PART FIVE SHOWER SCENE (REWRITE) (Patreon)

Note: This isn't a complete rewrite of the shower scene but I wanted to add more filler and context to the original panels. Once I get confirmation that the artist can do an entire animated page or pages. I will do a further rewrite of the sex scenes themselves and spread the panels out a few more panels or pages as well.

*AFTER THE PANEL WERE JAMAL HEARS THE WOMEN TALKING TO HIM BEHIND HIS BACK*

1. The previous character will be titled as CFB, to indicate she’s the one that’s talking.

Panel Two: Jamal turns around to see the four women standing in the shower room, he looks shocked as he recognizes the woman from before.

CFB: “See girls what did I tell you?”

Woman 2: “You weren’t kidding!”

Woman 3: “Why are his balls so BIG?”

Woman 4: “That’s him soft, geez.”

Panel Three: Jamal has his hands up as if he’s telling the four women to back up, he looks a bit nervous.

Jamal: “Ladies this is the mens room, yours is down the hall and to the right.”

CFB: “Oh we know that, do you smell what I was talking about girls?”

All Three Women: “Oh, yes!”

Panel Four: Woman 3 has a smirk on her face.

Woman 3: “Honestly, while he does smell good he’s not as big as you made him seem. I mean for being soft I guess but not much else.”

Jamal: “Excuse me?”

Woman 3: “Sorry no offense, but I’ve seen bigger.”

Panel Five: Jamal looks a bit annoyed now as he’s talking to her. And he doesn’t notice that his dick is starting to get hard but CFB, woman 1 and woman 2 notice.

Jamal: “I’m actually a very good size…not that it’s any of your business.”

Panel Six: The women are touching themselves in different ways, Woman 3 is approaching Jamal squeezing her wet breasts.

Woman 3: “Oh yeah? Prove it.”

PAGE TWO

*REMOVE THE “NO…NOT AGAIN…I’M SO HORNY” PANEL*

Panel One: ANIMATED

Woman 3 has Jamal’s soft dick in her hand and her grip is able to go around it as she starts to stroke it.

Panel Two: ANIMATED

As she keeps stroking Jamal’s dick is growing and it’s becoming harder and harder for her to maintain her grip around it. The other women in the background are watching with wide eyes.

Panel Three: ANIMATED

Jamal’s dick lifts from Woman 3’s hand is fully hard and his big balls are throbbing.

Panel Four: An X-ray of Jamal’s body shows the pills in his stomach spreading through his body and going to his brain, dick, and balls.

Panel Five: Woman 3 is on her knees about to give Jamal’s throbbing dick a blow job and before she does it starts throbbing. With each throb, it grows bigger in girth. As it grows the other woman look startled. His balls start to expand slightly as well.

Panel Six: Jamal’s massive dick and balls are pulsating in front of the four women, one of them looks nervous, another one is shocked, and the other two are aroused.

Woman 3: “It got BIGGER…how the…how the fuck did it get bigger? It wasn’t this big before!”

Woman 2: “That’s some weird voodoo I’ve never seen something like that before.”

Jamal: “Holy shit! It did! And I’m so…fucking…HORNY RIGHT NOW!”

CONTINUE FROM ORIGINAL COMIC PANELS OF PART 2