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Couple Stuff Feedback (Patreon)

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2023-03-06 01:24:04
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2024-05-08 23:42:46
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Couple Stuff Feedback

  • I liked the story 1427
  • I liked the concept, but the execution didn't appeal to me 57
  • The story wasn't great, but the fats were good 44
  • The story didn't appeal to me 17
  • The character designs were very good 1184
  • The character designs were ok 47
  • I wasn't a big fan of the character designs 4
  • The artwork/paneling was great 1016
  • The artwork/paneling was serviceable for the story 52
  • The artwork/paneling could use some work 6
  • I wish there'd been more focus on the story/development of characters 248
  • There was a good balance of story and fanservice 835
  • I wish there'd been more focus on the fanservice 210
  • It was a good length 388
  • The length could have been condensed 27
  • The length could have been stretched more 808
  • 2023-03-06
  • 6370 votes
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Content

Couple Stuff is done! It's been a fun project, but now it's about time I asked you all what you thought of it. Please be honest, I'll take things constructively and try to take what I can into account for future projects!

So vote on the options you most agree with, and if you have specific feedback you'd like to offer, please leave a comment. I'd really appreciate it.

Comments

Baja Blast

My favorite comic on the internet 🙏 this was a gift salt

Akeno Himejima

A few panels at the start time skipped quite a bit when so much could have been done.. You start at page 5 then immediately do a 3 month skip. Then from that a year later. Page 15, 1 year and 8 months. Then 2 years and 8 months. Whole lot of time skipped when you could have shown and done so much

TsukiSly

I loved it, the comic was wonderful, I liked it so so much

OmegaStreamline

My only real critique is that the 19th and 20th pages jumped ahead so we missed what seemed to have been the most interesting bits of their “fun”. That, and I feel it ended kinda abruptly. Other than that, this has probably been my favorite longer project you’ve done to date

Javier-Belmont

It was certainly nice but maybe you should mention the characters names a bit more next time so they don't feel out of nowhere.

Scott Miller

Extremely cute story

cakefriend

legit it was easily the best weight gain kink comic i've ever read, and i've been around for a hot minute. very cute, sense of character was great, the varied poses and expressions brought a lot of life to the pages. honestly i'd buy a paperback copy of it!

James Duke

You did an excellent job with the story! I enjoyed the characters and the art a lot. It's exactly what I look for in weight gain fiction. I really think you have done some of your best work here. I'd say my only sadness. . .is that it ended!

Kota Wulf

i liked it. would like a 2nd chapter maybe more. just seeing how things go for them and how much bigger they get

Avery

Both story and fan service were absolutely fantastic, i just wished there was some nude parts

Syo

I thought it was great, but the only real comment I have on it is that I wish there were more about how their lives changed with their increased weight! Clothing struggles, door/booth struggles, etc! Aside from that it's been a highlight to see these two grow closer ^_^

Ms. Charlie

I'd move my subscription up 2 additional tiers for more of this story 🥺

Juzza Girl

it was already long and I definitely am not complaining, I consider myself lucky to have read it, but the pacing between the beginning section with one gain and the second section with both felt very different.

WeaponA

Might've been nice to learn a bit more about the characters and their lives outside the story (even just background hints like posters on a wall or a rusty Cadillac in the driveway, etc.). I like that this story didn't beat around the bush, but maybe after that quick start, it could have slowed down in places to show what other hopes, dreams, and pet peeves the characters have.

AhegaoLover

If i was to suggest something I think could be improved upon, I personally feel that a little more emphasis could be put into the amount of food being eaten. To me it seemed that the characters would eat maybe a handful of items, then suddenly appear stuffed, which seemed a little jarring at times. Making it clearer how much the characters ate I feel would make the stuffing scenes better.

Zoey

I really liked it, I think at 20 pages it was a good length without becoming too stretched, tho perhaps a few more pages to fill in some of the time skip gaps would have been good. I love seeing the progression as it goes. My other request, which you did a bit on losing control would be to perhaps include a re-visit to the coverage, https://www.patreon.com/bws/posts?filters%5Btag%5D=Couple%20Stuff but with both of them at there new weight, granted that might be tricky since one of them was on top of the other on the couch but it dose not need to be a exact re-creation. Ether that, or a new pair of images to act as a before and after would be really neat.

