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My sword, conjured of pure aether and held together by my will alone, plunged into the interwoven threads of aether around me.

Revealed by the God Step godrune, the network of amethyst paths connected every point to every other point around me—through the aetheric realm, I had learned from the last djinn projection. The godrune had changed when I made that realization, and the knowledge had sat dormant in the back of my mind ever since, a deepening of insight but without a clear use.

Until the moment of necessity when I had no choice but to translate knowledge into action.

My senses flowed through the aether, the paths, the in-between space that connected everything together.

I saw Cecilia, the final vestiges of her last attack still burning the atmosphere between us, the many-armed silhouette of mana wrapped around the body she’d taken from Tessia. And Nico beside her, his uncertain gaze drifting between us, his hand reaching for her shoulder but not daring to touch her.

The aether blade plunged deeper into the lightning-bolt network of aether.

I saw Draneeve, his unconscious form curled up beneath a chunk of fallen stone from the roof, his shattered mask in the rubble at his side, and Mawar, the inky shield clinging to her flesh not able to hide the steady flow of blood from her hips, and Melzri in front of her, her bloodshot, blood-colored eyes slicing through the air like her blades as she moved focus from me to Sylvie’s back.

The pathways drew my strike into themselves, guiding it through space itself.

I saw the collection of mana particles shrouding the figure in the shadows of the twisted and broken ceiling, the threads of mana under her control spilling across the chamber and down on Sylvie and Chul like probing fingers in their brains.

The blade struck home, and a scream rent the air.

Each point, connecting each other point. The connective tissue of this world, the aetheric realm. A strike delivered from one space but falling in another.

A beam of violet light hovered for an instant in the air. Shadows rippled, and Viessa formed around it, the blade sprouting out of her sternum. She coiled in on herself like a spider, her scream cutting out just as sharply as it had sounded, but her mouth remained open, her silent cry somehow even worse than the banshee wail. As she writhed, waves of purple hair rose up around her face like a ghostly nimbus.

I pulled the blade free, and it retracted back through the aetheric paths, sliding out of her body so that she plummeted to the ground.

Cecilia and Nico had both glanced toward the source of the scream. Mezlri was frozen in place, horrified and transfixed as she watched the other Scythe bounce off the crumbling tiles. The only noise for a handful of heartbeats was the crackling of phoenix fire.

Despite the blood matting her hair to her head from where Chul had struck her, the pieces of Sylvie’s confused mind slid smoothly back into rhythm with the illusion spell broken. She lunged forward to grab Chul’s arm. His face was slack, his eyes glazed over, and he did not fight her as she jerked him out of the way as Cecilia sent twin blades of mana slicing down toward them.

“Cecilia!” I shouted, unleashing an aetheric blast from my open palm.

Nico dodged to the side, but Cecilia took the blast head on, aether rippling over the surface of the mana condensed around her. With one mana-formed hand, she waved away the last vestiges of the blast like smoke. Still, her attention snapped back to me, her spell slicing deep into the floor but missing my companions.

I let the point of my sword dip toward the ground, but my knuckles were white as I gripped the aetheric handle. “Enough of this.” I looked up from my blade, my gaze hard. “Cecilia, come with me. I’ll try to find a way to separate you and Tessia.”

She scoffed, her cheeks turning bright red, her lips twisted in a disbelieving sneer. “As if I could be so easily swayed—or tricked. You are a liar, Grey, and a bad one.”

Behind her, Nico’s mouth half opened. He hesitated, his throat working dryly, then finally said, “We should hear Arthur out…his insights into aether surpass even the dragons. Maybe he can—”

Cecilia cut him off. “Don’t be fooled.” It was Cecilia’s turn to hesitate. Her eyes flicked from Nico to me, then back again. “He's the one that killed me, remember?”

I couldn’t help but let out a dry, humorless laugh. “Has your mind twisted your memories after all of these years or did Agrona do that for you?” Speaking to Nico, I continued, unable to mask the bitterness in my tone. “The hatred you have for me—the reason you’ve strived so hard to destroy everything I cherish—was based on a lie. I wasn't the one who killed Cecilia. She—”

“Shut up!” Cecilia screeched, the blistering emotion in her voice so raw that it stunned Nico and me both.

“So…” I started, realization dawning slowly, “it isn’t that you didn't remember…but you’ve chosen to lie to and manipulate the only man that has ever loved you—”

Like a sudden hot breath on the back of my neck, black wind slammed into me from behind. A pent-up scream exploded into the air, oozing fury and loss.

I spared a quick glance back, squinting against the storm of void wind.

Melzri was kneeling next to Viessa, the other Scythe’s limp body pulled into her arms. She was rocking back and forth, her mouth half open, disbelief and horror written in every line of her face. The void wind was spilling out of her, a physical manifestation of her grief.

Then her eyes met mine, and she seemed to collapse into herself, the scream becoming a snarl, all that tension exploding downward as she dropped the corpse and leaped into the air, one blade gripped in both hands and trailing soul fire like a dark flag.

Black wind buffeted me, pushing dust and smoke into my eyes, coiling around my limbs and throat, entangling in my hair and attempting to pull me off balance. Tendrils of Cecilia’s mana wove in and around Melzri’s, reinforcing the spell and holding it against my influence.

I felt the regalia imprinted halfway up her spine activate as she channeled mana into it. Mana condensed from the atmosphere and into her spells. Her body swelled with it, hardening and strengthening. The sword blazed darker, the flames roaring ten feet up from the blade. The wind’s claws sharpened, digging deeper and harder. Cold white flames licked her body, a thousand candle flames burning from her pores as her body overloaded on mana.

Aether burst throughout my hips, spine, shoulders, and arms, instantly bringing my blade up into a defensive position with enough power to rip through the clutching wind. The Burst Strike delivered all its potency directly into the center mass of her weapon.

With a gust, the soul flames puffed out like a candle. Steel shrieked, and the sword exploded, sending a shrapnel of broken metal spraying across the throne room. Melzri’s arm wrenched unnaturally, and something inside cracked and splintered.

Her momentum carried her past me, where she stumbled and fell to her knees, clutching her broken hand and arm with the other.

Mana condensed around her, scooping her up and carrying her away from me. “Go,” Cecilia said. “You are no more use here.”

I could have stopped her, could have followed Melzri and struck her and her retainer down before she could withdraw the tempus warp from her dimension artifact, but I had a feeling whatever punishment that Agrona would deal out in response to their failure here would be worse than the quick death I could offer.

As the tempus warp wrapped Melzri, Mawar, and Viessa’s body in mana and pulled them away, I let it happen.

Mana was already coiling around Cecilia, preparing to strike, but Nico flew between us. I was surprised when he turned his back to me. “What did Grey mean just now?” he asked Cecilia.

“It’s all in the past,” she answered, jaw tight and eyes flaring. “It’s not what’s important now—or for the future!”

“I never murdered Cecilia!” I snapped, my ire rising.

Nothing about Cecilia’s or Nico’s actions made sense to me. Nico had apparently made himself a weapon for an evil tyrant purely to revive his dead love, but then he had allowed her to be turned into a weapon as well—a fate identical to that of her last life, which she had killed herself on my blade to escape. In return, she hadn’t even told him the truth and seemed to be using his hatred of me to continue to fuel this confrontation.

He had reached out to me, hadn’t he? Sent me Sylvia’s mana core as a token and a plea so I would help Cecilia—how, I had no idea—but he’d made no effort to stem the violence of this confrontation.

“Liar. I watched as your blade went through her, Grey!” he yelled, bobbing up and down in the air, the mana vibrating around him in agitation.

Cecilia slashed her hand in the air, and I dodged as mana gouged through the floor like a giant scythe blade. “This isn’t even about what happened on Earth! Nico, Agrona wants Grey’s core. That’s it! Grey doesn’t matter anymore, he’s just a road bump between us and getting exactly what you want, don’t you see?”

Before Nico could respond, the mana around Cecilia surged. Thousands of fist-sized chunks of rubble jumped up into the air, flying high above our heads. In an instant, they were burning bright orange, heated from within by her power. I saw what was coming before it happened.

Shield yourself! I sent to Sylvie.

The dark sky was alight with ten thousand new stars. Then the stars began to fall.

Burning meteors punched through what little remained of the ceiling and burst against the floor all around me. The throne room vanished in a cloud of dust and the heat-haze afterglow of a thousand burning projectiles streaking the air.

I sensed more than saw the swelling of mana around Sylvie and Chul as the first of the meteors struck them.

I dodged back from one meteor, pivoted as another glanced off my shoulder, then slipped into the woven paths of God Step to avoid a cluster of the projectiles.

The palace was crumbling, the air choked with heat and dust. My ears rang from the concussive blast of the meteor shower, and sulfur burned my nose and lungs.

The beating of wings sent gusts of wind billowing through the palace, carrying away the dust in large swirls and revealing a towering silhouette.

