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Trying my hand at Shantae again to see how things have changed since I submitted my first piece to Eka's Portal: http://aryion.com/g4/view/252155 Still not satisfied with little things here and there, but I hope to have this one done pretty quickly.

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g4 :: Shantae's Meal by Starcrossing

Uploaded: Views: 14,267 File size: 1.05 MiB MIME Type: image/png Resolution: 2076x2076 Comments: 26 Favorites: 182 Hello! I'm new here, I've been lurking this site for a long time and just recently decided to take the plunge and start submitting vore related art.

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JanusDaGuardian

Looks pretty good to me so far. The only way I could say more is if I knew which stage of vore/digestion Shantae is at. e.g: Part-way through digestion. If she's JUST ingested someone though, you may wish to make the stomach bigger/fuller, depending on the pred/prey size ratio, perhaps even giving her some pudge around the hips, thighs, and butt, if that's your vore/unbirthing style.

Starcross

Thanks for the feedback, I've actually fixed this sketch up a lot since I posted it here and most of the changes you suggest have been taken into account. I'm looking forward to posting the complete version soon.