B

I'm probably in the minority here but I would have liked a bit of relationship drama (second thoughts about gaining, reassurance, etc), but it would have clashed with the mood I felt this was going for.

jlixirium

I enjoyed the concept, the story, the formatting, and the fats. However, I would have liked there to be more conversations between the characters about the struggles that are inherent of a feedist relationship, coming to resolutions that celebrate the the characters and their fetish. In conjunction, I didn’t like the big time skips — I would have preferred to have seen the wg steps in between 👌 Overall, though: fantastic work, Salt!

ChloPiercer

I absolutely loved it. All I could have asked for are those twin and frequently contradictory things many of us in this fetish must face: I want them bigger and I want it to take longer, lmao. Given that, for me, anyway, there's no ceiling on either of those desires, it's not fair to ask for more than I got. Adored it. Also I want to say that while I understand why other folks would like some drama, as a lesbian feeder, having it go badly for any real length of time would have been a little too close to home for me. Which isn't to say I don't like a little drama, or would be opposed to seeing it in the future. Just that, you know, I'm kinda here to live out a fantasy, not relive something that actually happened to me.

OneDaxSter

One thing I will say. All of it was really great, but the length of it made the development of Shannon seem a little forced. Like, if there was a little more to show her descent down the rabbit hole she herself dug and properly tie it in.

Snowbun

Honestly? No changes. Great story, characters, pacing, art, loved it. 🤍

Hamish Broadhurst-Tynan

I loved it from start to finish, it was an awesome concept and what we got was incredible. My main wish honestly was just more, like seeing more of the steps/intervals in the gaining process, exploring their relationship more, literally just this but more in depth. 10/10

Mr Finnagan

Excellent comic, enjoyed every page, glad to see the Feast for your eyes content is allowing u to create such amazing progressions like this :)

NotEvenAmatueR Streams

I feel like the pacing for the first 15 or so pages were good but then it sort of tumbled it’s way to the end and could have added a couple pages to it

Cory

It’s amazing, I wish it was longer, and I wish there was just a little more focus on making it a little more believable that she’d gain so much so fast or something but I don’t know man, you’re incredible and I love it 🥰

Winfrey Reed

It was very good. I just wish it was longer and that you'd sell printed copies.

Jay Torabi

I liked the comic overall, but i wish more time was spent in the space between being chubby and obese. Great work!

TextileMonster

Thought the blushing was the best part, to be honest. Just because you do blushing SO WELL. For future comics, I'd be interested in seeing other variations, like one where one stays thin, etc.

R B

This may sound like an odd consideration, but one thing that I noticed is that your characters seem to get taller as they gain weight. In this case, since there was such a difference in time and weight between scenes, it feels pretty pronounced. Since they gained significant weight between scenes, it feels pretty apparent.

FlyingHigh1998

Trying to Make this Quick: *Character Designs were good, but not favorites (B - B+) *Story took a little bit to get going starting out (Elevator onward tho, I was hooked, B+) *Storyboarding and Paneling was Really Good (A) *Length...I'm half-and-half on the final act (a jump ahead in time was good, but it felt like if we're going to jump ahead in time, more development or "Things" would have happened in said time jump. Still always appreciate the bigger sizes, but it didn't feel like much happened once we jumped ahead... so either a shorter comic with the early looks, or a longer time to enjoy the later looks...B-) Overall, pretty good, and certainly stands its own in the Feast For The Eyes Series, Thanks for your hard work!

B

One of your best ever. Wholesome relationships are my favorite, and I don't have any complaints about the art/story.

Steelmaker

I really liked this comic all in all the only thing i can kind of criticize is the ending.... It felt kind of abrupt 🤔

Amelia

I really liked the character dynamics! The girls were super cute together, and then the horny competition at the end was amazing.

Idle-Minded

i can't complain about something that feels like what it was created to be.