Dark scales reflected starlight and huge golden eyes glowered around at the wreckage. Sylvie’s graceful draconic neck lifted high toward the heavens, and she bared rows of fangs like swords. A long, serpentine tail shifted through the rubble, sending broken stone cascading into the many gouges ripped through the floor.

She gave a shake of her neck and wings, dislodging the meteors that had penetrated her mana shields to lodge in her scales.

Chul stepped out from her shadow, unhurt as he gazed up at the dragon in amazement.

The beating of Sylvie’s wings had revealed the full devastation of Cecilia’s spell. The entire center of the structure had been leveled; the throne room was all but gone, just a pit in the ground.

I felt a shift in the aether around me. The relic armor had left Sylvie when she transformed, and I could once again feel it tether to me. Touching that tether, I conjured the armor.

Cecilia gazed down at me in disappointment as the black scales feathered into being over my flesh. Beside her, Nico was pale and fidgeting nervously.

I held his dark eyes. “How do you expect me to help someone who doesn’t want it?” I asked, unconvinced he would respond. “Or was your message just meant to throw me off…”

“Message?” Cecilia snapped, looking sharply back over her shoulder at Nico. “What message?”

I wasn’t surprised that he hadn’t told her, but I seized on the opportunity to keep them both talking. “Nico sent me a gift and asked me to help you. He said I ‘owed you a life.’ Because you never told him what you did.” My tone grew sharper as I spoke, my anger burning just below the surface. “You killed yourself on my blade, Cecilia! Do you even remember why?”

She blanched, and I saw in her haunted gaze the memory of that moment, and I knew she remembered all too well.

“W-what?” Nico choked out.

Cecilia turned her back on me, reaching for Nico, although her fingers stopped just short of touching him. “It’s more complicated than that, I—”

“You knew they’d use him against you, Cecilia,” I cut in, unable to mask the frustration and bitterness in my voice. “You made me kill you because you knew there wasn’t any other way out, not for you, not for Nico. You died to protect him!” I scoffed, clenching my fists so hard that the bones ached. “Damnit, I don’t understand either of you. There is nothing to justify what you’re doing for Agrona—”

“Enough!” Cecilia screamed.

The word resounded throughout the ruined palace, growing louder and louder with each reverberation. The few remnants of structure around us collapsed. My hands clapped to my ears. I felt blood trickle from my nose. To my right, Chul leaned on his weapon, his arms wrapped around his head, his teeth bared like an animal. Above us both, Sylvie’s head lowered, her eyes closed against the punishing volume.

Taking a steadying breath, I reached for the mana with my aether. The manifestation was wild and uncontrolled, lacking the overpowering force of Cecilia’s focus. I broke it, and the noise faded away, leaving an echo ringing in my ears.

Cecilia had already turned back to Nico. “I’m sorry! I was afraid you were still under Agrona’s influence, and that something bad might happen if I told you.”

“It’s true?” he asked, his voice barely a whisper. “Grey didn’t—”

She shook her head, her body tense, her limbs pulling inward like she wanted to curl up into the fetal position.

Nico pulled away, aghast. “But I saw…”

“I’m sorry,” Cecilia repeated quietly. She waited for a moment, watching him carefully. “Does this mean your mind isn’t controlled by Agrona?”

Nico dragged his hands down his face. “Whatever he’d done to inflate my rage and bury the talents of my previous life leaked out of my core when Grey pierced it at the Victoriad.” His voice was flat, totally devoid of emotion. “But I knew what he’d done to your memories, Cecilia. I knew—I helped…and I thought you were still…” He hung his head, his staff dangling limply at his side. “I’m so sorry…”

They were completely engrossed in one another, their worlds having shrunk to the few feet around themselves in any direction. A cold, distant part of my mind—the piece of King Grey that I had resurrected to survive my trials in Alacrya—recognized the opportunity. A quick thrust of my aether blade and I could end the threat they each posed right there. Whatever Agrona planned for the Legacy made even Kezess Indrath fearful. Striking them both down would end that threat, and possibly the war.

After all, I hadn’t discovered some fatal flaw in Cecilia’s magic. Fighting her had brought me no closer to understanding how to separate Tessia and Cecilia. Tess was a warrior, no stranger to risking her life in the field of combat. She had been ready to die fighting in the dungeons beneath the Beast Glades, in the forests of Elenoir, in the city streets against Nico and Cadell…

She would understand. She would forgive me.

But could I ever forgive myself? I’d already denied myself the chance once, choosing to strike out at Viessa instead of Cecilia when the opportunity had presented itself. Did I really think I was prepared to end Tessia’s life alongside Cecilia’s?

“How can you be so certain?” Nico asked, his voice raising in frustration and drawing my attention back to them. “Because I don’t know anymore.”

After a beat of hesitation, Cecilia took Nico’s hands in her own. “Those are just the words of that awful Scythe sticking in your head. If Agrona can reincarnate us from across the universe—bring us into this world and make us powerful with only the resources he has now—why wouldn’t he be able to send us back with all the power of Epheotus at his disposal?”

There was a pause, and she dropped his hands, turning to look at me with dawning realization. “Is that why you took that dragon’s core? To ask Grey for help? You…want us to turn against Agrona?”

Nico’s pale face went even whiter. “No, of course not—”

“Grey can’t help us!” she shouted, her voice magically amplified but lacking the crushing resonance of her last sonic attack. “We’ve given everything to this, Nico, to Agrona. And we’re so close! Don’t let Grey manipulate you, he just wants his precious elf girl back. He’d kill me to get to her, you know he would.”

Nico also looked at me, frowning with confusion. “I…”

“Maybe I would,” I interjected honestly, my tone bitter cold. “I’m sorry I couldn’t save you back then, Cecilia. I was so engrossed in my stupid quest to reach the top—to be powerful enough to right the wrongs that happened to our home, to Headmaster Wilbeck—that I ignored everything else.”

The air between us changed, becoming charged with aether as I reached inward, pulling at all the strength and determination I could manifest. My gaze sharpened, aether swirling in response to this pull, as if it was acknowledging my will. All my focus and energy honed in on Cecilia. She stared back, those turquoise eyes hard and unyielding.

“And I'm sorry, Nico. I don't think I can do what you asked.”

God Step wrapped around me, and I appeared at Tessia's side, aetheric lightning racing across the scales of the relic armor. A blade shivered into being in my fist, poised to plunge into the hollow at the base of her throat.

Cecilia’s arms, both flesh and mana, flowed smoothly into position to block the strike, just as I’d anticipated.

Aether hardened beneath my foot, and I pushed off it with all the well-orchestrated force of Burst Step. The platform shattered, but not before I took the near-instant step to Nico, my arm moving faster than sight as I simultaneously activated Burst Strike.

Barrier after barrier of mana hardened the air between my blade and its target. Each one cracked and then shattered, one by one, the air between us bursting with showers of mana-like fireworks. The blade came down on Nico’s shoulder.

The last layer of mana surrounding him quaked, and Nico hurtled down into the rubble with a crash. A second later, I landed lightly next to the crater, my defenses already turning toward Cecilia.

The ruined palace burst into motion.

Cecilia, her eyes bulging as she stared down at the crater, and her mouth open in a silent scream, took hold of all the mana around us and dragged at it, pulling it to herself. Aether spilled from me in response, fighting to shield my companions from being drained in an instant.

Even as I warded her mana-draining spell, I felt mana condensing as she prepared a second attack.

A flash of bright orange flame drew my eye to Chul’s weapon as it flew like a meteor toward Cecilia.

All of her mana arms flowed around her, stopping the weapon midair.

It exploded into a golden fireball as a beam of pure mana bisected the crumbling throne room. Phoenix fire and dragon mana whirled, combining into a maelstrom of destructive force, and Cecilia vanished inside the detonation.

Setting my footing, I conjured a second aether blade above my left shoulder, then a third in position to shadow the blade in my hand. Finally, a fourth appeared near my left hip. Aether exploded in sequence throughout my body, driving me forward. With all my concentration, I swung all four blades.

Something impacted against my chest mid-Burst Step. The world turned faster than I could make sense of, and I impacted something hard. I was back on my feet before I’d made sense of what happened, with Sylvie towering over me, one claw supportive against my back.

I winced as the last of the combined magic of Chul and Sylvie swirled into Cecilia’s body. She had absorbed it all.

Through Realmheart I could see how her body broke down the lavender-tinged pure mana that Sylvie had projected. The sight sent cold shivers through my body; without a core, the process seemed much faster—almost instant—and much more horrible.

‘She can absorb even formed spells?’ Sylvie thought, aghast.

Cecilia’s hungry eyes drank in the sight of purple-tinged mana flowing over her hand and between her fingers—dragon mana. For an instant, she seemed lost in thought, almost…amazed.

From the corner of my eye, I saw Chul leap into the air, his fist wrapped in a claw of shaped flames. Cecilia, intent on the mana she’d absorbed from Sylvie, was slow to react.

Blood iron spikes manifested from her shadow as the claw slashed across her throat, catching and deflecting the strike. The heat of Chul’s spell cut through the black metal and slashed across Cecilia’s jaw as she jerked away. Mana condensed into a battering ram that slammed into Chul and sent him careening away.

