Post Apocalyptic T-Posing (Patreon)

Original Title:  Minor Refinement Feedback Wanted

NOTE: Left = Old Right = New

So there's this odd thing about Camilla's hair where shifting between poses, occasionally the side of her bangs freaks the fuck out and shoots straight up, frozen in the air. I went under the hood to try n' fix that and whilst doing so, I thought about how the original creation process went. I recall being pretty slapdash about it, putting this thing together in like, a day at most. 

I pondered for a bit what she would look like if I actually tried so I took a swing at it. Not sure what I originally used as a reference but I decided to try and stick with the original Kozaki art. Her eyes are still too big but I think overall she has more of a softer look to her. I feel like back when I first made her I thought of her as more angrier, harsh looking. Which I mean, yeah she fights people but she's meant to be soft oneesan ara ara type so that design philosophy totally clashed with her character. 

Aside from the face, I updated her body a bit. Do you like these changes or do you prefer the old body? Lemme know. 

No custom eyebrows, but I did change up her eyeline. Zoomed out it looks all mushy but zoomed in it's fine.

I was supposed to be working on an entirely different character but the hair thing annoyed me enough it sidetracked me. Maybe I'll do an actual "Taking it seriously" Camilla some day with new outfits but for now I'm just gonna leave it at this. Card is in the link below. 

https://mega.nz/file/BlA3AQYK#OYXt4dF2HJ7hutMC4q5bJQcOAFwyonEjizpvyD6Bb7Y

PS:  No this doesn't count as this month's card.