HamHam

I voted for both it could be longer and that it was a good length because I would have liked more but it ended good still

Zack

This one has got to be one of your best comics yet

Frisky Boots

For a specific comment - I think you jumped too far along, during each time skip. Not neccessarily just in weight, but things like developing into a glutton could have had small scenes all its own. A good compare and contrast could be struggling to finish a stuffing session at one point and then later on absolutely demolishing the same or more without issue. Clothing shenganigans could have been fun additions as well, even if they didn't need to be the main focus. Also, more focus on both of them noticing the other was starting to get pudgy early on would have been nice for pacing - the first time skip is pretty major and skips over a lot of potential moments in terms of both story and fats, and then similarly it goes from "you should gain too" to immediately being big chonky. More focus on the lighter weights and the increasingly rapid speed of it as they get more and more into it/make overeating more and more of a routine, would have made the overall comic more solid by both a story and fetish standpoint. Similarly by the end, more focus on just how big they're both getting or the fact that the gap is closing fast between their two sizes and the feeder turning more and more into the feedee over time.

Daniii (edited)

Comment edits

2023-03-06 09:16:59 I really enjoyed the story 🥰 it was the main reason I joined your patreon!! The blushing and all was too cute but especially the bellies <3
2023-03-06 07:53:46 I really enjoyed the story 🥰 it was the main reason I joined your patreon!! The blushing and all was too cute but especially the bellies <3

I really enjoyed the story 🥰 it was the main reason I joined your patreon!! The blushing and all was too cute but especially the bellies <3

RoosterJacket

Personally I would've preferred if only one of them got fat, but that's not really helpful feedback lol Overall, really enjoyed Couple Stuff and I can't wait to see what's next!

nagatomunch

I think one thing I'd like to see you do is something more akin to a 4-koma? ie: a prolonged series of short comics featuring the same characters. Each comic is self-contained, but they also contribute over time to a single arc.

sad hammerhead

I didn't feel an emotional connection to the story or anything, and the characters weren't developed like your other oc's, but it is probably the kinkiest wg comic I've ever seen. The pacing and dynamic is perfect and the art is (like always) top-tier. I'm usually not a fan of mutual gaining either, but this comic made me forget that entirely.

Keos

I do hope to see them again at some of the even larger sizes you draw!

Michael

I feel like the whole point of the Feast For The Eyes comics is just pure fanservice, right? There’s not supposed to be much of a plot, see Tipping the Scales and Beach Body. Therefore, it maybe wasn’t the best choice to release Couple Stuff as part of the FFTE series. I think it was too long for that, but at the same time it would have needed to be stretched more in order to become its own thing. You may have realized that yourself midway through when deciding to add more pages. I’m complaining at a very high level here, though. I love the two characters, I love their dynamic and I’m glad you already announced that Courtney and Shannon will remain part of the BWS universe cause I definitely want to see their story up until now fleshed out more. Maybe the pacing of their gains also could have been a bit better. Courtney went from having the figure of a model to an USSBBW in what, 3 years? If any future content you decide to do on these two can somehow explain how they managed to pull off that drastic gain, however, that could be super hot.

GDFA1

I absolutely loved it. Just thought the time skips could happen more gradually, or less. It was one of the best comics I've ever read!

Phat94

Definitely your best comic, and the art was fantastic throughout, you should be very proud of this indeed. However, the thing that gave the early comic it's spice was that aspect of opening up about your kink, and the joy of having your partner accept it. Their relationship in the first part was very sweet and well done. I feel like the comic really lost that unique selling point following the mutual gain reveal and the big timeskips.

Jazzflaps

Loved the comic in general. Only thing I'd really wanna change would be making some of the timeskips shorter but that's mostly because I like the comic and want there to be more of it.

Oliver

Loved the concept, and the comic. The characters were great, very relatable. I would have loved to of seen more of a character arc, really get to know the characters. A slow, steady progression of weight over the story would have had a much better impact for me. The constant time skips kinda took me out of the story. After about three years of weight gain I think they were a little too big. It would have been much hotter for me if their sizes were more realistic.