Cecilia lifted her hand to her jaw, but the blow had left only streaks of ash across her fair skin.

Nico rose from the crater his body had formed, his staff in hand, all four gems glowing. Blood ran freely from his nose and mouth, and his arm hung limply at his side. And yet, as he watched Chul land heavily on his feet among the rubble, he still had the energy to fly after him, blood iron spikes firing ahead of him like a dozen black arrows.

With a heavy beat of her wings, Sylvie launched into the air, whirled above, and then dove at Cecilia, claws, fangs, and tail flashing.

Resummoning my aether blades, I rushed to support my bond. Bright beams of violet energy hacked and thrust at Cecilia from every direction. One struck her shoulder but rebounded off her natural barrier of mana. Another thrust into her thigh but slid aside. Sylvie’s tail batted her off balance, and my third strike landed solidly across her ribs.

The mana gave way, and the aether blade bit into the flesh there.

She hissed out a curse, and the ground vanished from beneath my feet. Leaping off a shaky clump of hardened aether, I drove forward with all four aether blades at once, knocking Cecilia back into my bond. Sylvie’s claw came crashing down on Cecilia, whose legs gave out as she sank down to one knee.

Bolts of mana burst outward from Cecilia, peppering Sylvie’s huge body. I could feel her weakening with each blow.

Chul’s battle roar filled the air as I sensed Nico attempting to fly in our direction. I split my attention, hacking and slashing at Cecilia with my conjured weapons with most of my focus, but turning a sliver to the battle between Chul and Nico.

Chul was wrestling with Nico in the air, the staff pulled back across Nico’s throat. With a downward thrust, he slammed the much smaller Nico into the ground face first, then his fists were wrapped in orange flames as they began to pummel my old friend.

A black spike shot up from the ground and punched through Chul’s forearm, but he only ripped it free, turned it point down, and raised it over his head as he prepared to slam it into Nico’s prone form.

A bright light swallowed the battleground before the blow could fall.

Sylvie! I shouted in my mind as I felt her mana being dragged from her.

“You should have known you couldn’t hold out against me for long.” Cecilia’s voice resounded through the battlefield as the light dimmed to reveal streams of mana pouring from Sylvie and into Cecilia.

My heart missed several beats as desperation overtook me. The aetheric paths called to me, and I stepped into them.

I appeared between them, mana pouring past me on all sides, but I didn’t release my concentration on the God Step godrune. The lightning-bolt paths opened in every direction in front of me.

Between Cecilia and me was a nearly impenetrable shell of overlapping layers of mana. So intense was her concentration of mana that it warped even the aetheric pathways, deflecting them so that they bulged out, blurred, and grew difficult to trace.

I listened. Past the hum of mana, the shouts from Nico and Chul, the angry his of Cecilia’s breath. Through the crackle of flames and the clatter of stones. I listened, as Three Steps had taught me, to the aether’s beckoning call.

And I drove the sword forward.

The blade slipped into the pathways, disappearing just above my hand and appearing again inside the shield to slide up into and between her ribs.

Her body was moving almost before the blade appeared, and the strike missed her heart.

I pulled my sword back, prepared to thrust again, but something else came with it. I hesitated for an instant, uncertain of what I was seeing. The blade of my sword was wrapped in lavender-tinged mana. Suddenly something else was in control of the blade, and it was twisting around in my wrist to slash across my own ribs. As the mana-wrapped aether struck my armor, Cecilia’s mana exploded out of her, hammering my own weapon into me.

I rocked backward, and the blade’s edge drove through both my aetheric barrier and the relic armor, carving into the flesh and bone beneath before striking my core.

Nausea ripped the strength from my limbs, so extreme and ever-present that I fell to my knees. The sword vanished, my aetheric barrier dissolved, Realmheart faded, and even my sense of the atmospheric motes of aether around the battlefield flickered in and out.

I pressed one hand against my side; hot blood gushed between my fingers. There was no sudden rush of aether to the wound, no itching warmth as the flesh knitted back together.

I reached for God Step, but there was no glow of response from the godrune on my spine.

‘Arthur!’ Sylvie screamed in my head at the same time as she unleashed a fearful roar.

Cecilia’s eyes had gone wide, blood leaking from the corners of her mouth as it fell open in disbelief. Her hands were pressed to the gory wound in her side where my blade had ripped out from between her ribs.

A blazing creature of fire and light swept past her. I saw only the outline of wings, blindingly bright against the black sky, before a hot claw curled around me and lifted me up, then bitterly warm wind, and we sped away from the palace, the city of Nirmala rapidly diminishing behind us as we gained altitude.

Sylvie! I thought desperately, panic writhing in my intestines.

‘I’m here!’ she practically screamed in my mind, her nerves fried, so weak from the amount of mana that had been taken from her that she was struggling to maintain the draconic form. ‘But they’re coming, Arthur.’

I stared through the darkness at the distant palace, smoldering with tiny flames and sending up little plumes of black smoke that gathered in the sky above it. There was a spark in the night, like a shooting star chasing us across the sky. Slower, listing through the air as he struggled to keep up, was Nico.

Chul let out a screeching caw that split the night sky like thunder. “Couldn’t finish the slimy…little…”

A beam of white hot light split the sky, narrowly missing Chul’s wing. “Can’t…keep…this…up…” he moaned, his voice husky and full of fire.

I reached for the extradimensional storage rune and the tempus warp within, but it didn’t respond.

I fought to calm the rapid beating of my heart so I could focus and turned my senses inward, inspecting my core. The wound was deep and bleeding extensively. My sense for aether was rapidly fading in and out, and I could intermittently sense the particles themselves.

All of the aether struggling to heal my body was focused on my core. A bright line had been scratched into the surface by the strike, and my healing aether was slowly filling it in, neglecting the rest of my body as it did so.

“Arthur—can’t…”

My heart flew up into my throat as I plunged downward, Chul—once again humanoid—flipping end over end in the air next to me as my blood rained upward past us both.

A black on black shadow closed in on us, and Sylvie scooped us each up in her talons just as another beam of mana lanced past.

‘We’re not going to make it far—Arthur, you’re hurt. Really hurt.’

Lacking the time or energy to explain, I simply let her into my mind as I reached for the aether around my core. I willed it to flow down to my arm, where the spellform for the dimensional storage was. A trickle responded. I pushed again, harder, pleading as I impressed my intent upon the aether. A little more broke away.

The spellform tingled in my flesh.

Cursing, I dragged my forearm across the point of Sylvie’s talon, leaving behind a deep cut.

Another pocket of aether traveled down my arm.

My mind linked with the dimensional space where my equipment was kept, and I withdrew the tempus warp. Sylvie shifted her claw to pin it next to me.

Shit, I can’t activate it, I thought.

Sensing Sylvie’s intention, I watched as she shook Chul in her other claw, then pinched him hard even as she dipped beneath a third beam from Cecilia.

Chul gritted his teeth as he snapped back to consciousness. “Gah, what…?”

“The tempus warp!” Sylvie boomed.

His eyes struggled to focus on me, then the device pinned next to me.

“You need to…activate the device…” I choked out, blood filling my mouth as I spoke.

Sylvie moved her claws together, and Chul rested his hand on top of the tempus warp. His mana flowed weakly.

Sylvie gasped as a beam struck her, and we dipped in the air. Her claws loosened, and the tempus warp shifted. I wrapped my arms around it, my head swimming as my wound exploded with pain at the motion and effort.

‘She’s catching up!’

Chul pushed out more mana, and I programmed the device.

Sylv, transform, I thought, waiting.

Her own thoughts came back to me not in words but in pure disbelief, tinged with the suspicion that I had lost my faculties due to blood loss.

Just do it!

Her head curled around to look down at me, meeting my eye. Resignation leaked through our connection, and she was suddenly wreathed in mana. The claws around me, Chul, and the tempus warp receded, and Sylvie shrank back into the form of a teenage girl. We fell.

I activated the tempus warp.

A portal appeared in the air below us, and we all plunged through.

On the other side, we spilled across the ground like rolled bones, the tempus warp bouncing before crashing into the middle of a rose bush.

Untwisting myself, I stared through the portal into Cecilia’s enraged face as the shining oval flickered out.

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Comments

Godspell_Marcutio

Best day of the week by far! TBATE DAY!

ChrisA

Wow, Impressive chapter. It was so long I thought it was a book.

Robert Thompson

Cecilia as a character gets worse and worse. Shes so self absorbed its ridiculous. What would she even get put of being able to go back to her old world? Its nonsense. With a new body her and nico could live here and be happy

Voror

We're never getting Tess back, are we? Christ. Cecilia has to die. She wasted her chance here with this whole display.

Ian

At least, Turtle didn't kill Tessia.

Voror

Only a matter of time at this rate. Or regulated to a background character until the very end aside from whenever she gets to get a word in during a Cecilia chapter.

