Shine page 505 (Patreon)

So I really love this page but also it doesnt quite hit as perfectly as I would like. Ive had this page done for over a week and just haven't quite managed to get the text right, but maybe it's all in my head and time is up as it's friday and it needs to be posted.

That last panel is fun to imagine but yeah. would be mortifying in real life hahaha

https://www.dropbox.com/s/z2gjvioosedcefs/pg505.png?dl=0