Cordelia's Accidental Harem - Patreon Poll Story (Patreon)

Alright, here it is! I'm not gonna sugar coat this one fellas, I'm not very proud of this one. I genuinely thought about maybe not posting it. It's not necessarily straight up bad, just like generic and a tad bit bland. A big issue is I wasted too much time and inspiration on the setup. Also it's a bit more of an idea that takes a lot of time and effort, so that didn't help. But the main thing is I think I just lost the inspiration for the idea. I was probably real into it at the time, but since it won the fire has died I don't remember. 

I've been worrying over whether or not I would be able to salvage this for a while. On the one hand, I think if I can give it a little bit more time and add some more scenes, it would be a tad bit more special. On the other hand, I kinda wanna move on to other projects. I've actually already started working on the CYOA story, and I think it's going really well! Might have that done for this week perhaps. So I've decided to leave it up to you guys, since it was a poll idea in the first place. Should I keep going and try to improve the story, or just move on to other stuff?