PrixNDix

So his core has a crack on it

David

Bitch has to die.

Godspell_Marcutio

Exactly! I think Turtle is winding it up to make us hate her, so that when Arthur kills her, people aren’t up in arms that Arthur isn’t going to have Tess in the end. Unless he fully gets insight into Aroa’s Reqrium some how. But with this chapter, I highly expect Arthur to really try and kill Cecilia next confrontation. He seemed ready in the end there. Nico is definitely going to die I feel like it

Raymond M

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck…

Yoursinta

You are kidding he actually lost after all that I might be done

Tim

Well, it's settled. Cecillia is a complete piece of shit and, honestly, Grey dodged a bullet like Neo in the Matrix when he ceded her to Nico.

Voror

Oh that isn't going to work. I'll just be livid at the overall direction we went with all this

Trevor Poole

I don't understand the people complaining about this. I think this was a near perfect chapter. The flow, the writing, the action, the consequences. Absolutely amazing.

James

This is absolute bullshit. 1) How the fuck does she manage to strike ARTHUR’S CORE by enveloping his aether sword with mana through an aetheric path ??? Like bitch, can you be more OP ? 2) She has 0 reasons to do what she does, or to be angry at Arthur, or to refuse his help. She even desperately tries to kill him..! It’s like she has never met him before. The dude took care of her since she was a child. He masters Aether, which affects time, space and fate ! If there is one mf that can help you, it’s him ! 3) How can she be perfectly fine after being pierced through the ribs ? 4) How can Nico survives being pummeled by Chul, a full grown phoenix Asura ?! And still be able to fly after that ? I don’t know if all of this was intentional but I ended up extremely frustrated by this episode.

Brianna Simmons

I don't know if Cecilia and Nico, deserve one another but Cecilia needs to die like soon!!! Nico knows now, and you (aka Cecilia) know that Grey would never kill you 😡 purpose, and the Bitch still want to kill Grey, help Agrona, and you think you can still walk into the sunset with Nico, girl-bye-bye . But please 🙏 😢 😫 save Tessia, Tess and Art should be together ❤️ we've wanted this long for maybe a happy ending

Homer L Sanchez

Arthur stop, you're just making her stronger lol

sa1Yo

Man despite expectations Arthur got his ass whopped a bit. So Aether used in conjunction with a core is slightly weaker than Mana at base integration combined with Cecilias obvious insane understanding of how to almost perfectly control Mana.

sa1Yo

Now with Arthurs core broken in an almost comical manner it would seem his path leads to a full dijin-asque form. Assimilated with the Aether. What an interesting prospect.

Brianna Simmons

I hate to say it, but I agree. Because Tess might die , but Cecilia needs to die. Nico, I know will die, but would it be bad if Nico teams up with Arthur to kill Agrona or maybe kill Cecilia 🤔 because at this point Cecilia turning into mad spoiled princess like Dynars from Game of Thones in the scene she goes mad

sa1Yo

Imo she is a extremely scared child (emotionally) now powerful and understandably selfish and untrusting as her entire previous lifetime she was all but loved or in the hands of trustworthy individuals…

Joe Fabing

I do not understand eather, why is she able to manipulate aether with mana when that should be the opposite ?

Jerry

About time Arthur used talk no jutsu on these two absolute children. Nico and her will have a lot to talk about after this. Along with what Tess has to say to her. I wonder when she started to draw in Sylvie’s mana she got a taste of what controlling aether feels like and that’s how she sent his sword back to him. Or she got a taste of what dragons are made of and why only they can use aetheric spells. Probably during this fight we just made Cecilia much much stronger All in all great chapter. Frustrating to say the least but what all this can lead up to is more important than my feelings on the children Arthur has to deal with

Aaron Olsen

Wow what a chapter very intense, I am not a fan of when the MC gets slapped down like that. it's like watching your favourite pub burn down not fun at all. So back to the drawing board with a damaged core yay, time to build up our MC again sigh. But this is good for character development, and I am looking forward to what happens next. Thank you TurtleMe for a great story that I can't wait to read each week.

sa1Yo

This. It just made me crave Friday’s ever more…

Chad

No you're insane. Tess is barely better than Cecilia. I could see tess making all the same mistakes. Caera is best girl. She's so mature and honorable. Literally the perfect woman. Not sure why there are so many tess fans

James

Oh, and I forgot : 5) What’s the point of having a stylish aether armor if it never blocks anything and gets pierced in every fight. Mana, Aether, everything can pierce it. Like, I don’t know what to say. This artifact seems useless to me. Can anyone here reminds me the use of it ?? 6) I’m done with Sylvie only being useful for scooping people in dragon form. Last episodes, she was in a transe being useless again… (ultra annoying btw) Cecilia in comparison got so many powerups we all lost the count of it. Isn’t she a dragon ?? From Indrath clan ?? Reborn with the use of an ocean of mana and aether ?? Please guys, explain to me all this shit.

sa1Yo

Although it seems he went a little kamikaze on that strike, either her heart severed or … well crap xd

Chad

Tess is barely better than Cecilia. I could see tess making all the same mistakes. Caera is best girl. She's so mature and honorable. Literally the perfect woman. Not sure why there are so many tess fans. I agree she hopefully will get saved but whether she does or doesn't art needs to wind up with caera

Brianna Simmons

And at This point Cecilia needs to die and maybe clone Tess's body and core where she can use half her power and Cecilia power .

T_Don

Arthur is pathetic at fights, literally gifted untold power in the form of aether and can’t even win actually getting his own blade used against himself. What’s the point of god step if the enemy can always respond to it, it’s not teleportation but rather slightly fast movement since every single enemy he uses it against they always react in full and seem to land counter attacks, what a joke. Just shows he’s so weak he can never win unless he has destruction. Forget fighting the dragons he can’t even win against a whiny brat. Seems he needs an aether integration cause he’s still so pathetically weak he can forget saving anyone. Doesn’t even have the conviction to kill the enemy just goes to show he was likely an awful king and just some puppet. Even after reincarnation he’s not an adult in a child’s body but a child in a child’s body

Jonathan Lonstein

Well calling it now after this chapter Nico may have seconds thoughts and switch sides

James

You went a bit overboard here, but… honestly, there is some truth in your words. The Scythes should all have died on this fight. Period. And Nico too, who strangely managed to survive against Chul (!!!).

ToxicArrow 027

To be fair one of the Jin mentioned if the enemy has sufficient control over mana they could bypass Aether or rather Arthur's control of it. Honestly the whole point of Art losing is to build up pressure and hit home the point that Arthur needs fate in order to succeed. While I do have mixed feelings about Cecilia,Turtle has made this into a three way story for a reason, plus it's been building up since what book 5!? I doubt we're going to get a fast conclusion so soon

Aaron South

Arthur needs to unlock the next keystone asap

Voror

No, they aren't insane at all. Only time I'm going to bother with this, but it's because Tess is a much more interesting character overall than Caera to me. We've seen her grow, make mistakes, and try to improve from there. And her approach and attempts to try and reach out to Cecilia have been really well done and show great development with her even if Cecilia is too much of a selfish idiot to bother. Arthur's relationship is also fairly well developed with Tess and been a cornerstone of his development into a better person in this life. All this is why she has fans and people rooting for her to come back. Caera by comparison is fine and I guess I see why people like her, but she's simply not very interesting to me and other people. If she dipped the rest of the story I don't think it'd be a huge loss though of course that won't happen.

Voror

Better yet just find a way to rip Cecilia out of the body or something, though given the way things go in this story it won't be possible

VibEz

I knew he didn’t stab sylvie, everyone had me freaking out

RJ

Grey can’t fight out of a paper bag when it matters this was a frustrating fight.

OTSojourner

Yeah, Cecilia can no longer be redeemed… Even with everything out there and all the information on the table, she still chose to fight for a hideous cause… Unless Turtle actually explains her actions here in this chapter is a great way, she need to die…

OTSojourner

It was a good chapter, Turtle. :) I just can’t see a way for her to be redeemed and it make since.

Breamson 𒉭

Nah I‘m sorry, first time I feel really unsatisfied with a chapter. Like crazy shit happened but Cecilias character just doesn’t make any sense. What was the point of bringing Tess back, when Cecilia would just get even worse? What’s the point of Cecilias last pov, where she literally hesitates to hunt Arthur down, when now she does it without hesitation? I feel like these 2 chapters were just a set up so that Cecilia would completely turn against Arthur and I don’t like it. Nicos character development is for nothing now as well, because Arthur now actually tried killing Cecilia, so he feels betrayed (again). Cecilias character can’t be saved anymore and I just don’t know anymore. No point in Cecilia Povs and showing her inner conflict, when she just becomes even worse after that. On Arthur’s part, if he gets the resolve to kill Cecilia, then at least don’t let him try to kill Nico first because it doesn’t make any sense. He had the element of surprise on his side and could’ve probably killed Cecilia instead of slashing at Nico. And who killed the Sovereign now? Really gotta say all 3 of Arthur, Cecilia and Nico got butchered in this chapter on a writing Lvl imo

Justin Barnett

I think greys problem in this fight is his lack of versatility. In raw power he’s close to Cecilia, but she’s much more flexible than him. Not to mention he doesn’t have Regis, so he’s not fighting at full power in the first place.

