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Hey guys!

As I mentioned last night (at least it was late night where I live)  that I will need your opinion on something moving forward with the Game Night series.

My original idea was to make this series longer with flashed out and detailed transformations, but also give the players the opportunity for character moments, dialogues and interactions, and believable relationships between them. 

Obviously and sadly these things make the planning, writing and rendering time longer (as you probably noticed with the fewer but longer releases each month)

So my question to everyone would  be, should I change how I make the Game Night series? I recieved a huge number of positive feedback in the comment section as well in private messages, some negative and critical but useful ones that also help me to improve how I do things, but also many mixed ones, where they say that they're pleased with how the transformations happen, but they don't really care much for the characters themselves and it would be better if I just leave out the boring part and focus on the transformations for faster updates.

So, what do you think? You like how it's done and I should I keep things going as I they are? Change it entirely? Or try to do a mixed thing where I occasionally make longer and shorter chapters? Please let me know your honest opinion down in the comment section, or just send me a private message if you feel more comfortable like that.

Thank you everyone.


Comments

Anonymous

I personally like more transformations but it’s your story do what you want to do with it :)

Raik Baugatz

I think a mix of long and short chapters would be nice

Zbloutch

As far as I'm concerned, I love it as it is. I find the transformations more spectacular if there has been more exposition about the characters and their interactions before. I think that's why I loved your comic Welcome to the USA so much, for example. It's not just someone who appears and gets transformed in the next page, it really feels like it's an actual person, which makes me more invested as a reader. This being said, if it becomes too complicated for you to do it this way, I 100% understand :)

Anonymous

I prefer more transformation focused story. Developing characters is great and each of them should feel unique, but I personally think that transformations should be the main focus. Love the story so far!

Seelenimplantat

I like the interaction between the characters, it spice things up when the characters react to the changes and how they deal with the new bodies. Especially in the case of Amanda and Jessica.

Beyorub

I prefer the transformation alone if it allows more time to make content of that nature.

CorruptiveJade

I will say I 100% love how it is currently. As seeing a reaction to the changes is part of the changes. Like seeing Amanda’s joy and Jessica’s shock at having their bodies shock brings so much more to it then just seeing them change with out it.

Some Guy

I have been quite enjoying this as it is. How the characters react to what is happening is part of the changes going on in my mind. I wasn't thinking of this as a pick your poison where I would expect a faster turn around, I have been enjoying the story as it unfolds.

Mark Williams

The last breast transformation was one of the more interesting ones of that type that I’ve seen. I think the realism of the veins really sold how bizarre the transformation must be for the character. The characters have been fine to me, although I feel what would take the story to the next level would be if there were some type of subplot or something extra going on besides just the game. In any case I like the exposition and building up of the characters. I think it makes it more interesting.

John Doe 777

I personally don't mind if you change it or keep doing the same, but what you could do that could save you time is doing only renders for transformations & sex scenes with speech bubbles. Then leaving everything else as a wall of text explaining the story.

DB_Explorer

I like it so far...if you have issues with amount of work maybe do a mix of short and long sections?

SitriAbyss

Oh, thank you. And actually there are three subplots hidden in the story. Two was mentioned and one is not come up yet, that I plan to reveal a little later on.

SitriAbyss

Oh, not at all. I was just concerned that maybe you guys have a problem with the fewer but longer updates per month. The amount of work is pretty much the same for me, but I must decide if I do more comics that are shorter and less detailed, or make less comics that are longer.

JorgeZ_N7

It is difficult, sometimes quality is better than quantity, and sometimes vice versa. "Game night" let it remain as it is, I'm interested in following this story.

Rixxile

Well Said I'm with Jorge on this one, personally your the author so do what you feel is right and as Jorge says quality is better than quantity.

dino810

I would be sad if story was not as deep. Love the characters!

Anonymous

I works leave it as is. I like the transformations but you need to have a story and get to hear or see the reactions of the other characters or it would just be a quick panel with the same characters in each one.

Motdurza z Bratislavy

I personally thing you should keep it as it is. Those characters are important part of story and give soul to it. On top of that it is your original vision of series. I like to see it.

Bill Norris

I like the story and the transformation keep doing what your doing if it makes you happy!

