because it's a matter of him being exactly the character I wanted to write. It would be different if I was writing him wrong somehow, but some people just can't stand who he is. I understand it, but it still hurts a bit whenever I read some comments. As for Mila and the popularity polls, I swear it's has nothing to do with her page time. Alice and Noelle need the be on page more since they're new, and these scenes with Grace and those with Sarah in her house have been in my head for a long time. The balancing act between girls is probably one of the toughest parts of harem stories, which is why I don't want to introduce a new girl quite yet. But yes, thank you very much for this. This is the kind of criticism that helps and is enjoyable to read.