CZPokeblade

Mawar lives!!!!!!!!!!!

Justin Barnett

When arthur mastered the realmheart rune, he said both forces influenced and shaped the other. I took that to mean mana can be used to influence aether. As to how Cecellia did it, I think she ripped sylvies mana out of her and used that. Dragons mana can control aether, so by stealing it she was able to influence his sword

Tophat Jones

I don't see any issue with Cecilia being able to use mana to move Arthur's aether sword. It's been explained that mana and aether can both exert influence over each other. However, her being able to do it so quickly and with such precision immediately after being impaled by a sword is the part that makes me a bit incredulous. That said, given her reaction after it happened, I think hitting his core might have been a fluke.

Michi

Ok, so I have been a patron for turtle for awhile at this point. I have never felt so perplexed at a chapter of TBATE in my life. The monkey side of my brain absolutely loves this chapter and the action and chaos that this ensues on the rest of the story. At the same time the logic part of my brain absolutely hates the direction of this chapter. Like Cecilia and nicos character are acting so inconsistent compared to there former decisions and growth in previous chapters. The chapter feels like it nullifies all character growth from Arthur/Grey, Cecilia, and nico all at the same time. Like is this story just going to divert back to what the happened on their earth in their previous lives?

Bernardo De Cabrio

This chapter definitely brought up more questions than anything. 1) Why did Arthur and crew not bring up Mordain, a phoenix that should be pretty knowledgeable about reincarnation (the option was even mentioned in the chapter Caera gave Arthur the core)? 2) Did Draneeve get knocked out on purpose and is about to snitch on Nico? 3) What is the reason? Normally, I stay pretty neutral on character choices and behaviors, but this time both Arthur's and Cecilia's actions are 'very strange' to put it mildly. Mainly because it felt like Arthur gave up way to fast and Cecilia still not realizing that even if they get send back, they will never be able to live in peace as long as she is the legacy. 4) How did Nico survive getting beaten up as badly as he did? I get Chul not having much mana left with how Cecilia basically dominates the entire mana around them, but for him to even get up and fly after them is beyond me. 5) Can we assume that Sylvia's core is now basically set to be Arthur's now that he has gone and busted it up again? Or will he just heal it like normal and we are back where we started off? Little bonus on the side: Cecilia grasping aether doesn't surprise me as much as it should. I mean we basically knew about the possibility since Myre told Arthur that in order to perceive aether a certain amount of knowledge on all the four basic elements is needed. Tho I am certain that she will never be able to use it the way Arthur or even the djinn do, since she will most likely adapt the forceful approach Kezess has and will most likely not compromise to learn and accept. Edit: If she does, then even I'm going to call bs. Edit 2: I feel like a lot of pieces are missing. As if everything that happened in the last two chapters has been made strange on purpose either to distract or to set up something else entirely.

James

Because it doesn’t make any sense. - The Scythes surviving - Chul, a full grown Asura trained to kill, who can’t kill Nico (who has a damaged core) - Cecilia nonsense : she has 0 reasons to do what she does. She is beyond irrational and illogical. Arthur was her savior in their previous life. She recovered her memory and still tries DESPERATELY to kill him ??? - Cecilia who managed to stab Arthur’s Core by enveloping his aether with Mana, all the while being stabbed herself. She learned that in the moment while sustaining heavy damage ? - Arthur, who could have killed them all ages ago, finally makes up his mind and launch a surprise attack at NICO ? The hell ? How can you be a god at fighting and have 0 strategy ? - Sylvie being only useful for scooping people in dragon form, couldn’t even scratch a Scythe. - Cecilia, hurt and bleeding, manages to chase them ? I don’t know man, that’s a lot honestly. If so many readers are frustrated/disappointed, there might be a reason behind it.

Tim

What? Lol. Did we read different books? Her previous life was no different at all, she literally killed herself because of all the bad shit that was goin down and WOULD go down. In this world shes reunited with the two people she trusted the most...instead of working to clear things up...shes whining and crying and using strength to throw a super tantrum in the hopes that an unknown entity in power LIKE HER PAST LIFE will make due his promises.

James

Definitely a fluke. The girl has not only all the mana in the world but also all the luck up her ass. What about everything else I mentioned ? What about that FUCKING armor ?

Tim

@Brianna I would actually like to see Nico join Art now, or at least throw him more aid. Art really threw him for a loop, and now he knows that Grey didnt CHOOSE to kill Cecil, I think that might seriously throw a wrench into his mental wellbeing as he comes to terms with the things hes done to get her back.....hopefully.

Soundd Wavess

Its official arthur is on fraud watch. If regis was there he wouldve cooked tho

Voror

I guess it's just Fate repeating itself. Maybe it's forcing them to make the same decisions as before or something though that's just kind of dumb.

Michi

I personally would hate if it went that direction. Honestly if turtle wants to kill off any of these three characters I would rather agrona or a different Asura to do it.

Giovanni Selva

Oh my fucking god Cecilia wins over Arthur... Aether is supposed to be so much better than mana and he's an incredible fighter who also just got the triple core but no, cucked again. I don't want her to die but I want Arthur to lose to her even less. Mary Sue character to the bone. On another note, stop bringing help, you're just feeding Cecilia. If we go by common sense you alone should be able to beat her and even if it's not true it's still way better than having to cover for 2 or more people during the fight, on top of trying to deal damage as well.

Voror

Nico is too devoted to Cecilia though maybe he'll struggle more now. Though since Arthur also outright tried killing Cecilia maybe we're just back to where we were before and none that reveal mattered at all. Honestly I could see him bailing if Cecilia turns on him

Aaron Pugh

Still my favorite series but man I’m struggling. Cecilia is starting to ruin the story for me. Too inconsistent. Now she can control his ether while in the pathways? I no longer want a “redemption arc” for her. She had too many chances. Just die already

AntiMatterDynamite

no no no no no no no you cant do this to us turtleme no no no

Breamson 𒉭

Just feels like TM wrote himself in a corner and didn’t know how to get out. He can’t let Cecilia join Arthur, because then the story is kinda over and Agrona as an antagonist becomes irrelevant, because he lost the weapon he needed to become a threat towards epheotus. So he had to creat such a fight, that is completely inconsistent with every character involved, so Cecilia and Nico could fully devote themselves to Agrona. There was absolutely no reason for them not to work together at this point and it destroys any development Nico and Cecilia had. Always looked forward to Cecilia Povs to see her inner struggle and to see Tess again, but now I just don’t care anymore. Her pov is gonna be so annoying

Austin

Well in fairness they went there to fight a sovereign not her

Klaudia Roszak

So… just like Cecilia admitted in her POV, she’s unable to accept that all her wrongdoings were unjustified, and now showed how scared she is of facing the consequences. She’s blinded by ignorance and not able to make “ the right choice”. Just assuming we know what’s good and wrong. I get it, like I wouldn’t like telling someone that “yeah, I was fooled into becoming a mass murder”. Ppl generally like to believe that they’re good, and at the same time are able to do and say things that destroy lives. But taking into account her previous life and reality of the current, people’s lives don’t seem to be that significant, like she was always above it all. So it’s almost as if she’s just a brat who made mistakes beyond repair and just sticks to her rightfulness🙈 Really sad. It’ll be difficult to get redemption, especially with how we readers don’t sympathize with her and vote for her death. Even if she sacrifices herself or in any other way decides to fight for “greater good”, because it won’t matter. She won’t be forgiven. And she probably knows that too… so she could’ve as well just blindly fight for what *might* help her avoid the mess she caused.You know, not everyone has to be heroically altruistic, who cares about annihilation of the world you don’t know anything about when you can start over in your world and make everyone bow to your feet. And even if that’s not possible, either way all that’s awaiting you is hell. Your pick what’s more bearable

Austin

Honestly starting to get Rachel from tog vibes form Cecilia

Brunde

To be fair that's life, people attempt to change and do better but often end up failing and falling back on what is familiar and easy. I think their decisions make total sense in these past few chapters. One, Agrona seemed to have really screwed with Cecilia somehow this last time and she is feeding into his lies more since. Two, they're in a life or death situation, falling back into what their original character is and what they know makes total sense in a high pressure situation. Three, Cecilia has been manipulative this whole time with Nico and she can't let that control slip so of course she isn't going to stick to the progress she seems to have made when it means hurting/losing Nico in any way. Arthur has had so many chapters to wrestle with how he is going to confront this situation. There's two whole lives of intracicies and issues at play here, that doesn't go away like it's nothing. We've watched him continue to struggle with who he used to be as Grey and the choices he's made. He's tried to do better but presented with the toxic past of Cecilia and Nico it's easy for that to melt away and let blind emotion take over. Not to mention he has Sylvie and Chul to protect here, he has no conceivable way to rescue Tessia right now and is being pushed by hundreds of others opinions to kill the Legacy.

