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Granduca87

Love this story and where it's going; thank you for sharing it with us. Just a small note of constructive criticism: in the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th panels it seems like her right thigh melds into the mattress where there should be some visible shading and curvature from her weight putting pressure on the bed. Also, I have occasionally noticed this phenomenon with past expansions where the subject's front starts to look like their rear due to the thigh expansion and that appears to be the case in the same three panels. Not sure how best this can be remedied, maybe the torso needs to be rendered a little further forward to make it look less like her top and bottom are reversed when she's laying down. Anyway, sorry for the long description and thanks again!