Commissioned Story (Patreon)

Well, I got the short erotica done.  I have to admit it's not great due to the author being an amateur.  Too many grammatical errors and an inability to fix things I pointed out.  I fixed what I could but I'm not that great of an editor.  I tried to add in stuff but the writing became stilted due to the author's style of writing and mine being too different.  I guess this is something of a mishap.  Maybe I should have used the more stringent, and probably more expensive, Upwork.  I don't think I'll be commissioning erotica anytime soon unless I see a damn good sample.  I have also added the erotica to the Google Drive.

Still, I did talk with a graphic novel writer and I might be interested in getting a script going since character development and humor are not my forte.  Anyone interested in gods or an orc sheriff or both?