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As of today, the old links will stop working. You can find the previous version of the story at this download link up to chapter 36.

Chapter 1 - This one is mostly unchanged but there are some backstory bits I tweaked.

Chapter 2 - Starting off with small changes.

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6 

Chapter 7 

Chapter 8 

Chapter 9

Chapter 10 

Chapter 11 

Chapter 12 

Chapter 13 

Chapter 14 

Chapter 15 

Chapter 16 

Chapter 17 

Chapter 18 

Chapter 19 

Chapter 20 - At this point the story is moving in a totally new direction.

There is much from the old story I will keep or re-use, editing it to my new needs, but more on that as I get to it. As of now, everyone's fate has been altered in some way.

Comments

Marcus Thompson

Well the first 10 chapters are pretty great! I’m liking the changes that you’ve implemented so far 👌🏾

Devilnaga

Looking forward to reading it.

Marcus Thompson

I read the rest of it and it has been fantastic. It seems like every time you have to make adjustments the story feels more polished. I like that all of the characters have a definitive personality and that all of them are at risk of being gurgled. There were quite a few cliffhangers that were killing me, but in a good way. Just makes me look forward to the next chapter lol