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The Club

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Description: The Club is a furry erotica comic featuring Hibiscus the hyena. This is a mixture of animation, comic and image sequences written and developed by Jay Laughie. The method of presentation uses all three types of presentation listed to encourage artistic diversity, reduce work load and inspire creativity. The purpose of this document is to outline the sequence of events and the method of which to present each event to the audience in the most sensible and arousing matter. My hope is to divide the project into five sub categories. Plot, Scene, Character Introduction, Engagement and Climax. The details of each will be listed below. Including sub category details that are to be added.

Plot; Presentation method: Comic (Rudimentary animation?)

This opening scene presents hibiscus at the end of the day, sweaty and exhausted from a day of work (occupation still unknown). She gets home to find Carrie the lynx (an old known character) knocking on her apartment door. She invites her to a new club that just opened up (a secret one no one seems to know about). Hibiscus protests at first, saying it sounds sketchy. Tries to slam the door on her. Carrie catches the door, says there will be cute boys (and free food). Hibiscus begrudgingly accepts the invitation.

Scene; Presentation method: Large image comics; Comics

This section sets the stage for the oncoming animation. It displays the characters in their clothing, the primary focus in these pages will be the background and the culture of the club. The first large image is of the building, which is hidden in an ally with a downward staircase leading underneath an upscale bar. The second image will be of the inside, the girls will be at the forefront of the image passing security clearance while the rest of the club is sprawled out in front of them. In order to reduce the workload of this image I will be consisting the majority of the characters to be silhouettes with some detailed characters to add depth.

Character Introduction; Comic (rudimentary animation?)

The following page will be close ups of individual characters, revealing them as scantily clothed or almost entirely naked. This is also where we present 2 additional characters, Mike and Devin who are friends with Carrie. These characters are all fully clothed. Mike and Devin are standing next to a beer pong table. It is soon revealed that the game is strip pong. The loser has to give into the others demands. The girls lose, the following events proceed:

Engagement; Animation, broken down as follows:

· It’s demanded that hibiscus show her ass to the public. She embarrassingly and reluctantly hops one leg up on the table. Then grins, and shakes her ass at the viewers(in progress). 

· (Inter scene Closeup)Devin spreads hibiscus’s ass and gives her asshole two long, slow licks. 

· (Hibiscus’s reaction, facial closeup) a gasp and a smile

· (Undercarriage view) Pseudo-penis erection, leaving her ass as the only entrance

· Above view, pushing penis into her anus.

· Wide shot 3/4ths pose ass facing the viewer, penetration in full, view ghost cock, thrusting.

Climax; Animation

· (Undercarriage View) Carrie garbs hibiscus’s pseudo penis hard and begins rubbing and licking it

· (Face view) Hibiscus’s eyes roll back

· (Undercarriage view) Pulsating hot orgasm, Carrie’s head is now held away still gripping hibiscus’s cock. Devin is cumming in hibiscus’s ass.

· Final scene. Wide shot Hibiscus flips over on the table pseudo penis retracts. (Whose next?)

Side Note, under carriage perspectives must have full view of penetration.

Possible music added, sound effects, no voice actor available. Estimated completion 3 months.

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