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Forever Summer Chapter 35.3 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-03-14 17:57:42
Imported:
2022-03

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Hello, hello~ and here's the last part of chapter 35! I hope you enjoy this chapter, hehe. And for the next, I don't know if I can finish it by Monday, but if I can't, I'll let you guys know. 🙂


As always, enjoy reading!

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OhioOkie

I like this showing of Rika's conflict. There are two places on Saturday night you used "Rika come to live". I think you meant "Rika come to life". The first is near the beginning of her on the bed and the later as she thinks of changing near the end of the night.

Omagathief

Oooo, more brainwashing by repetition 🤔😂. You poor fool Raku as more and more of your original personae is stripped away

AshleySage

Your comics make Monday better!

Conor

Love the series. I'm just trying to help you make the series be as great as possible, these are some mistakes I noticed: Page 3: "I heard a rumor that you're in our school as me, umm what's your name?" - "me" doesn't make sense here. Page 20: "Yeah... But I think you'll get through, Rika-Chan!" - Will sound more natural as "Yeah.. but you'll get through this, Rika-chan!". Page 13: "I overheard you talk with Aiko-san on the other day" - More natural as "I overheard your talk with Aiko-san the other day". Page 17 "additude" should be "attitude" Page 19: "Rika story" - "Rika's story" Page 20: "I have to bring rika to live myself"- "life" instead of live. Page 26: "The more you used to this..." "you're" instead of "you". But great work as usual!

Arawn93

Soon gonna be the narcissistic arrogant queen bee of the school

MyMoonlly
>>79796236

It's all good, because he's just acting... that's all, huhu 😉😉😉

MyMoonlly
>>79799416

Wow... so many errors even with my proofreading, haha. Thank you very much for catching these errors, Conor~ I'll fix it as soon as I can. 😉

Jadyn

I really hope these lessons involve Rika starting to flirt back with the boys. It must be suspicious if the beautiful model Rika isn't interested in anyone. A gorgeous girl like her has to keep up appearances and go out all the time right? 🤭

Conor
>>79799416

No problem! Btw there are apps and browser extensions like Grammarly that will check your script for grammar issues for you. They're handy and easy to use.

toni case
>>79827008

no no and hell no..love between girls is best💕if one is a trans girl even better💋😍💖