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Here it is, people. The project I've been working on originaly teased here. It's gone through a lot of changes since I started, but most of what I said there still applies.

This is an adult fantasy story with monsters, knights, warriors, magic, fantasy races and explicit sex but with a focus on story, characters and worldbuilding. If you've read my stuff, you know you can expect a harem of the wholesome variety, if with a slower pace on that front.

There will be no explicit scenes of rape or violent moster sex. I might imply some things in the future if it's appropriate, but never for cheap shock value. So yeah, no goblin gangbangs on poor village girls here. Look elsewhere for that.

This is just the first chapter, and everything here is subject to change in the future. It's structured in the way it would be published on CHYOA, with questions separating chapters.

Any and all feedback would be highly appreciated. This project means a lot to me, and I want to make it the best I can. If you liked it, please tell me what you enjoyed the most. If not, please tell me what was it you disliked.

With not much else to say, I present to you Deus Terra: The Land of the Gods.

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Kiro Haas

That was a very pleasant read. It felt a little more Anime-Fantasy, due to some of the in-game systems and names you set up, like [Prana Flow] and [Arcane Art] and such, but I'm not saying that's a bad thing. Normal Fantasy doesn't tend to have really hard rules like those, outside of games and RPGs, and more of a generic... "I can do fire magic, or I can do water magic," as opposed to having a name for everything you can do. Also a couple of minor typos here and there, but nothing noteworthy. Still, as said, a very pleasant read. Can't wait to see Arthur and Marina's relationship grow.

written_fantasy

Thank you. I guess I'm going for something more like a light novel. One of the thoughts that made me start this was thinking of ways to give game mechanics organic explanations. How things like healing potions would really work and how to explain that people somehow have super human agility and strength. I've been learning how to write characters with TAM, and I'd like to apply that to this while also building a world and a bigger story. Just like I've been learning with TAM, I want to learn more with Deus Terra. Also, I just started reading it, but The Way of Kings is a western book that has a hard magic system with named skills and all. I think stuff like that is becoming more common.

Anonymous

This is great stuff, and a nice change of pace from the usual "real life but there's a twist" stories. Excited for future updates!