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It has now been two weeks since the two Orc friends, Grurg and Kanor, returned from their vacation and both resumed their old ways... or almost.

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Hey all !

I decided to add a little story to this series of images in order to bring a little depth to the characters. I hope you will like it.

English is not my mother tongue, please let me know if anything in the text seems strange to you.

Thanks everyone ;)

~ Etan. 

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This work will be available in the August package, which I will send you on Septembre 6th.

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Garz

Ooh, I see! That is a neat continuation ^_^ I think that either should be "Wait up", which is a colloquial or slang phrase if he's being very casual, or "Wait for me" otherwise. If English isn't /his/ first language then he should probably say the latter. If it is then either way works. Also wow, I had no idea that English wasn't your first language since you write very well.

Sibre Collard

Seconded. Also, it's minor, but in English there is no space before an exclamation point ("Wait up!" not "Wait up !"). I notice my French mother does that too.

ADGames

Thank you for this information. I have some basics in English but the spaces between a word and its punctuation is something I didn't know.

ADGames

Thank you, but I think there is much more to learn about the English language ^^