My New Girlfriend, Chapter 5 (Patreon)

I've never really delved much into the mystery genre before, and while this isn't exactly that, it's proving an interesting challenge trying to decide how fast and how to advance the narrative and drop clues. I feel in part like it may be too fast, but then, I also have a lot of other stories competing for my attention. Likewise, as I often feel when I'm DMing, I wonder if the clues and hooks that seem so obvious to me will be to my players, too. If you have thoughts, feel free to share - I'm genuinely curious. In any event, I hope you enjoy!