Michi

You make completely fair points here and I don’t totally disagree with them but I do want to make some counter points. I think it is fair for them to slide into their previous egos/decisions. What doesn’t make sense is the rational of Arthur in this chapter. Normally he is quite rational and levelheaded sometimes to the point of being unrealistic. His decision to attack nico (instead of Cecilia) while they were trying to wrestle with this situation was beyond boneheaded. Cecilia certainly is beyond redemption so to a point her character was consistent in the fact that she is childish and not introspective about the situation. If Arthur was truly trying to protect Sylvie and Chul then he should not have attacked nico and tried to resolve the situation without violence. Also Nico was starting to understand the reality of himself living a lie just for Arthur to attack him??? I don’t know the entire writing direction of this chapter feels very off to me. Normally I’m a turtle apologist but this just doesn’t make sense.

Demon NTY

The armor was mentioned to be able to be pierced by people adept in both mana and aether by the djinn who created it. It's pretty much only useful against scythe level opponents and below. Also chul isn't a full grown asura he is a half asura half djinn. He is at most as strong as cadell. Sylvie is getting a bit annoying in my opinion too. My guess is that due to her shift in aether Branch compatibility she has to relearn some stuff.

Shuuya Kano

How the hell did the weakest of the scythes survive chul’s attack.

Steven Perchez

So much wrong with this chapter. It’s always been emphasized that aether can influence mana but not the other way around. Yet she can control his aetheric blade with her own mana and use it against him? This was was one of the biggest issues I had with the chapter. If he can’t actually use any of her mana attacks against her, why is she able to do it when aether is the bigger powerhouse? Also, they both get stabbed and she just keeps on going? I get that Arthur has a core whereas Cecilia doesn’t (although he has 3 cores now) but shouldn’t she be hurting too at least? I always got arthur can get right back up due to his healing abilities due to, again, aether’s influence, but now she can just heal herself that easily as well and just keep fighting? There are still so many points I can touch on but those to me were the biggest two that really ruined this chapter for me.

Duncan Rodgers

Ah Arther's core only sufferd a scratch it didn't break. But even that scratch was enough to stop his powers from working proplery. But the way how many more layers to his core do you think arther has to add to his core before it become the most pure? Mana cores have 6 stages and arther's on his 3trd layer of aether so mabye 3 more layers?

PugSpell

Damn, honestly, although I was expecting this, I’m still surprised the Cecilia, despite knowing the truth, and despite everything that happened, she is still blinded by agronas promise. Like Arthur was ready to find a way to give Cecilia her own body and retrieve Tessia. But as always, awesome chapter, can’t wait for the next one

Zach

Can we stop this bullshit where Arthur keeps looking like a bitch time after time. Aether > Mana. Some how he can’t heal because of mana and all this gets worse and worse. Book 8 was insanely fire because Arthur made quality companions that had great backgrounds we yearned for like a drug addiction. Now we got chul who most could give two craps about. Arthur has made like backwards progress with aether. Which is insanely sad. We saw edicts where he could literally revive people in the mirror rooms. But yet here he is having spent more time helping other characters we could give two craps about also. Crap, Ellie has made more advances in mana hundred fold over Arthur’s advances in aether. Meanwhile this Cecilia has made like what insane progress in mana. So much so she can make the previous gods candies. And old characters like bairon, virion are ghosts and discarded that we miss. Not to mention how much we miss caera. Which at this point we ship hundred times more than Tessia. Because this reincarnation stuff is so gag me bad I hate it. I can’t imagine loving someone to essentially have split personality in which the old one never comes back. Bad taste in my mouth. Atleast glad to see Cecilia and niko haven’t kissed or anything. (Elijah x Tessia) I’d just drop this novel at that point. Can we see Arthur make some progress. I look at solo leveling for example. Can you imagine a chapter daddy-woo didn’t get stronger or better or more badass. No.

Arthur Leywin

I feel you. But solo leveling is much shorter. Giving him a boost again and again is ez there. And I think arthur will get a boost now too. Propably similar to after cicilia lost her core. And I think chul is a great companion as a character. He is an asura and has great potential, but because he lacks real life experience he is not as strong or usefull as he could be. Greatly shown by the author. I kinda wondered why arthur suddenly attacked them, thought somehing shifted but I guess not...

Zenith

Huh

Lucky

QUIT COMPLAINING AND LET TURTLE COOK❗️❗️ 🗣

xroninx

I agree, Chul and Sylvie should have dipped as soon as Cecilia showed up. Arthur and Seris have seen her power to absorb mana, having any mana user is a major liability. I get that Chul and Sylvie wanna be helpful but at that point, helpful is getting tf outta there. Now we have Cecilia able to manipulate aether bc of the mana she stole from Sylvie and as a Mary Sue, she is instantly better at it then Arthur is.

xroninx

Now I’m 100% convinced Regis is a better fight companion then Sylvie is. Let’s look at the history of fights: Arthur and Sylvie against Uto - Loss Arthur and Sylvie against Cadell/Nico - Loss Arthur and Regis against Cadell/Nico - Win Arthur and Regis against Wraiths - Win Arthur alone against Taco -Win Basically, for Art to win, he needs Regis or he needs to be alone. I like Sylvie and I’m glad she’s back but the evidence is right there, he would have won this fight if Regis was subbed for Sylvie. Regis: no mana, has aether, has destruction, can assist in healing Art and moving aether in his body, will call out Art when he’s being dumb Sylvie: has mana, low control over aether, has a suicide healing technique, has mana beams, usually just goes with whatever Art wants to do Basically Sylvie’s entire kit is useless against higher tier enemies, especially Cecilia. Shoulda sent her on a training arc to master that time stop technique before having her fight. I want her to be useful since she’s an og character but currently, I’m liking Regis more.

Fluxxx

Have been a proud Patreon for over a year now, and there were weeks where i just couldn’t wait for the new chapter to get released and when it happened it was the highlight of the week. But at the moment the progression feels extremely slow, even thought, i admit many things happen, in the decisive moments Arthur always dips in the last second, wich leads to only minor plot development. For this fight i would have loved if for example Arthur gained deeper insight in to Spatium (i know he did wich was sick, but didn’t change the outcome of the fight) and would have just teleported a part of the castle, with als the people present to the Aether Realm. This could have leveled the playing field and would give them some time the clear they’re misunderstanding. Whatever happens i am sure that i will finish this novel thought, and in the end it doesn’t matter what people write in these comments, THIS IS TURTLES STORY TO TELL

Michi

Honestly though this chapter might grow on me in time. We shall let turtle cook. Hopefully all of our complaints are just unjustified in the end.

Bernardo De Cabrio

1) You're absolutely right. It is his story to tell. Period. 2) Feedback and critic in any form or shape is always a good idea to share and come back to. In that way, the opinion of people do (to a certain extent) count as a valuable source of said feedback and critic. There are exceptions tho. You already know him...

Bernardo De Cabrio

One potential error. It was never explicitly told that mana can't influence aether. In fact, if I remember correctly (I might be wrong here) the dragons use their mana in conjunction of their inherent ability to perceive and draw aether to influence aether. It is the reason why the djinn and dragons have such a difference in their approach when it comes to aether. One bonds with it, the other forces it with raw power (aka mana, since fully grown dragons have a lot of it) But yes, this chapter did feel off in the power scale category.

Aaron

Negotiation is an honest path for leaders. Arthur fought them hard enough to start negotiating. Then AFT ER they calmed down and started negotiating, grey uses his experience to blow that up? Before any of the mechanical problems of aether/mana, a king would say, ok I got them talking in my terms, let's pursue this route. Rather than randomly throwing away a winning hand to randomly attack all Cecilis subordinates with his one-of attacks instead of her. This was a major flub of a chapter.

sa1Yo

I missed that he got scratched is it said close to where he gets his core struck? It sounds like the core broke, as the effect was similar to Nico’s core breaking. The whole integration thing of Cecilia got me thinking that a core once more might not be what he should be going for. It is unclear how strong the dijin would have been able to get if were they set on becoming strong (in a fighting sense). However I think that Arthur might go absolutely havoc now, dead set on becoming stronger than Cecilia. Perhaps that leads him to a core less state, becoming one with the Aether like Cecilia did with Mana.

sa1Yo

I am glad that we have some more perspective now on how he compared in strength though even if that cost him…

Ryzn

Arthur would’ve won that fight like 100x over if he actually just wanted to kill them and be done with it. At one point he literally had Cecilia in a chokehold. Pretty sure Nico will convince Cecilia she’s in the wrong and they’ll team up with Grey. Bc 100% Nico is on Arthur’s team now that he knows the truth.

