Hygiene 2 (extra!) page 1 (Patreon)

The extra will be changing, after some conversations with a friend, somethings became clear. like ash should be a bit more in charge and already have a plan-goal instead of making one later. give back more agency to him, as this is what he wants. so the order and dialogue will change, but some of the drawings will stay the same. i was pretty happy that I got some good criticism when I showed this to my friend and had them explain things to me better. So I’ll be updating the comic to make this make sense!  Again the dialogue might have slight tweaks in the completed version, but otherwise itll be similar. And ash had showers before, it’s more like now, he’ll be taking his hygiene much more seriously and take methodical steps to make the process much more comfortable and easy to handle