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Clunky transition page.  

I always know what the sections of shine need to be and have those parts fleshed out, but I never really know how to get from one chunk to the next chunk

As I was explaining in the patreon group yesterday (which is here if anyone who isnt there wants to be there)

https://t.me/+UrEEA3PduxtmZGU8

So yeah this is super clunky but it gets us there, so sorry for the brute force LOL so have this page of Shine

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2fqe2vxzlfu3zvy/pg489.png?dl=0

Comments

Anonymous

To be fair, I kinda have that same problem too

Anonymous

Idk why I read the narration text in the voice from Stanley parable

Sicle_Family

To be fair if she told Elly she might be there swinging a rolling pin

Manigeitora

I absolutely love Manda and Lure in the center panel!

Anonymous

I dont think it seems to chunky. The flow works just fine :3

SpringGear

hehe very cool page

Anonymous

I like it! It definitely provides some good context to the next segment and gives a bit of a ‘recap’, which is nice! :)

Anonymous

What about the surprise after getting 3 stars? https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50591211