Slashycat

honestly i loved it and wanna see more of them

That one guy

Really loved this comic, but I can definitely think of a few gripes. First of all, I've seen a fair share of wg artists make comics with an actual plot, and you've got the best by a long shot. Many don't really seem to take pacing into consideration, but this was kept concise and the appeal doesn't wear off because of that. Like many here have said I think the timeskips cause problems though, seeing these two grow more gradually would've been something special, especially considering that what we got was so good. Much more positively though these two both have great character designs. Although the short haired one (I am awful about remembering names sorry) If I remember correctly looks a lot like one of your other ocs. Great job on their posing to, really brought out their personalities. As far as paneling goes I thought it was alright. I'm no expert but I think the paneling got worse towards the end, but that might just be because it's a bit difficult to appreciate their size when the panels are so small. And all the full art pages are outstanding as usual. For what this is this is a solid 9/10 and does a really good job of expanding on these characters. Pun 110% Intended

Seasoned Sheldrake

The only real issues I have with it are just personal little things. I like stuffing more than WG so those first few pages were FANTASTIC to me. I do wish there had been a bit more stuffing early on, but I know that you specifically do WG stuff so that was just a little wish of mine, I mean hell, look at what I post on my page lol. Overall, yeah, I liked it a lot. It's what initially got me to join your Patreon in the first place :)

Chilliam Fuck block

Idk what everyone else is saying but I adore this comic. I used to feel bad about having a fat fetish, and content like this reminds me that it has a place in the outside world.

GekkoV

I personally thought it was a little rushed and a bit too long at the same time. The feeding hits the ground running and doesn't let up, which isn't bad in and of itself, but I was never sold on the characters' romantic chemistry. So despite its length, the only returns I felt were meaningful were the fanservice.

Splerm

Characters: The designs are wonderful, and Courtney has a lot of uniqueness to her with her hair highlights. The facial expressions and poses clearly showed that Courtney was more outgoing and Shannon was more timid. The biggest complaint I have are the names, as they’re never mentioned anywhere throughout the story and were only mentioned outside of the material. I had to look up the name of the red head before typing this. Even a small edit of a speech bubble within the first pages would go a long way in fixing this problem (“Are you really sure you want to do this Courtney?” “Don’t worry Shannon, I’ve been thinking about it more since we talked.”). Story: The story started off fairly strong and wanted me anticipating the next page. We knew it’d be a stuffing story but even after the phrase of “Let’s try it!”, it still wasn’t clear who would be feeding who, Love the little detail of Shannon fitting in the butterfly shirt that Courtney was now too big for near the end. After the midpoint of the comic after Shannon’s stuffing, the story seems to just rapidly skip ahead. It’s hard to pinpoint /why/ the story feels like it picks up the pace as we had time skips in the beginning as well. It might have more to do with just only having one page of Shannon being fat before skipping again to where she’s even more obese, and not getting enough attention to her gain as we did with Courtney. So one or two more pages of dates or outings might have made it more even. As far as the last page, the story just sort of... ends. Which is fine, but the dialogue and images make it appear like there’s supposed to be more after you turn the page. Although it’s hard to think of how else it could have ended since the main end goal is a simple concept for them to just be fatter, rather than an overaching plot like Sammy’s acceptance of being big. Personally, would have loved to see one or two panels of how exactly the extra fat affects them. Ripping an old dress, squeezing in a seat, etc. But again, that’s more of a personal preference and not a knock on the story. Though I think something like that could have played well since Shannon was clearly into this and Courtney seemed to enjoy egging her on. Length: The length is perfect, and I hope that your future comics go at or near the 20 page mark. It wasn’t too short to where it felt like a short updating progression picture and it wasn’t too long that it overstayed it’s welcome. Even with all the minor criticisms I have, this is still one of the best WG comics currently out there. Looking forward to the next project.

Brand Mark

The design of the characters and the story of how they got fat was very good, but I honestly thought you were going to conclude with a time jump and put Shannon and Courtney on the couch after a few years as a reference to the place where it all started, second criticism, is that those names were missing because I am a reader who likes to know who is who to develop a love and feeling for the character, from there on it was very well developed but with a conclusion that could be better.

bws
>>103397294

I see what you mean! Initially I had planned to not give the characters names, but I ended up getting too attached to them midway through the project and wanting to name them.

bws
>>103397498

I appreciate it! I plan on having these two pop up from time to time in the future, so you can look forward to seeing their story continue!

bws
>>103397617

Glad you liked it! You may get your wish someday, I plan on having the characters pop up again from time to time.

bws
>>103397695

Yeah, I kind of laser focused on big steps in their relationship, and didn't really stray too far from that into their lives outside of those moments. I plan on having the characters pop up again from time to time, so I may explore these kinds of situations more!

bws
>>103397731

Interesting! Care to elaborate on how they felt different, if you can?

bws
>>103398033

I see where you're coming from and I agree that's an area that can be improved on. I wish I was better at adding those kinds of background elements, but it definitely isn't my strong suit XD I'll try to work on it more in the future!

bws
>>103398235

I definitely noticed this myself in hindsight. I'm not sure exactly how to accomplish this tbh, but I'll try to work on it more!

