My New Girlfriend, Part One - early release (Patreon)

Not really sure what the heck this is and only some vague notions as to what it'll be, but I liked the basic question it asked. Many MC stories revolve around a guy taking his girlfriend/wife and turning her into his obedient little sex toy. But what if a guy didn't do that - what if a guy went looking for love, but his new girlfriend just came that way?

Criticisms are as always welcomed - I don't know if I'm ultra-devoted to this piece, so please let me know what you think, if it's worth continuing, etc.