This Is Our Story ready for editing! (Patreon)
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I am pretty pleased with this piece. For those who didn't read the initial chapter I released a while back, or just forgot, it centers around a high school yearbook editor whose school buys new software for their program called This Is Our Story. The editor's version, unbeknownst at first to the protagonist, allows him to literally edit the stories of his classmates and the faculty.
There's definitely an element of the old MasterPC in this (after all, it's a computer program that edits reality), but it's far less precise and user-friendly, lacking even a basic Undo feature. Plus, the protagonist isn't one of those instantly corrupted sociopaths whose first instinct is to just enslave every girl he's ever had a boner for. (An impulse I can appreciate, though I don't think it makes for good narrative.) I tried to weave in some of my personal favorite tropes -- a submissive streak, one-sided romances, teacher-student shenanigans, a "gullibility" effect... I had a lot of fun with it, so hopefully those of you who check it out do too.
Anyway, while I could easily keep going with volume II, I do still have The Secret of Harmony Reed to pick up (and I believe finish off with volume III). Once that's done (and while I'm doing it), I have some short stories I want to get out, and hopefully some commissions as well. (I'd love to make a comment about thank goodness for the Trump economy, but I don't want to pin down whether or not I mean it sincerely or sarcastically and either way lose half my readership. Ah, to be an American in 2018.)
Once that's done, my hope is to finally finally get around to revising good old Tolerance and The Tolerant with some rewrites and edits and put that out there for the world. I know it's one a lot of people missed and liked (and hated, at parts), so with luck we'll get it done come July or August so the world can bask in it anew.
Anyway, more to come!