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so here is the original https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6847701 which Ive tidied up in the new version.  I think this is one of the first pages where i think that whilst the art is considerably better in the redone version.  theres more life in the original.  It was one of my main fears of redrawing this comic that I sanitize it and I think this page shows a bit of that that whilst the art is better the life in the art isn't the same.  I'll have to keep that more in mind going forward.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/darpsou3b2af6gl/102.png?dl=0

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Anonymous

I want a place nearby that's like this but meant just for us. I realize there'd be next to no demand for it but I still want it. Kids these days get all the cool things.

squiggle

quite often these sorts of places have like an adults only night once in a while so its worth keeping an eye out for stuff like that

Anonymous

ohhh i would love to visit such a place once... or more often ^^;

Anonymous

Oh I so agree with that because I want more places where we littles can be ourselves without being judged by other people as well!!

Anonymous

🤔 anyone interested in investing into a abdl version of chuck e cheeses?

Anonymous

Honestly I like both renditions. I think I see what you mean with the ‘life’ in the art, I do think the expressions are better defined in the newer version. I think it might be in part to the perspective change.. the new angle didn’t lend to Gemma turning around fully like she appears to be in the original. Although her expression is more subtle in the new version, which would likely be more accurate as to not make Paul suspicious :P The play area is also much bigger, maybe a few extra kiddos would have filled some of the gap. Just some thoughts :> As always, well done <3