WeaponA
>>103398033

No worries! Given how prolific you are, I'm sure you have to zip pretty quickly from one thing to the next. I'm looking forward to seeing more of these two down the line, though, and gradually exploring more of their layers, like your other OCs. :)

bws
>>103398589

Thanks for the feedback! Question though, what kind of time skips would you have found more preferable? Some amount of timeskip is necessary to fit the progression in a reasonable amount of pages, but I'm curious about what length would have worked better for you.

bws
>>103399088

Thanks for your perspective on the matter! Conflict can be fun sometimes, but yeah, ultimately these stories exist for the purpose of fantasy. I'll be sure to keep that in mind going forward!

bws
>>103399660

Thanks for the feedback! I can see where you're coming from, I'll try to keep this in mind!

Jared Kardos

This story was what convinced me to join the Patreon so I could get the story sooner, so needless to say I liked it a lot. :D I can agree with some of the critiques, like showing more of the characters outside the fetish and skipping a little too much especially at the end. I am glad to hear that we'll see more of these characters, though, and I would love to see more of those times in-between those skips where things can be further fleshed out.

bws
>>103400124

I'm glad you liked it! A common criticism seems to be the big time skips, so I'll try and keep that in mind!

bws
>>103400693

Thank you! Yeah, the FFtE stuff has been nice for experimenting with different ideas, I'm glad you like the concept :)

bws
>>103402141

I appreciate the criticism, do you think it would be possible to elaborate a bit more on why you think it tumbled at the end? What do you think didn't work about it? Thank you!

bws
>>103402252

Thanks! Yeah the gain was fast, showing a bit more of how hard she was trying to gain might have helped that a bit. I appreciate the criticism!

bws
>>103403313

Thank you for the criticism! I can see where you're coming from. There were a lot of very big jumps. Still, glad you liked the comic!

bws
>>103404077

That's a compliment I've never gotten before, thank you very much! And don't worry, I'll be exploring plenty of different dynamics in the future, I'm sure.

bws
>>103404693

I see! This is a thing I try to avoid, so I'll try and keep an eye out for this in the future. Thanks for your honest criticism!

snilloc422

Story: Enjoyable. Length: Great. Characters: Great. Down the road I would love to see some more follow up pages with them! Not necessarily getting bigger, just more of everyday stories of them, being large and flirty, maybe going on a date or the inevitable beach episode. lol

bws
>>103405399

Thanks for your detailed feedback! I'll try to take it into consideration in the future!

bws
>>103411567

Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad that while you wanted more, you felt satisfied with what the comic offered.

bws
>>103412218

Thank you for the detailed feedback! I'm curious though, is the gap between them closing at the end the impression that the story gave off? Because that wasn't the intention, and that's why it wasn't focused on. The intention was for them both to be continuing to gain at a fairly even pace with each other.

R B
>>103404693

And that's why you're such an amazing artist! Appreciate you for sharing all your amazing works!

ShoreMcLoving

I would like to see more nudity lol

bws
>>103413483

Thank you! I really appreciate you sharing your opinion!

bws
>>103414554

I appreciate the feedback! The intention of this comic was to focus more on the fanservice than compelling characters/story, so I guess for you it worked as intended lol XD

bws
>>103415639

I really appreciate the detailed feedback! I understand where you're coming from with the criticism about it not seeming to fit with FFtE or on its own. The intent for FFtE is for it to be heavily focused on the fanservice, but it's also there for experimenting with different ideas, and this one kind of grew beyond the original intention. I'm hoping by doing more with the characters in the future it will feel more like it stands on its own! And regarding the speed of the gain, I can see what you mean and I've got a couple ideas that might help flesh that out, so I'll probably do something with that at some point.

bws
>>103415749

I'm glad you really liked it! The time skips seem to be the most common criticism, so I'll try to work on that in the future!