Anonymous

I'd say keep doing what your doing o don't mind waiting as I think if you lose the characterisation just wouldn't be as interesting they are very important to the story

Kuro7

I'll be honest, I love the story you've got going and the characters you have in it. My favorite development with the characters so far is how the Mom, who didn't like having the game in her house, is loving her transformation, while the daughter, who wanted to explore magic, isn't happy with it. And I like how the Best Friend is becoming sexier against her will. I'm eager to see how the story goes for them.

Felixfalck

Part of the transformation is to see how the characters adapt and change mentally. Its really difficult to pull off a convincing transformation if you reduce player dialog. If someone uses the totem and becomes a stripper you want to see that change reflected in change of phrasing, vocabulary and generally how they interact with the others. By leaving out the fluff inbetween the transformations you're essentially neglecting part of the mental transformations or the mental aspects of otherwise physically transformations. I think you should keep doing what you do and make the best of it, it's looking really good so far. Only gripe I have is the waiting, but thats just because I'm spoiled :P, ill be patient, I'd rather see a good finished product that is fleshed out.

Kristian

I vote to keep things going as they are. In my opinion, the story and character development is good.

Anonymous

I like it as is. The build up works and makes the pay off way better.

1-Re-Set

Honestly do not loose a good plot line in return for instant gratification.. I would rather a bulk drop once a month or twice a month consistently vs a constant trickle of eye candy

Anonymous

I like it as is, for the most part. The story helps build things up nicely. That said, its sometimes disappointing to see a drop, after a long wait, that's just build up. The next installment is always great, but it might be nice to get to at least some sort of transformation right away. Like how you end The Anniversary Pt2. Awesome, but I think it would have been better to end Pt1 that way.

Anonymous

Edit, to be more specific: putting the very last mental transformation of Pt2 at the end of Pt1 would have been a very interesting payoff and setup Pt2 nicely. I didn't mean all the transformations of Pt2.

Anonymous

I'm all about the transformations personally.

londongaijin

Shallow as it makes me, I'm more interested in the transformations than I am in plot development. Sorry

Shad0wryu

I'm all for character development but I'd be lying if I said I wouldn't like to see more than 1 transformation per chapter. It's hard to say, maybe cut the bickering down a little? Or have more dialog per page to get the fighting in there while saving time and pages on scene rendering? All that said, this is your work and you should do with it as you want.

korg

Hi SitriAbyss, I was happy to read your work, there is nothing to say about your graphic style which is very good. However, I will stop my subscription at the end of the month. The ideas of the votes are boring and uninteresting. It’s already seen and without interest. I don't feel like I'm adapting to the way your comics are evolving. I wish you a good continuation.

blabla260

Hi, who wants some fast transformations can go to deviantart. Keep the story. And get rid of voting and do it all how you want it ;)

NotOnMeth

Story is important. Makes the transformations more immersive.

Anonymous

I think it's your best so far... without character development, interactions, and inner conflict it's much less rewarding.

Anonymous

I have been really enjoying the series. The character development has added a nice additional dimension to your work. For me personally, I believe you have a decent balance between character development and transformations.

urattributes rmineee

I have been enjoying the series how you have been doing it. Worth the wait

Anonymous

Ive enjoyed it. Wish it was quicker, but the quality and length is great. Take your time and make em perfect!

Jebediah Kerman

nah fuck the haters unless they actually have good feedback that is constructive keep on tucking i wouldnt be paying for this if i didnt like the product (even if i think some of the patrons lack creativity) though I do desire moooooaaar content

JRM

I like the character development side of things most

Ora494

The transformations have less meaning without character development. You can't keep it interesting by having a transformation with a quick reaction, "Hey would you look at that" "roll again". Quality should be prioritized over quantity. This will also make it more enjoyable for future supporters who look back on your work. Once its done, its done and on here, and you want the final product to be your best work, not something rushed. Your voting structure is good and gives some of the creative ideas a chance. Its not your fault people on here lack creativity.

666888000

Keep with what you're doing.

Oblixx1313

Hey really enjoy your stories and I think developing the characters is important so we can get a connection to who they are. Makes watching something like jessica freak out about being in her moms body a lot more interesting. ( love that part btw can’t wait to see what she dose wile in it)