Ryzn

Tbh I think a lot of the ppl complaining abt the ‘inconsistencies’ with the events in this chapter are primarily just mad that Arthur didn’t ‘win’ the fight, which is stupid. If you want to read a story where the MC defeats everyone all of the time, go read SL. Also, most people are overlooking the fact that Arthur had several opportunities to kill them during the fight. Just bc he ‘lost’ doesn’t mean he hasn’t made any progress, or that he is weaker than them. While I do agree Cecilia’s character is a half-step short of irredeemable, Nico is most definitely going to side with Arthur from now on. Who knows, maybe the outcome of this encounter will result in a conversation between Nico and Cecilia where she ends up changing her mind and betraying Agrona. Lastly, I feel like some of you guys forget that TM probably reads these comments.. giving your opinion/ offering constructive criticism doesn’t have to be done in such a rude way.

Dwayne

Great chapter Turtle! These complaints are just that. Can’t satisfy everyone. Keep with your story telling. I hate that people don’t get what they want and just complain. The scene written here is really good. I comprehend everything you wrote especially when the fight started. The scenario is played out great and it left me wanting more with the ending of the chapter. I want to see how Arthur and team can regroup, learn and improve on their next battle. What they don’t understand is that Agrona still didn’t get a win in this battle since they haven’t captured or killed Arthur.

LordCruaver

Now Arthur just needs to do the same and learn how to control Aether effortlessly. Plus he needs to take advantage of how primitive and basic Cecilia's actions are. He just tried going direct and made progress only to feel it backfire spectacularly since it was like he stabbed an explosive barrel.

Klaudia Roszak

Ye felt the same reading the comment section. Seems like Arthur’s growth rn is more related to making him a better person, than an overwhelmingly fighter. Just in this chapter, Arthur admitted that his “Gray” side had multiple opportunities to kill Cecilia. But he didn’t, he choose saving rather than killing. Like yeah, we might not like it (for example I started reading this novel bcs of how cold-hearted Arthur was), but that’s his character development, it would be rather boring if he didn’t change for the better or worse.

D3monEmper0r

Tessia needs to die soon! Arthur needs a reason to go all in. This makes No Sense at all the reasoning of Cecilia is basicly Not there so why IS she even fighting...?!

D3monEmper0r

Sylvia ist a mount basicly, she geht's hin to a Fight and she extract him from the Combat Zone...

Jesse Gibson

Hmm 🤔 a whole bunch of emotions are whirling around me and I can’t decide how I feel about all this. I’m not at all surprised that Cecilia all of sudden was able to use dragon mana to manipulate Arts aether, I’m more surprised she hasn’t manipulated outright. I would be extremely upset if that were to happen but considering how things have been going, I just wouldn’t be surprised. I seriously hope it doesn’t go that far but she is the Legacy, so who the hell knows? Sigh. I knew that she had become OP but I didn’t realize just how much at a disadvantage Arthur was until this chapter, it is clear that he is still confined in his imagine of controlling aether. I believe, like the djinn that taught him, that if he could only get himself out of that box he has put himself into, he will be OP and basically an intergrated version of aether because the aether would just move as if he were breathing, naturally. Because unlike mana, aether actually has its own will which to me should make it stronger than mana, even though they have been described as equal by Arthur I feel like this could just be at the level of his understanding at the moment. Which is why he is still stalled in insight in some areas. I seriously hope that because of this battle, he will discover new insights that he hadn’t even imagined and we see Art level up at a rate faster than before. He’s always been good at learning from all these bad situations so I hope-HOPE- this is one of those. Ugh TM, you be killing me. Also, seriously, Cecilia… I just can’t. CANT! @TurtleMe thank you for your hard work and the updates, this was crazy and killed me but I’m ready for the next. Bring it onnnnnnn

Tim

Hm, Im gonna have to read it again. I dont think she used dragon mana, in so much as she just warped the spell by grabbing control of it...not actually casting it...and if thats what you meant, my bad...and then she used that mana to influence the aether...which Im of two minds about...I mean, we know the aether can influence mana, Art does it all the time, so its not a stretch to see the mana act against the aether...I mean, weve seen it in the Wraith fight as well...but what gets me is that even with Cecils control, I find it hard to believe that her will was stronger than Arts...a man who literally swam in lava to perfect his control...what does Cecil have? A natural talent for control...thats it. And thats why I find it hard to believe shes more tempered than Art who lived in battle, compared to a child who died after a handful of safe fights.

Jesse Gibson

@Tim oh I completely agree. I don’t really get how she was able to do so easily but I guess she doesn’t have a set idea on how things are supposed to work so I think it must free up her mind and let’s her just feel it as if it comes naturally, whereas Art has studied and searched and experimented through experience and trial and error to expand his knowledge trying to find the best ways to get control. He should have the advantage but she doesn’t even think about what’s she’s doing and it just happens.. I feel like Arthur will eventually get there too with aether but like the djinn said he may still be slightly stuck in his image of control being similar to mana. And I’m honestly not sure if she took control of it or literally learned and imitated it herself. Here’s the quote: “I winced as the last of the combined magic of Chul and Sylvie swirled into Cecilia’s body. She had absorbed it all. Through Realmheart I could see how her body broke down the lavender-tinged pure mana that Sylvie had projected. The sight sent cold shivers through my body; without a core, the process seemed much faster—almost instant—and much more horrible. ‘She can absorb even formed spells?’ Sylvie thought, aghast. Cecilia’s hungry eyes drank in the sight of purple-tinged mana flowing over her hand and between her fingers—dragon mana. For an instant, she seemed lost in thought, almost…amazed. From the corner of my eye, I saw Chul leap into the air, his fist wrapped in a claw of shaped flames. Cecilia, intent on the mana she’d absorbed from Sylvie, was slow to react.”

Tim

Lol, its fine if you like Tess better...to each their own...but objectively, no, Caera is WAAAAY more interesting...she has a much better personality and ACTUAL growth and acceptance if things she cant change...whereas Tess NEVER changed...she just whined and cried about being weaker than Art...AND she couldnt even follow one simple order that got both Art and Sylvie killed...for all intents and purposes.

Tim

I doubt Sylvies mana had anything to do with it. She just had an overwhelming amount of control so the aether couldnt influence it. Weve seen before that it comes to the will exerted on each that determines which will overcome the other. This is MY problem with it...that Cecil who is a child...has more tempered willpower than a man who has literally lived in two wars and killed millions?

Tim

Hm, I think the perfect ending would have been Cecil and Nico absconding by themselves, promising to THINK about Arts help. This leaves Agrona to pull out HIS full force personally which Leads to Kezess descending upon the world with his combined forces leading Art to drop Agrona, take control of two countries, join with Cecil and Nico in a super rumble vs Epheotus.....I see no corners there.

sa1Yo

Sounds to me like she did not learn to use some Mana which can influence aether, rather that she just grabbed the hilt of the sword and shoved it into Arthur. ( Not literally just comparatively)

Tim

Ah. Youre right, dragon mana. Thanks. Maybe that was what let her see how to press back against aether...not so much learning HOW but utilizing what she had just taken.

Gabe Schmidt

Honestly I don’t comment much, but I’ve been reading a few comments, now not all of them so I cant say I’ve seen everyone’s opinion, but I feel like i’ve seen a lot of disappointment and “let turtle cook” which to me feels like they disliked this chapter and believe that it was set up for future chapters that will be better, and it probably is. Honestly last chapter I did not like, In my opinion it was a bit below par compared the the rest of TBATE, but this chapter on the other hand, I loved, now im not gonna say its one of the greatest chapters in the series, because its not, but I would argue that this is, so far, one of the best chapters or even the best chapter in book 11 so far. Anyway I am exited for next chapter, I will honestly be a bit surprised if the next chapter isn’t Nico or Cecilia, I think that it would be nico over cecilia but i can see if it is cecilia because of Tess.

Jesse Gibson

@Tim yea that’s what I think too. It is a bit frustrating to see her just be op without actually earning it or even understanding it. Cheat skills.. I like it with fav characters but sucks when they are sucky characters haha

CuriousPanda

That is just TM's way of introducing eatheric integration. Once his confrontation with her come to an end, he has to face the survivor of the Angrona vs Kezess bout.

CuriousPanda

You mean... Art has to make a choice: Sacrifice Tessia, or the entirety of his new world. But, when one loves as much as he does, there is sometimes no real difference between the two? But, who says Angrona is going to stop at just this universe!?

CuriousPanda

Don't be too unkind to TM... maybe he is rushing some parts of the story. It is true that this confrontation only seems necessary... or that, the conclusion was a bit forced. 1. I can somewhat see a Cecilia being stronger than Art in some aspects... greater dominion of her sphere of influence than Art can begin to exert in eathersphere... I think I will call it eathosphere. 2. I can explain how Sylvie and Chul are liabilities in a fight against a mana god... they are essentially mana slaves. 3. I can almost accept Cecilia's gullibility... to think that Angrona will send her back!? Is this an extreme case of sunk cost fallacy? 4. But, Nico baffles me... and don't just say they deserve each other. Bonus. Now that Art has an idea what is, how he need to achieve his next evolution... how much time can TM buy him?