bws
>>103416154

Thanks for the feedback! I know it might be tough, but do you think you could try to elaborate more on what made it different? Because I'm struggling to understand what you feel changed.

bws
>>103425315

Thanks very much for the feedback! I'm glad you really liked the comic. The time skips are a common criticism, so it's definitely something I'll be considering more carefully in the future. Regarding Shannon's character design, which character do you think she looks a lot like? If you don't remember the name, if you could describe them by their hair color that would help. Thanks for the feedback on the paneling as well. I'll have to go back and look over the pages myself, but from memory I think the pages may have become more cramped. Paneling is a very important aspect of these comics to me so I really appreciate being told where it may be lacking. Thanks again!

bws
>>103426492

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you were still able to enjoy it despite it not being as much to your personal tastes!

bws
>>103460967

Thanks for the feedback! I'll consider it for the future.

bws
>>103474324

Thank you for the very thorough response! In regards to the names, that's a bit of an odd situation because I didn't even name the characters until over halfway through the comic's production. With FFTE projects I don't go in planning names or personalities for the characters beyond what is necessary, because I try to focus on the fanservice elements. However I do understand this criticism and if I ever release this comic on another platform in bulk, I probably will take your advice and slip the names in early on. I understand the criticism around the pacing, and it's also something I kind of noticed at the time while I was working on those pages. Unfortunately, I think it was a symptom of this originally being conceptualized as a much shorter project and when I decided to make it a longer comic, a lot of scenes were added/extended in the early portion but not as much in the latter. Regardless, it's something I'll try to work on more in the future. In regards to your personal wants, those are the kinds of things I would like to do with them in the future with supplementary pages and illustrations. So I hope you can look forward to those sometime in the future! Thanks again for the critique!

bws
>>103492802

Thanks for the feedback! Yes, those criticisms were quite common, so it's things I'll be keeping an eye on with future projects. Still, I'm glad you liked the comic and are looking forward to what I do with the characters in the future! Fleshing out some of those areas is something I'd definitely like to try and do.

Glowparrot

i loved it, i think it's some of your best work to date! my only critique is totally subjective, and that's that the last few pages made me hope for just a little more greedy messy stuffing at the end, the two of them really turned into insatiable piggies at the trough. all in all i think it's wonderful though and your characterization and artwork is stronger than ever

bws
>>103397231

It wasn't mean at all! I appreciate the feedback, and am glad you still liked it for what it was!

Hedonismbot

Personally thought the pacing was fine - time skips were a little jarring, but I've always felt that timeskips are fine as long as you add some build up to any reveal for a timeskip. Maybe a just a few panels hinting at the next big weight before the actual reveal (close in shots, thumping footfalls, etc.) As for character's arcs, while I think it was cute to watch them gain together and I can see the teasings of Shannon also gaining with Courtney before she fully indugles, but it initially felt the story was setting up Shannon coming into her own as a feeder and that kinda being the central arc of her story. Being this supportive figure to someone who's willin to indulge her kink, and the confidence she grows from that, which we certainly saw towards the end, but I think didn't necessarily need her gaining as well, you know what I mean? I feel like Courtney, with that bigger ego, would enjoy all that attention on her and, in turn, enjoy how much it excites her partner to see the difference intheir sizes grow. Their personalities are great though and it's lovely to see a lesbian couple that is so open not only in their relationships, but with each other and their feelings, wanting to support each other on a journey. You've always done so well with kink, so there's really nothing to complain about in the fanservice department, and your stories, while short, always hit the right notes for fun and light. And if you chose to go darker, or keep it light, I think you'd excel either way~

Michael
>>103415639

Cheers for taking the time to respond! You know you've created something incredible when the only criticism that most people have is that it's too short and the gain/pacing should have been slower, even though everyone wants to see your characters grow huge. I can't wait to see what ideas you come up with for these two!

Tinamyte

I feel the ending was a tiny bit sudden

Phat94
>>103416154

I would say the first part felt more "real" to me? There was a lot of interactions between them outside in the real world, a lot of discussion of their feelings towards each other, along with a steady sense of growing fatter and growing more comfortable with the kink. It could be just me. I did enjoy the ending with them both lovingly calling each other weird. Rereading the whole thing just confirms how much I appreciate this comic :)