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WDYT: Immersion (Patreon)

Published:
2023-02-04 08:00:01
Imported:
2023-02

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Immersion is now available to all Patrons on the Calendar & Exclusive Library Post, and I want your feedback! Please vote in the poll and leave a comment below with any thoughts you may have on the comic, good or bad. I really want to be better so I'll take any criticism you may have, but please try to keep it constructive.

  • Green: "I liked it!"
  • Yellow: "It was fine."
  • Red: "I did not enjoy it."

So... What Did You Think of Immersion?


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mpop

Where? I just checked and I can’t find either pdf or link to mega named ”immersion”

Steve

That story was an incredible ride. Well done!

TotesNotThea

When is the next chapter with a new patient? I feel this is one that could run forever just by getting new patients into the practice.

mpop
>>101155258

It appears on browser but in the app it still shows the jan19 version of the post. Strange.

Vaultdweller101

I liked the concept and loved the character models. The only thing I would’ve liked to see different is an actual look at the direction Kelsey has chosen to take her life instead of her just describing who she wants to be. I find your comics that end showing the good consequences of the events that transpired to be much more satisfying vs the ones that kinda just end with the characters saying who they are. Of course, that is just my opinion. Sorry to write a book. Overall though I thought it was great.

Bob Fink

This was a totally awesome comic, and great to see Darci again.

Anonymous

I ended up really liking. At first wasn't fully sure where it was going so I didn't like but as time elapsed you really fleshed out the story and it was awesome

Kaffeyette Lektor

I liked it. The characters were well constructed and I'm sure people struggling with long-term denial are as frustrating as Tyson was - I'm sure I am just as frustrating in that situation - so I think as much as that aspect was a bit annoying, it's probably bang on the money, despite repeatedly having to crowbar everything out of him. That was a bit repetitive. Perhaps tricking him into saying things sometimes, instead of nagging / pleading every time might provide more variety in dialogue. There wasn't any clue of his internal TG feelings from the dialogue or his appearance, so that seemed a bit contrived from what went before, and Darci seemed to just pluck that out of the blue. Obviously, she can see what we can't, but it would be good if there were some clues that we might see or not see, until we looked in a different way. (Of course, we know it's going to happen in some way, but some subtle 'tells' might be fun - Oestre eggs.) The surprise inclusion of Darci was actually a huge positive and I think it made the whole comic better, especially for those who were familiar with 'Powers', and even more especially since we saw the good side of Darci this time. I'm still curious how the Darci-Pari thing works. I thought Darci looked amazing but sometimes, because her hair was so short and her body so full, it made her head look a bit undersized in some frames. I really loved her hair, but maybe, since she is so full-figured, a more full hairstyle might balance out her look a bit better. (or maybe, I just need to let go of the eighties, but I'm not ready to do that yet - plays Culture Club's 'Do You Really Want To Hurt Me' one more time). Her eyes seemed a bit pale compared to the strength of all of her other colouring too. I just notice because eyes are my 'thing' (one of). And Kelsey's outfit in the picture above is just gorgeous - Go the '80s!

Anonymous

I really enjoyed the psychological approach of the story. Too much of TG fiction is now I have big boobs and I’m horny so I am going to have sex. This was a refreshing change. I believe your next story should be about a man who doesn’t want to be a woman, but wants to understand why he is a failure with women. So Darcy let’s him become mentally and physically the women who rejected him at the moment when the relationship went south. He will even get to find out what one of his crushes wanted in a man and get to really know what it is to feel like a woman. When he becomes a man he again he will have learned what he needs to do to be a success in dating women. Keep up the good work.

Kaffeyette Lektor
>>101259190

That's a similar premise to a story I'm writing, but mine is the opposite. A ladies' man is forced become the women he used at the time he used them, so he learns his own character flaws, how to treat people better and becomes a better person. As a leader it helps him to win a victory and save his people, whereas his former self would have lost and everyone would have died.