Beto

If he had Regis it would’ve been a different story. Cecilia needs to go, she’s a selfish mf. Nico and her are so delusional. What would they even achieve if they go back to earth? Becoming one with mana is super crazy too. She’s super super strong. Strong enough to use dragons mana to deflect even aether. The only good thing that came out of this fight is that Arthur gained a new ability. Next fight he must bring regis, the destruction runs is to valuable to not bring. Also! the new ability Arthur gained has crazy potential! Anyone can correct me if I’m wrong. But his ability is like stabbing a sword through a portal and it appearing some other place ? (If that makes sense?) just imagine Arthur becoming more proficient in this! If he can summon more aether blades like that one dijin, and use that along with his new insight. He would become even more powerful. When Arthur’s core got struck by his own sword… I couldn’t believe it 😭. It was a fatal mistake and blunder on his part . But what I feel like is needed most for Arthur is insight and mastery into his god runes, and into aether itself. someone in the comments said that Arthur is confined into thinking that in order to control aether he needs to “control it”, but the dijin said that’s not how to gain mastery over it. ALSO! For being an full blooded Ausura, granddaughter of kezez and a being capable of manipulating aether… sylvie is helllllla weak. She should’ve crushed the scythes with no difficulty. I understand that there was an illusion being cast in her but cmon. Same for chul but I can cut him some slack sense this is basically his first fight against people besides Arthur. But he’s half asuran and dijin! Maybe art can teach him how to wield aether? BASICALLY the whole gang needs to get stronger. Arthur needs to gain more insight and mastery over all his godrunes Sylvie needs to control her new power and gain insight on that.

Nils

I have to ask my selfe If trutle Just forgot how for example deamaging the Aura of a White core mage for anyone around him was or is that Just Not a Thing anymore or how everybody was Hype as fuck to know what comes after White core Just to never get an answer or how athur just never hast the Power to do Shit when its Not despartly needed. I really Love this novel but i Just dont know anymore nothing seems to make any sense

Sansan

Umm, after white core is integration, what Cecilia achieved….it’s been mentioned multiple times.

Nils

I thought Integration was Something only the legacy was capeable of ?

Carth

Basically Cecil blew it for Tess and we’re never getting her back. Caera supremacy 🔛🔝

BobbyWailordThicc

Integration is something specifically asuras are incapable of. We saw that with the flash backs by the last dnin remnant and from Agrona and kezess. Because they lack the ability to evolve as a species because they are already peak mana manipulators and one with mana literally to the point where they die without it they cannot integrate properly. Humans (/people, referred to as humans in a general term then but included dwarves and elfs atleast) and djin however can live without mana and use mana symbiotically and independently I'm pretty sure. Also integration in general has been used as a term for becoming one with, same for beast tamers and stuff. For integration phase however, asuras are born one with mana reliant on it, so they don't know how to further their relationship with mana.

BobbyWailordThicc

I agree with caera supremacy part. But idk I feel like Cecil prolly blew it a bit with nico here too. Though it never crossed my mind that they were playing the field to protect one another while the other is under agronas control kinda. I thought Cecil knew nico wasn't after she could sense he wasn't affected by the mana anymore.

BobbyWailordThicc

Negotiations were about to blow up though. The only opening he had where Cecilia and nico were against each other was kinda patched when they reaffirmed they were doing it for each other under the assumption the other was under agronas control (which is a lie on Cecilia's part) and Cecilia and nico didn't deserve it at that juncture regardless. And if they can't grow to understand that then that's their fault. Arthur saw Cecilia thinks of this world like a stepping stone, I mean she literally said it. So with them getting back on the same page, and from arts perspective even invalidating Nico's request to save her since she was no longer under agronas control I think this play makes logical sense from a mid fight one slip up lose your comrade, daughter/bond, and own life and not be able to protect anyone you leave behind

BobbyWailordThicc

Yah this chapter and the last were amazing. Imo nearly perfect. It was a mess but on purpose. There is no shot people don't like these i don't understand some of these comments defending it like there were problems or rushed or ECT. No this is amazing and near perfect for the style the fight needs to be. Cecilia has no real motivation besides returning to earth. No reason to doubt Arthur besides his ties to tess, and maybe even is outright rejecting him because of Tess. But it shows very well here, she gaslit nico, even lied and said she thought he was still under agronas control (she sensed he wasn't mind you after absorbing basilisk mana), is lying and manipulating the only person who loved her like Art said. She thinks of this world as a stepping stone, she said so herself, early on too. Then the level of commitment from nico was called into question when he learned the real truth. He could use it as a stepping stone for her if all was true. But she lied to him. So the inconsistencies starting sorting out into incoherent understanding of the entire reason, method, execution, and maybe even goal of all his efforts. But whats even better is that it truly showed the changing of tides in fight. It was a solid balance between diplomacy/discussion and fight. Each time the fight changed pace, the reincarnate trio changed their tune. Changed what they were doing in the fight. Seeking retribution, answers, salvation, revenge, peace. It's obvious that it was choreographed well with the dialogue but maybe that broke some peoples understanding of the entire picture. Furthermore when two of the three parties started being in the same page again, being after nico said he was doing it under assumption she was under agronas control, and again Cecilia lying saying she was doing the same, the door to diplomacy potentially closed and the fight re ignited. Arthur saw this. Those two not being in the same page with nico wanting to help or both being ignorant of real events was his window to helping them. And it was going well, until Cecilia once again manipulated the only man who truly loves her. And that set the pace for the fight to continue, no longer was there a safe window where negotiating was possible as there was not a single party to mediate. And mid fight with the only chance he was, Arthur took his chance seeing that there would be no further justifying their actions, salvation for their deeds especially Cecilia's, or worst of all no further way to save Cecilia from being a weapon since it was her own free will. Her own decision. And she got the one person who could stop that decision back on her side mid fight. So as not to risk everything and everyone he struck. Failed as he did technically. And he went for her one reason to why she was even doing any of this afterward. Of course furthering into the fight it got more confusing and complicated. Arthurs core being pierced, Sylvies mana being used against him. Was the tides of aggression turning. No longer in the fight were they the aggressors but Arthur was. And they retaliated. Though I'm sure next chapter and following will explain further the outcome and just what will happen. Idk the reason people feel the need to defend the chapter it was great. I think it's not let turtle me cook with anticipation for it to get good. I think it's already peak and can only progress further especially since turtleme has been doing great furthering the powers between both sides. And furthering the understanding of the power systems as a whole. And even explaining all of it in depth to the point where we are starting to see into the invisible hand of fate. Idk this shit fire sorry for long spammy post but, I just saw a few comments and got triggered I guess lol thanks for reading if you read this far have a cookie and a great day

Kenneth Evans

I think she is lying about not knowing rather he was being under the influence of Agrona.

Beto

Nico is a fool, he is still gonna take her side since that’s the girl he loves most. He’d sacrifice Arthur for her in a heartbeat. Hopefully he’ll perish along with Cecil

Beto

Facts, Arthur needs to change his view on how aether works

James

No. Grey even remarked that despite her overwhelming power, Cecilia sorely lacks imagination in the way she uses it. Grey has godlike mobility and control over space and he is a far more skilled fighter. He lost because plot, he had everything to obliterate them.

Camo7

This actually helped me clear a few questions about what was going and it now makes sense

Alviii

Comming back here before the next release. I've read many people in the comment section baffled with how Art and Cecil are acting, kinda out of the ordinary and contrary to every progress they've made. Has anyone wondered if Agrona could be at play here? Isn't he known for playing tricks on your mind and basically manipulating people? This chapter defo was a surprise to many people (me as well) and it could be just that but I don't want to exclude other possibilities as well.

Aaron

He used his trump card to attack everyone else before finally attacking Cecile with it, giving her many opportunities to think of how to defend or counter it. Again, even if he believed negotiations wouldn't work and decided he must kill them, killing cecile first makes the most sense if it's being done using a special trick that could end up being countered but is least less likely to be countered on the first timebits seen.

Bernardo De Cabrio

The whole thing about the sovereign being already dead almost screams that Agrona did something. As to what exactly, we don't know.

Robert Jang

Here is my prediction now; after returning to Agrona, Nico will doubt Cecilia and might want to leave Agrona. Agrona, obviously, will not want this and might lead to some feud between Agrona and Cecilia+Nico. I am starting to think the final "big bad" will actually be Cecilia.

El Caso Es

If you've never known anyone like Cecilia with deep abandonment issues that throw logic out the door and let's their emotions rule when they feel cornered you should feel blessed. I hate her too but because it's all too realistic to me. Her story and behavior makes sense as annoying as she is.

FraJuh

incredible... never have i ever read a chapter this good

Gonvas

It's funny that we now know when Nico did all his massacres, killings, ... he was under the influence of Agrona. Though it was still Nico, Agrona's influence definitely played a relevant role in his actions. He got free from such influence and I got the vibes we were getting the groundworks for a redemption. On the other hand, Cecil we knew from the start she was being influenced and manipulated by Agrona. She frees herself and learns the truth. She decides to go all in for Agrona.